for Wind beneath my wings4/5 c15 
5Jacob Lupo
Well done story. Your extremely creative and your stories are very different and unique. You've certainly left it open for a sequel. I definitely like to see this saga continued.
5Jacob LupoWell done story. Your extremely creative and your stories are very different and unique. You've certainly left it open for a sequel. I definitely like to see this saga continued.
4/4 c15 14rkoviper
You know what, I'm slackin! You know me, I'm supposed to review this story... EVERY SINGLE CHAPTER! I have yet to do that since you last updated this. Hm. I will cut myself some slack though, because I did tell you that I read the chapter, and I told you that I enjoyed it very much so. BUT... BUT... I didn't quite elaborate on my thoughts, only slightly, but not enough to match my 'rkoviper' style of reviewing. So that's why I'm here... to elaborate and maybe do some updating later on here on Fanfiction, since you inspired me to do so. :) Hehe.
Anyway though, my review goes pretty much the same. It's a very nice wrap up chapter to end such an intense story. I mean seriously, I can go back and be like "Whaat?! I can't believe it!" if I read this story again, and one might would. Because this story is a re-read, it can be re-read by someone and probably never get tired of it, at least in my opinion. I know I would have no problem re-reading this and the last story you wrote, again. :) I'm serious too. All jokes aside, because you know how stupid I can get when I review some of your stuff.
I do like the Raphael angle here. I've said this already, but I'm saying it again. His gold eyes, and his mysterious powers it puts a nice twist to this entire story itself... I don't know it kind of gives like the villian characters more of a reason to kill Bella because of Raphael (maybe they had some sort of a weird hunch about Bella and this whole baby angle.) I don't know, it's just for some reason, Raphael gives the villian characters more of a reason as to why they want to kill Bella... because of him. I don't know, it's hard to explain. -_-' Lol
As for another story, hmm... you can take it however you want it. You can leave it like this, because it's a lovely cliffhanger, what a perfect way to leave readers hanging off the edge of their seats, (like me for instance... DAMN YOUUU! XD) Or... you can stop being mean to your readers and write the story anyway. Your call though, I personally would love to see a story about Raphael but... like I said, this could go either way, I don't care, at least I'll still be satisfied with this story.
As for the whole story itself, I liked it. I enjoyed it, it certainly kept the suspense and the drama going, you know, all that's happened in the story, and like I said, you ended it perfectly with a nice little 'wrap up' chapter. :)
And I'm crazy but I like it! Loca! Loca! Loca! Lol. I couldn't leave the review page without typing something random so there ya go, I did it. Now I'm off. :) Very nicely done, Nefis. ;)
14rkoviperYou know what, I'm slackin! You know me, I'm supposed to review this story... EVERY SINGLE CHAPTER! I have yet to do that since you last updated this. Hm. I will cut myself some slack though, because I did tell you that I read the chapter, and I told you that I enjoyed it very much so. BUT... BUT... I didn't quite elaborate on my thoughts, only slightly, but not enough to match my 'rkoviper' style of reviewing. So that's why I'm here... to elaborate and maybe do some updating later on here on Fanfiction, since you inspired me to do so. :) Hehe.
Anyway though, my review goes pretty much the same. It's a very nice wrap up chapter to end such an intense story. I mean seriously, I can go back and be like "Whaat?! I can't believe it!" if I read this story again, and one might would. Because this story is a re-read, it can be re-read by someone and probably never get tired of it, at least in my opinion. I know I would have no problem re-reading this and the last story you wrote, again. :) I'm serious too. All jokes aside, because you know how stupid I can get when I review some of your stuff.
I do like the Raphael angle here. I've said this already, but I'm saying it again. His gold eyes, and his mysterious powers it puts a nice twist to this entire story itself... I don't know it kind of gives like the villian characters more of a reason to kill Bella because of Raphael (maybe they had some sort of a weird hunch about Bella and this whole baby angle.) I don't know, it's just for some reason, Raphael gives the villian characters more of a reason as to why they want to kill Bella... because of him. I don't know, it's hard to explain. -_-' Lol
As for another story, hmm... you can take it however you want it. You can leave it like this, because it's a lovely cliffhanger, what a perfect way to leave readers hanging off the edge of their seats, (like me for instance... DAMN YOUUU! XD) Or... you can stop being mean to your readers and write the story anyway. Your call though, I personally would love to see a story about Raphael but... like I said, this could go either way, I don't care, at least I'll still be satisfied with this story.
As for the whole story itself, I liked it. I enjoyed it, it certainly kept the suspense and the drama going, you know, all that's happened in the story, and like I said, you ended it perfectly with a nice little 'wrap up' chapter. :)
And I'm crazy but I like it! Loca! Loca! Loca! Lol. I couldn't leave the review page without typing something random so there ya go, I did it. Now I'm off. :) Very nicely done, Nefis. ;)
12/8/2012 c14 rkoviper
RKOVIPER IS BACK AND SHE'S BACK FOR GOOD. FINALLY! AND NOW... WE ARE OFFICIALLY BACK IN BUSINESS! (If you know what I am saying... ;))
I come with a vengeance... I come to tear up the review boards, and DESTROY them with the words of madness, and the utmost CONFUSION! Let me put it like this, Shiane...
"I woke up from the couch this evening! Come to read this lovely chapter..." Hmmmmmmm... " PREACH! Only to my surprise, she's got three kids! Three kids!" Hmmmmmm... "Somebody give me somethin!"
*Wails and then faints.*
"Bishop, you alright?"
Alright? I am no where near to being alright, from what I recall, I remember reading about TWO KIDS! Two! 1, 2. Two as in the second time I might just faint again... How can she possibly have three kids? I- I just don't understand! I am befuddled... I am... I wasn't expecting this... then again, I'm not all that surprised. I must've forgotten who was writing this story.
'I don't understand this! I don't understaand! I don't understand!' *Does Erika dance* I don't understand this! I don't understand! I. Don't. Understand.'
Alright, I won't say much here... but... a lovely chapter this was. It would only take me the next chapter to find out what and how Bella goes from having two kids... to THREE! Three kids! One. Two. THREE! Ahhh, fooey. Again, lovely chapter... shy shy shy. Looking forward to the next chapter.
RKOVIPER IS BACK AND SHE'S BACK FOR GOOD. FINALLY! AND NOW... WE ARE OFFICIALLY BACK IN BUSINESS! (If you know what I am saying... ;))
I come with a vengeance... I come to tear up the review boards, and DESTROY them with the words of madness, and the utmost CONFUSION! Let me put it like this, Shiane...
"I woke up from the couch this evening! Come to read this lovely chapter..." Hmmmmmmm... " PREACH! Only to my surprise, she's got three kids! Three kids!" Hmmmmmm... "Somebody give me somethin!"
*Wails and then faints.*
"Bishop, you alright?"
Alright? I am no where near to being alright, from what I recall, I remember reading about TWO KIDS! Two! 1, 2. Two as in the second time I might just faint again... How can she possibly have three kids? I- I just don't understand! I am befuddled... I am... I wasn't expecting this... then again, I'm not all that surprised. I must've forgotten who was writing this story.
'I don't understand this! I don't understaand! I don't understand!' *Does Erika dance* I don't understand this! I don't understand! I. Don't. Understand.'
Alright, I won't say much here... but... a lovely chapter this was. It would only take me the next chapter to find out what and how Bella goes from having two kids... to THREE! Three kids! One. Two. THREE! Ahhh, fooey. Again, lovely chapter... shy shy shy. Looking forward to the next chapter.
10/5/2012 c13 Monica
Great story, so far! It should be continued
Great story, so far! It should be continued
6/19/2012 c13 rkoviper
What a nice surpise, I get a present in the email saying that you finally updated. I'm going to try and be as neat as I can since I am reviewing this on my phone. :P I'm def. not taking the risk of going on my Dad's SLOW behind computer and don't even start with my laptop.
Awww, no special author's note for me? :( I always get special authr note from you. What happened? Ughh, you are SOOO getting a bad review now. lol
Biblically (Did I spell that right? I don't think so... but I don't care) I understand the whole situation with how Jacob is not really dead. His soul lives on, I guess he's just that determined to save his true love.
Faith is such a little cutie pie. He sounds just like his father here. And lol Hope... growling... looks like those claws were def. about to come out.
And just when I was starting to understand the story, just when I get the hang of it, you throw me off with Jake's Grandfather. (Don't even get me started... if you don't know what I'm talkin about I'll blow up with another review or maybe even my profile explaining my theory.)
But that's interesting... why is Jake's grandfather there? Does... the soul of Jake's grandfather live somewhat in Jacob? I don't know... I want to think I'm right... but then I can be wrong. No thanks to you missy. I got you to blame for throwing me off.
Interesting chapter. I'm intrigued, mainly because with supernatrual beings you threw in some spiritual beings as well... so it's basically good vs. evil so right now... I feel like I'm reading one of your Eternal Light books. (You know the series... the name of it continues to escape me so do correct me if I'm wrong. I just know it has 'light' in it that's all)
Like I said... good chapter. I'm going to end this review before I say something else that'll make this review a lot longer than expected. (Haha)
What a nice surpise, I get a present in the email saying that you finally updated. I'm going to try and be as neat as I can since I am reviewing this on my phone. :P I'm def. not taking the risk of going on my Dad's SLOW behind computer and don't even start with my laptop.
Awww, no special author's note for me? :( I always get special authr note from you. What happened? Ughh, you are SOOO getting a bad review now. lol
Biblically (Did I spell that right? I don't think so... but I don't care) I understand the whole situation with how Jacob is not really dead. His soul lives on, I guess he's just that determined to save his true love.
Faith is such a little cutie pie. He sounds just like his father here. And lol Hope... growling... looks like those claws were def. about to come out.
And just when I was starting to understand the story, just when I get the hang of it, you throw me off with Jake's Grandfather. (Don't even get me started... if you don't know what I'm talkin about I'll blow up with another review or maybe even my profile explaining my theory.)
But that's interesting... why is Jake's grandfather there? Does... the soul of Jake's grandfather live somewhat in Jacob? I don't know... I want to think I'm right... but then I can be wrong. No thanks to you missy. I got you to blame for throwing me off.
Interesting chapter. I'm intrigued, mainly because with supernatrual beings you threw in some spiritual beings as well... so it's basically good vs. evil so right now... I feel like I'm reading one of your Eternal Light books. (You know the series... the name of it continues to escape me so do correct me if I'm wrong. I just know it has 'light' in it that's all)
Like I said... good chapter. I'm going to end this review before I say something else that'll make this review a lot longer than expected. (Haha)
3/31/2012 c12 5Jacob Lupo
That was intense. You do a fantastic job describing things and emotion. There better be a happy ending or I shall send my friends from Olympus after you. Just kidding!
5Jacob LupoThat was intense. You do a fantastic job describing things and emotion. There better be a happy ending or I shall send my friends from Olympus after you. Just kidding!
3/30/2012 c12 14rkoviper
You know, something told me I had to draw myself away from my television and check my yahoo. I don't know what it was, call it a woman's intuition, or something because I something told me to go check my yahoo and surprise, surprise, I get an alert of a new chapter for this story, from Nefis.
I'd like to call this my early birthday present, it's a pretty depressing chapter. (Damn, Shiane, WHHY do you play with my emotions like puppets? I actually almost found myself tearing up at the end. Then again, reading and writing other things I actually found myself getting a little teary eyed.) Maan... see this is the part where I get into manipulation but I'm not even going to explain myself, because I said this, COUNTLESS of times. And I'm afraid if I say it again, you'll probably already know what I'm going to say.
And then you with the same response, "I'm not crazy, Paige. I'm not crazy." Yadda yadda yadda. Keep telling yourself that girlie. XD
Anyway, review time.
What's up with the first few paragraphs being in italics? Is that supposed to mean something? I don't know, it kind of threw me off when I read it, and then reading Jacob's POV. But I'm only asking because, well, there has to be some reason behind it whether it's supposed to symbolize something, or whatever.
Jacob is a dedicated, determined young man. You might expect me to go, "NOOOO JACOB'S DEAD!" But I'm going to take your word for it since you said there's a happy ending. (Btw, no special author's note for Paigey Paige? :( XD)
Bella and the baby. That's just weird. I thought I've written some freaky stuff but really? XD The baby moving around in her stomach like that? Ehhh, that gives me chills for some reason.
Hope is too adorable here. "Daddy! I'm coming to save you!" And Jacob takes the 'nail' for his unborn daughter. Hmmm... that's nice but a nail though? That's NASSTY! Ewww! I can't imagine a demon's nail going through my chest and through my heart. Ahhh ewww, that's nasty. Ewww. XD
"Bella, take care of yourself. I love you. You were always the wind beneath my wings. Without you, I'm nothing. I give my everything. I will even give my life to save you and my children even if they aren't born yet. I will protect my family…and my love because my family is my life and without it, there is no reason for living… Just know that I love you. I always have and always will. I'll wait for you in heaven…my love."
*faints dramatically*
Ahh my love! That was sweet! If Bella were to respond to that, I don't know, it kind of makes me think she'd quote something from Evanescence. "Even in death our loves goes on..." :D
It's depressing yes, but a great well descriptive chapter. Ending this long review as it is now. XD Can't wait for the next update.
14rkoviperYou know, something told me I had to draw myself away from my television and check my yahoo. I don't know what it was, call it a woman's intuition, or something because I something told me to go check my yahoo and surprise, surprise, I get an alert of a new chapter for this story, from Nefis.
I'd like to call this my early birthday present, it's a pretty depressing chapter. (Damn, Shiane, WHHY do you play with my emotions like puppets? I actually almost found myself tearing up at the end. Then again, reading and writing other things I actually found myself getting a little teary eyed.) Maan... see this is the part where I get into manipulation but I'm not even going to explain myself, because I said this, COUNTLESS of times. And I'm afraid if I say it again, you'll probably already know what I'm going to say.
And then you with the same response, "I'm not crazy, Paige. I'm not crazy." Yadda yadda yadda. Keep telling yourself that girlie. XD
Anyway, review time.
What's up with the first few paragraphs being in italics? Is that supposed to mean something? I don't know, it kind of threw me off when I read it, and then reading Jacob's POV. But I'm only asking because, well, there has to be some reason behind it whether it's supposed to symbolize something, or whatever.
Jacob is a dedicated, determined young man. You might expect me to go, "NOOOO JACOB'S DEAD!" But I'm going to take your word for it since you said there's a happy ending. (Btw, no special author's note for Paigey Paige? :( XD)
Bella and the baby. That's just weird. I thought I've written some freaky stuff but really? XD The baby moving around in her stomach like that? Ehhh, that gives me chills for some reason.
Hope is too adorable here. "Daddy! I'm coming to save you!" And Jacob takes the 'nail' for his unborn daughter. Hmmm... that's nice but a nail though? That's NASSTY! Ewww! I can't imagine a demon's nail going through my chest and through my heart. Ahhh ewww, that's nasty. Ewww. XD
"Bella, take care of yourself. I love you. You were always the wind beneath my wings. Without you, I'm nothing. I give my everything. I will even give my life to save you and my children even if they aren't born yet. I will protect my family…and my love because my family is my life and without it, there is no reason for living… Just know that I love you. I always have and always will. I'll wait for you in heaven…my love."
*faints dramatically*
Ahh my love! That was sweet! If Bella were to respond to that, I don't know, it kind of makes me think she'd quote something from Evanescence. "Even in death our loves goes on..." :D
It's depressing yes, but a great well descriptive chapter. Ending this long review as it is now. XD Can't wait for the next update.
1/11/2012 c11 Monica
Wow! Great story! I hope u get to write more soon
Wow! Great story! I hope u get to write more soon
12/26/2011 c11 rkoviper
Ooh God! From the midst of perhaps one of the worst days of my life, the only thing that seemed to brighten up my day is this update. I must say Shiane, everything in this story is so neatly tied together and I fully understand what's happening now.
Wait a minute... before I resume..
How dare you? You hurt me Shiane. I could never 'kill' you. Because if I did, there would be no more story updates, and that means a bunch of angry reviewers sending Hate PM messages. "WHY'D YOU KILL NEFIS?" XD So I could never do such thing. XD I am not THAT violent. And as you clearly said, I've been waiting patiently, so give me some credit for that. :P
Jacob! Oh nooo... I don't want him to die. I hope for a happy ending, it's a shame that I am not getting one as of right now, do to your level of insanity. XD I'm kidding Shiane, come on.. I know what you are probably saying. "I'm not crazy," or "You know you love me Paigey..." XD
I'm getting off track... anyway, as I stated above earlier, I can hope for a happy ending. And hey, is there any possible way we can see the action from Jacob POV? I mean, this chapter is amazing, and I love the way how everything is written, (of course, no surprise there because your Shiane after all. :P XD) but I would love to see the intense action. I could almost feel the intense action through your words here, I don't know. I just want to see action. You know how I am, I'm crazy. (You might be thinking... "Yeah you are, completely out of your mind. But I love my Paigey Paige. XD")
Poor Hope. She seems so innocent and cute here. I hate the fact that she's sinking into her father's suffering of (I hope not...) possible death.
Lillian, she finally came to her senses. What's up with the white eyes though? That's the only thing weirding me out. XD
Sorry this was kind of late, but it's been a LOOONNGG day as well as one of the worst days of my life. I know, I've been away from my computer... not on oovoo and all.
But enough of my issues, I've pretty much elaborated on all things interesting that I seem to notice here. Great chapter Shy shy shy. As always.
P.S. How was your Xmas? ;)
Ooh God! From the midst of perhaps one of the worst days of my life, the only thing that seemed to brighten up my day is this update. I must say Shiane, everything in this story is so neatly tied together and I fully understand what's happening now.
Wait a minute... before I resume..
How dare you? You hurt me Shiane. I could never 'kill' you. Because if I did, there would be no more story updates, and that means a bunch of angry reviewers sending Hate PM messages. "WHY'D YOU KILL NEFIS?" XD So I could never do such thing. XD I am not THAT violent. And as you clearly said, I've been waiting patiently, so give me some credit for that. :P
Jacob! Oh nooo... I don't want him to die. I hope for a happy ending, it's a shame that I am not getting one as of right now, do to your level of insanity. XD I'm kidding Shiane, come on.. I know what you are probably saying. "I'm not crazy," or "You know you love me Paigey..." XD
I'm getting off track... anyway, as I stated above earlier, I can hope for a happy ending. And hey, is there any possible way we can see the action from Jacob POV? I mean, this chapter is amazing, and I love the way how everything is written, (of course, no surprise there because your Shiane after all. :P XD) but I would love to see the intense action. I could almost feel the intense action through your words here, I don't know. I just want to see action. You know how I am, I'm crazy. (You might be thinking... "Yeah you are, completely out of your mind. But I love my Paigey Paige. XD")
Poor Hope. She seems so innocent and cute here. I hate the fact that she's sinking into her father's suffering of (I hope not...) possible death.
Lillian, she finally came to her senses. What's up with the white eyes though? That's the only thing weirding me out. XD
Sorry this was kind of late, but it's been a LOOONNGG day as well as one of the worst days of my life. I know, I've been away from my computer... not on oovoo and all.
But enough of my issues, I've pretty much elaborated on all things interesting that I seem to notice here. Great chapter Shy shy shy. As always.
P.S. How was your Xmas? ;)
11/5/2011 c10 rkoviper
Surprise, surprise. No I'm not actually confused. I have my own interpretation of how to set Hope and Faith but I'd rather not explain it. As it may confuse you, or anyone else reading this review.
*chuckles* *smirks*
***
By the way…If it is a girl and you name her Hope…and it ends up being this crazy chick I have to baby sit, I hope you know I'm charging thirty bucks an hour. She's too much work.
…Just saying…
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^^REALLY LUNA! lol Despite all that's happening, you've actually managed to make me chuckle with Luna here. XD Commenting that she's charging 30 dollars to baby sit Hope (that's if Hope is born) because she is too much work.
I understand Hope and Faith being split in half and all that crazy whacky stuff. But I don't understand why she isn't considered a ghost? You lost me there. With Hope not being a ghost... O_O
Jacob! Oh no! :P Don't die. And yeah, Bella is going to kill that ** Lillian.
Great update Shiane. Real smack in the face for me. I'm surprised really. XD (Although you can't be surprised. How many times have I been surprised on the previous chapters I've read so far?)
Reviews like this, are nothing new to you are they? No. Because everytime you review, I always seem to lose my cool. And you come giggling and saying 'You know you love me... or I love you.' then you go off making a chapter like chapter 9 and now THIS chapter. Although it's not so much brain busting, thinking really really hard, on what's going on inside that head of yours when you update some chapters. But yeah, not this time. I actually understand what's going on now. haha.
All I know is, Jacob better not die. Because if he dies... well... let's just say I know what school you go too. ;) And... I know where your 1st period classroom is... AND... I have you on oovoo... AND... (Do I really have to keep going? I think you get the point Shiane. ;)
^^Yup, I'll be one unhappy camper. Unhappy Paigey is not what you want now do you? XD lol
Now I'm just typing random stuff here... lemme stop before I start writing a whole book here on this one review. Great update, update soon. Yadda yadda yadda. :D
Surprise, surprise. No I'm not actually confused. I have my own interpretation of how to set Hope and Faith but I'd rather not explain it. As it may confuse you, or anyone else reading this review.
*chuckles* *smirks*
***
By the way…If it is a girl and you name her Hope…and it ends up being this crazy chick I have to baby sit, I hope you know I'm charging thirty bucks an hour. She's too much work.
…Just saying…
***
^^REALLY LUNA! lol Despite all that's happening, you've actually managed to make me chuckle with Luna here. XD Commenting that she's charging 30 dollars to baby sit Hope (that's if Hope is born) because she is too much work.
I understand Hope and Faith being split in half and all that crazy whacky stuff. But I don't understand why she isn't considered a ghost? You lost me there. With Hope not being a ghost... O_O
Jacob! Oh no! :P Don't die. And yeah, Bella is going to kill that ** Lillian.
Great update Shiane. Real smack in the face for me. I'm surprised really. XD (Although you can't be surprised. How many times have I been surprised on the previous chapters I've read so far?)
Reviews like this, are nothing new to you are they? No. Because everytime you review, I always seem to lose my cool. And you come giggling and saying 'You know you love me... or I love you.' then you go off making a chapter like chapter 9 and now THIS chapter. Although it's not so much brain busting, thinking really really hard, on what's going on inside that head of yours when you update some chapters. But yeah, not this time. I actually understand what's going on now. haha.
All I know is, Jacob better not die. Because if he dies... well... let's just say I know what school you go too. ;) And... I know where your 1st period classroom is... AND... I have you on oovoo... AND... (Do I really have to keep going? I think you get the point Shiane. ;)
^^Yup, I'll be one unhappy camper. Unhappy Paigey is not what you want now do you? XD lol
Now I'm just typing random stuff here... lemme stop before I start writing a whole book here on this one review. Great update, update soon. Yadda yadda yadda. :D
10/15/2011 c9 rkoviper
Yes, that's right. Rkoviper is back and she's back with a review vengeance! :D I took it you read my 2nd review huh? Yeah... that was a nice treat was it Shiane? Yes it was... admit it. XD
Okay, you DID give us a lot of hints here, and I think I could piece together what it is about Hope and Faith.
I would like to say one of them is a vampire, you know Faith or Hope but clearly, I have no idea.
Lillian is a **. She's so selfish to claw her way into a plan like this, only so she can live again. **. :P I oughta smack her so hard so she can STAY dead, and maybe go to HELL instead of staying in the afterlife. :P
I hope Jacob is alright.
And THANK GOD, Bella is alive. I thought there wasn't going to be a happy ending soon. I swear to you now, I don't know where the hell you are going with this story. All I can do is wait for the next update, you know how it is Shiane. Manipulation, destruction of my very own mind, which I can't seem to find anymore since reading this story. xDD
Is it possible for Bella to have twins? Why else would that 'blur' on the locket be there?
Is Lillian really trying that hard to claw her way back into life by I don't know, now this is a crazy guess I'm just throwing out there...
Is the blur Lillian? Or Hope? I don't know... didn't I tell you it would be a whacky guess? I know that I am way off the wall with this guess, just out there... you know? Didn't I tell you I lost my mind? It's all your fault shiane. :P All your fault.
And yes, for the first time EVER, Nefis is being nice about giving out soo many hints. I'm going to cherish this moment, and make it last for eternity. Because I have a terrible feeling, that you aren't going to be very nice when the next update comes around.
What can I say? I've completely lost it...
UPDATE SHIANE! UPDATE SOON? PWEASE? :3 Kitty cat smile, remember that? LOL XD Ahh, I'm so silly. :) XD
Yes, that's right. Rkoviper is back and she's back with a review vengeance! :D I took it you read my 2nd review huh? Yeah... that was a nice treat was it Shiane? Yes it was... admit it. XD
Okay, you DID give us a lot of hints here, and I think I could piece together what it is about Hope and Faith.
I would like to say one of them is a vampire, you know Faith or Hope but clearly, I have no idea.
Lillian is a **. She's so selfish to claw her way into a plan like this, only so she can live again. **. :P I oughta smack her so hard so she can STAY dead, and maybe go to HELL instead of staying in the afterlife. :P
I hope Jacob is alright.
And THANK GOD, Bella is alive. I thought there wasn't going to be a happy ending soon. I swear to you now, I don't know where the hell you are going with this story. All I can do is wait for the next update, you know how it is Shiane. Manipulation, destruction of my very own mind, which I can't seem to find anymore since reading this story. xDD
Is it possible for Bella to have twins? Why else would that 'blur' on the locket be there?
Is Lillian really trying that hard to claw her way back into life by I don't know, now this is a crazy guess I'm just throwing out there...
Is the blur Lillian? Or Hope? I don't know... didn't I tell you it would be a whacky guess? I know that I am way off the wall with this guess, just out there... you know? Didn't I tell you I lost my mind? It's all your fault shiane. :P All your fault.
And yes, for the first time EVER, Nefis is being nice about giving out soo many hints. I'm going to cherish this moment, and make it last for eternity. Because I have a terrible feeling, that you aren't going to be very nice when the next update comes around.
What can I say? I've completely lost it...
UPDATE SHIANE! UPDATE SOON? PWEASE? :3 Kitty cat smile, remember that? LOL XD Ahh, I'm so silly. :) XD
10/14/2011 c8 Paige aka rkoviper
I forgot I can't review this chapter again under 'rkoviper.' Here I am, again, reviewing for the 2nd time. Surprise, surprise huh? You're probably wondering why I decided to tell you what I think what's going to happen here, instead of telling you on oovoo. I have my reasons, but I have one specific reason, one SPECIAL reason why.
I want this review to stick to your brain, make it burn in the back of your mind so when the next time you update this, this review will come to mind. Speaking of sticking it into your head, YOU BETTER NOT DELETE THIS REVIEW! Fanfiction grants the power of deleting anonymous reviews. So don't do it, please? Or I will lose my mind completely.
Me
You probably can guess where I'm going. :D I've never done this before, so it might be a surprise to you.
Shiane
o.o ... ... lol. where are u going?
^^REALLY? REALLY Shiane! You didn't expect me to end up here, reviewing this chapter again! Do you really want to see what it's like to have someone completely lose their mind? Or did you already see that enough from me? Well, do you want to see WORSE? xDD lol
Let's see here... let's review shall we?
***
"Stop crying," a little girl's voice appears.
"What the hell was that?" I ask, tearing myself away from my aunt. "Is someone else there?"
Seth sniffs the air. "It's not a scent I recognize."
"Well, what is it? A human? Werewolf? Vampire?"
"It's a half because the scent is similar to yours but something is different about it as well."
"Half of what? Vampire?"
"Yes, I hope," Seth says, unsure of his scent of smell. I look at him and he throws his hand in the air. "Hey, I'm doing the best I can here."
"Okay," I say. "Everyone, brace yourself."
A little girl walks through the door…she looks like Bella. "My mommy will come back. I'm sure of it. I'm sure."
***
O.O DID THAT LITTLE GIRL JUST SAY MOMMY? That girl is Bella's daughter! I knew it, and damn it, how can I miss something like that? I didn't realize this when you brought that little girl up during our convo on oovoo... Come to think of it, did I even mention the little girl in my last review?
I don't know, maybe I am losing my mind perhaps... IT's ALL YOUR FAULT SHIANE! :D XD Wait, I just realized something...
Shouldn't that little girl be concerned for not only her mother's life, but HER life too? Bella is impregnated with a child, did she even show growth while being develop in her mommy's womb? I seriously fear for the girl's life. After all, you said... 'ghost.' O_O
I'M SCARED NOW! I'M SCARED! I don't like the idea of death of babies, it's just soo sad... there better be a happy ending to this story. Or I will go on a rampage. xDD
Speaking of which, i just recieved your reply... xDD
":) and u'll find out when i update"
YOU DAMN RIGHT I WILL! :)
Update please? Waiting patiently for the next update :D :D
I forgot I can't review this chapter again under 'rkoviper.' Here I am, again, reviewing for the 2nd time. Surprise, surprise huh? You're probably wondering why I decided to tell you what I think what's going to happen here, instead of telling you on oovoo. I have my reasons, but I have one specific reason, one SPECIAL reason why.
I want this review to stick to your brain, make it burn in the back of your mind so when the next time you update this, this review will come to mind. Speaking of sticking it into your head, YOU BETTER NOT DELETE THIS REVIEW! Fanfiction grants the power of deleting anonymous reviews. So don't do it, please? Or I will lose my mind completely.
Me
You probably can guess where I'm going. :D I've never done this before, so it might be a surprise to you.
Shiane
o.o ... ... lol. where are u going?
^^REALLY? REALLY Shiane! You didn't expect me to end up here, reviewing this chapter again! Do you really want to see what it's like to have someone completely lose their mind? Or did you already see that enough from me? Well, do you want to see WORSE? xDD lol
Let's see here... let's review shall we?
***
"Stop crying," a little girl's voice appears.
"What the hell was that?" I ask, tearing myself away from my aunt. "Is someone else there?"
Seth sniffs the air. "It's not a scent I recognize."
"Well, what is it? A human? Werewolf? Vampire?"
"It's a half because the scent is similar to yours but something is different about it as well."
"Half of what? Vampire?"
"Yes, I hope," Seth says, unsure of his scent of smell. I look at him and he throws his hand in the air. "Hey, I'm doing the best I can here."
"Okay," I say. "Everyone, brace yourself."
A little girl walks through the door…she looks like Bella. "My mommy will come back. I'm sure of it. I'm sure."
***
O.O DID THAT LITTLE GIRL JUST SAY MOMMY? That girl is Bella's daughter! I knew it, and damn it, how can I miss something like that? I didn't realize this when you brought that little girl up during our convo on oovoo... Come to think of it, did I even mention the little girl in my last review?
I don't know, maybe I am losing my mind perhaps... IT's ALL YOUR FAULT SHIANE! :D XD Wait, I just realized something...
Shouldn't that little girl be concerned for not only her mother's life, but HER life too? Bella is impregnated with a child, did she even show growth while being develop in her mommy's womb? I seriously fear for the girl's life. After all, you said... 'ghost.' O_O
I'M SCARED NOW! I'M SCARED! I don't like the idea of death of babies, it's just soo sad... there better be a happy ending to this story. Or I will go on a rampage. xDD
Speaking of which, i just recieved your reply... xDD
":) and u'll find out when i update"
YOU DAMN RIGHT I WILL! :)
Update please? Waiting patiently for the next update :D :D
9/28/2011 c8 5Jacob Lupo
Its doesn;t matter that it's short. Very suspenseful and emotional chapter! I know Bella isn;'t dead! I felt so bad for Seth.
5Jacob LupoIts doesn;t matter that it's short. Very suspenseful and emotional chapter! I know Bella isn;'t dead! I felt so bad for Seth.
9/25/2011 c8 14rkoviper
Okay, ... okay okay okay. I am going to try and not sound like I am losing my mind... I am going to try and sound completely sane for a minute...
...
Too freaking late...
Okay, now I'm not sure if the short chapter was supposed to throw people like me off but damn it, it worked anyway.
Bella's not dead. Bella's not dead... why would Bella be dead? Why would she be dead? Bella. Bella. Bella. No... please don't tell me you killed Bella. Shiane...
Damn it! My plan it's not working, slowly but surely, I am doing exactly what I told myself NOT to do! D: Way to go Paige, way to go. *sigh*
IS BELLA DEAD? NO BELLA DON'T DIE!
Yeah, who the F#@K is that little ghost girl? For every new character new twist, new cliff hanger it only adds to the confusion more! D: DX
!
Short and sweet. Short and 'You're gunna get it @ school tomorrow' chapter. :DD Don't lemme catch you in the hallways, because imma yell like I did with Breanna! XDD
R.I.P
My oh so sweet Insanity...
14rkoviperOkay, ... okay okay okay. I am going to try and not sound like I am losing my mind... I am going to try and sound completely sane for a minute...
...
Too freaking late...
Okay, now I'm not sure if the short chapter was supposed to throw people like me off but damn it, it worked anyway.
Bella's not dead. Bella's not dead... why would Bella be dead? Why would she be dead? Bella. Bella. Bella. No... please don't tell me you killed Bella. Shiane...
Damn it! My plan it's not working, slowly but surely, I am doing exactly what I told myself NOT to do! D: Way to go Paige, way to go. *sigh*
IS BELLA DEAD? NO BELLA DON'T DIE!
Yeah, who the F#@K is that little ghost girl? For every new character new twist, new cliff hanger it only adds to the confusion more! D: DX
!
Short and sweet. Short and 'You're gunna get it @ school tomorrow' chapter. :DD Don't lemme catch you in the hallways, because imma yell like I did with Breanna! XDD
R.I.P
My oh so sweet Insanity...
6/23/2011 c7 Paige
I forgot to mention that it was a good chapter. Short but good. I hope you didnt get that last review all wrong. I'm just really upset right now...
I forgot to mention that it was a good chapter. Short but good. I hope you didnt get that last review all wrong. I'm just really upset right now...