for Why Blue roses?6/12/2012 c1 
7emilymai101
I really like this story. It's a cute little fic. But there are a few spelling and grammatical errors. I can fix that if you would like me to and send the story back to you by email. If you would like me to just inbox me on here with your email in it. But put spaces in the email otherwise it won't show up.
7emilymai101I really like this story. It's a cute little fic. But there are a few spelling and grammatical errors. I can fix that if you would like me to and send the story back to you by email. If you would like me to just inbox me on here with your email in it. But put spaces in the email otherwise it won't show up.
7/30/2011 c1 Iseria4
Sure...
the idea... is good, the story... is good, but your conjections are no good, and your way of using too many . and , is plain and simple annoying. STOP KILLING YOUR MASTERPIECE!
It's brilliant, but you've got something to work... on, got that...? :P -_^
Sure...
the idea... is good, the story... is good, but your conjections are no good, and your way of using too many . and , is plain and simple annoying. STOP KILLING YOUR MASTERPIECE!
It's brilliant, but you've got something to work... on, got that...? :P -_^
6/2/2011 c1 6magyk-celte
Hello,
I very like your story with Yamato and Ren.
The little story with the blue roses are so kawaï
6magyk-celteHello,
I very like your story with Yamato and Ren.
The little story with the blue roses are so kawaï
1/21/2011 c1 Lealan
Haha, thanks a lot, Joy XD
Just like Kriesha said, it is a bit corny. (peace :))
Nanunuod kapala ng Gokusen? Bakit ayaw mo gamitin yung characters sa Gokusen I? Mas guwapo si Shin~ (joke)
Anyways, for the actual review, this story was short, simple, and sweet. I find the notion of Yamato giving Ren roses rather touching, and I'm surprised at the color he chose. Did you know that blue roses mean someone impossible to get, someone unattainable? I suppose it signifies Yamato's love that he thinks is one-sided, unrequited.
Though I do hope that from now on, he sends Ren other colored roses if he wants the relationship to last, yeah? Besides, blue roses are fake. They are just genetically altered white roses :O
Another thing is, while Yamato's feelings were painfully obvious from the start, Ren's feelings certainly wasn't. There was no indication that he returned Yamato's feelings (okay, so there probably was, and I'm ignoring it, but..!). But a hint would have been nice? Maybe?
Erm, I ran out of things to review.
I tried my best, really, I did. But I think I just ended up spouting nonsense in your review page. Terribly sorry about that, I swear I'll try my best next time. In the mean time, keep up the good work :)
I'm cheering for you all the way.
By: ?
(Props to you if you guess who I am, though I guess you know it's me XD)
Haha, thanks a lot, Joy XD
Just like Kriesha said, it is a bit corny. (peace :))
Nanunuod kapala ng Gokusen? Bakit ayaw mo gamitin yung characters sa Gokusen I? Mas guwapo si Shin~ (joke)
Anyways, for the actual review, this story was short, simple, and sweet. I find the notion of Yamato giving Ren roses rather touching, and I'm surprised at the color he chose. Did you know that blue roses mean someone impossible to get, someone unattainable? I suppose it signifies Yamato's love that he thinks is one-sided, unrequited.
Though I do hope that from now on, he sends Ren other colored roses if he wants the relationship to last, yeah? Besides, blue roses are fake. They are just genetically altered white roses :O
Another thing is, while Yamato's feelings were painfully obvious from the start, Ren's feelings certainly wasn't. There was no indication that he returned Yamato's feelings (okay, so there probably was, and I'm ignoring it, but..!). But a hint would have been nice? Maybe?
Erm, I ran out of things to review.
I tried my best, really, I did. But I think I just ended up spouting nonsense in your review page. Terribly sorry about that, I swear I'll try my best next time. In the mean time, keep up the good work :)
I'm cheering for you all the way.
By: ?
(Props to you if you guess who I am, though I guess you know it's me XD)