for It Just Takes Time1/16/2011 c1 
1SutaaFox
wow..that was awesome i like how you showed the states of their life very refreshing to read and the ups and downs they had and just the little things we experiance through life.
I love how you protrayed Demyx and Zexion hehe i love how Zexion says that his parents thought he would be suicidal over the empty nail polish i find them very in character Yay yeah i dont find many fics like this mainly Demyx is a complete idiot its nice to see he understands
The pacing was good it wasnt rushed and it wasnt slow either and i like how you gave all the characters their random traits and outbursts makes them feel real and NO MARY/MARTY'S in here xD they drive me up the wall nothing worst than a perfect character
1SutaaFoxwow..that was awesome i like how you showed the states of their life very refreshing to read and the ups and downs they had and just the little things we experiance through life.
I love how you protrayed Demyx and Zexion hehe i love how Zexion says that his parents thought he would be suicidal over the empty nail polish i find them very in character Yay yeah i dont find many fics like this mainly Demyx is a complete idiot its nice to see he understands
The pacing was good it wasnt rushed and it wasnt slow either and i like how you gave all the characters their random traits and outbursts makes them feel real and NO MARY/MARTY'S in here xD they drive me up the wall nothing worst than a perfect character