for Alone8/18/2011 c1 
5sunnyb161616
Okay so it was my own stupidity for reading this right after you left, specially since I knew what you wrote the one shot about, but for some reason I read it. It was good, really good. Now I'm quite sad. I miss you Pippin. See you in four months.
5sunnyb161616Okay so it was my own stupidity for reading this right after you left, specially since I knew what you wrote the one shot about, but for some reason I read it. It was good, really good. Now I'm quite sad. I miss you Pippin. See you in four months.
1/27/2011 c1 GemmaUzumaki
That was quite good, I liked it. I think you got Pippin's character quite well. One criticism though would be that Merry's full name is Meriadoc, not Meriwether. Just thought I'd tel you that, other than that though, great story, bye bye xxx
That was quite good, I liked it. I think you got Pippin's character quite well. One criticism though would be that Merry's full name is Meriadoc, not Meriwether. Just thought I'd tel you that, other than that though, great story, bye bye xxx
1/16/2011 c1 30Frodo's sister
You did a good job of describing Pippin's feelings. It must have been hard to be wrenched from his friend like that. I'm glad that they saw each other again. You did a good job, in writing the story, but you also made a few spelling mistakes.
30Frodo's sisterYou did a good job of describing Pippin's feelings. It must have been hard to be wrenched from his friend like that. I'm glad that they saw each other again. You did a good job, in writing the story, but you also made a few spelling mistakes.
1/14/2011 c1 20Maddy Lake Deep
Great job with Pippin's POV. I loved it and added it to my favorites. ~Maddy~
20Maddy Lake DeepGreat job with Pippin's POV. I loved it and added it to my favorites. ~Maddy~