for Sailor Moon S:Like The Diamond She Is11/3/2011 c11 Nascardrivers2
Can you please start Sailormoon S: Ash the Forever. Can you have a lot more romance between Ash and the Scouts.Can you please have Lola survive and end up in the hospital and ends up losing some of her memory like what happended to Lita but not as bad.You can't just kill her off and I know it's your story but she can be a huge help with the scouts and switch sides from bad to good and try to start her life over and make a fresh start and besides she knows the Profs plans and about Project Ruby and Ashes pokemon. Can Mina and the others not have to fight as much and have more fun like the beach, an amusment park, the mall, a fair,a sports game,go camping,go fishing,go bug catching, ice skateing, or just hang out.Please start the story soon.
Can you please start Sailormoon S: Ash the Forever. Can you have a lot more romance between Ash and the Scouts.Can you please have Lola survive and end up in the hospital and ends up losing some of her memory like what happended to Lita but not as bad.You can't just kill her off and I know it's your story but she can be a huge help with the scouts and switch sides from bad to good and try to start her life over and make a fresh start and besides she knows the Profs plans and about Project Ruby and Ashes pokemon. Can Mina and the others not have to fight as much and have more fun like the beach, an amusment park, the mall, a fair,a sports game,go camping,go fishing,go bug catching, ice skateing, or just hang out.Please start the story soon.
9/5/2011 c11
9NUTCASE71733
...DAMN. What a way to go at the end there. Lola didn't deserve that one bit.
Glad Infernape's alright, but this makes me fear what'll happen with Torterra, Buizel, and Staraptor.
And I'm eager for season three XD.
9NUTCASE71733...DAMN. What a way to go at the end there. Lola didn't deserve that one bit.
Glad Infernape's alright, but this makes me fear what'll happen with Torterra, Buizel, and Staraptor.
And I'm eager for season three XD.
9/5/2011 c11 Helenlor
Yay, you updated, this is my favorite crossover story. I'm glad that infernape is back to normal. I sure hope that Ami and Rei are alright. I'm really impressed by your writing. It was nice to see what a semi-evil minion was thinking about at their last moments. I'm guessing that Ash goes to the future either alone or with Rini.
Yay, you updated, this is my favorite crossover story. I'm glad that infernape is back to normal. I sure hope that Ami and Rei are alright. I'm really impressed by your writing. It was nice to see what a semi-evil minion was thinking about at their last moments. I'm guessing that Ash goes to the future either alone or with Rini.
9/5/2011 c11
69Batthan
Wow... Ash has Infernape back, but now he has to hide since now the different citizens has seen his face and his Pokemon. And now Lola is gone. I'll look forward to the next sequel: SAILOR MOON S: ASH THE FOREVER!
69BatthanWow... Ash has Infernape back, but now he has to hide since now the different citizens has seen his face and his Pokemon. And now Lola is gone. I'll look forward to the next sequel: SAILOR MOON S: ASH THE FOREVER!
9/5/2011 c11
27Aoi Hyoudou
Glad that Ash got his Infernape back. ^_^
Wow, the season is already over and now the third season is in the making. Funny how the next season is called Ash The Forever! lol xD
27Aoi HyoudouGlad that Ash got his Infernape back. ^_^
Wow, the season is already over and now the third season is in the making. Funny how the next season is called Ash The Forever! lol xD
9/1/2011 c10 Nascrdrivers2
Great chapter so far.Somehow I know this plan is going to backfire on Lola and the Death Busters. Ashes two Pokemon should learn new moves so he can defeat his capured Pokemon and get them back.Even if Ashes Pokemon are smaller they can still defeat the even if the foe is at monster size.It may be at monster size but it still has weak points which should be good enough to defeat it and for Ash to steal and/or take it back from the Death Busters which should return it back to its normal size.
Great chapter so far.Somehow I know this plan is going to backfire on Lola and the Death Busters. Ashes two Pokemon should learn new moves so he can defeat his capured Pokemon and get them back.Even if Ashes Pokemon are smaller they can still defeat the even if the foe is at monster size.It may be at monster size but it still has weak points which should be good enough to defeat it and for Ash to steal and/or take it back from the Death Busters which should return it back to its normal size.
8/24/2011 c10
9NUTCASE71733
Oh god, King Kong Infernape! Now that's a scay thought. Nice work. And the idea of Trista becoming a Diamon is a very interesting idea too.
9NUTCASE71733Oh god, King Kong Infernape! Now that's a scay thought. Nice work. And the idea of Trista becoming a Diamon is a very interesting idea too.
8/23/2011 c10 Helenlor
I'm so glad you updated. I'm wondering how Sailor Moon and the gang will defeat Infernape now that he's huge. Ami's powers would be effective, but will Sailor Moon be able to use her crystal to return Infernape back to normal? Well whichever way the story goes I'm sure it will be great.
I'm so glad you updated. I'm wondering how Sailor Moon and the gang will defeat Infernape now that he's huge. Ami's powers would be effective, but will Sailor Moon be able to use her crystal to return Infernape back to normal? Well whichever way the story goes I'm sure it will be great.
8/23/2011 c10
69Batthan
Whoa! Looks like Infernape has gone over some dramatic changes, can't wait for the next chapter.
69BatthanWhoa! Looks like Infernape has gone over some dramatic changes, can't wait for the next chapter.
7/19/2011 c9 Helenlor
Thank you for writing this story and its prequel. When I read it, I can imagine seeing an episode of Sailor Moon. You made Ash fit well into it. I am wondering who does Ash end up with and how that would work if it was one of the Sailor Scouts. I really never thought that Scooby Doo would make a good crossover but you made the parallels so easily. Thanks again I hope to read more.
Thank you for writing this story and its prequel. When I read it, I can imagine seeing an episode of Sailor Moon. You made Ash fit well into it. I am wondering who does Ash end up with and how that would work if it was one of the Sailor Scouts. I really never thought that Scooby Doo would make a good crossover but you made the parallels so easily. Thanks again I hope to read more.
6/20/2011 c9
27Aoi Hyoudou
Gible evolved? That's an interestin twist XD
LOL Funny ending. Poor Ash. I know he doesn't play with stuff animals. Or does he? XD
27Aoi HyoudouGible evolved? That's an interestin twist XD
LOL Funny ending. Poor Ash. I know he doesn't play with stuff animals. Or does he? XD
6/20/2011 c9
9NUTCASE71733
Very nice work. I feel sorry for Jenn and her sister now though.
I loved how you adapted the games' text for when a pokemon evolves, that was clever lol.
9NUTCASE71733Very nice work. I feel sorry for Jenn and her sister now though.
I loved how you adapted the games' text for when a pokemon evolves, that was clever lol.
6/14/2011 c8
27Aoi Hyoudou
Is there a point for bringing in the Mystery gang? To be honest, it seems kinda pointless and the plot is out of place, due to this and the last chapter.
27Aoi HyoudouIs there a point for bringing in the Mystery gang? To be honest, it seems kinda pointless and the plot is out of place, due to this and the last chapter.
