for The Vow: Broken Promises4/7/2009 c7 
28o0KittyBlue0o
I think I need to spork out your eyes for not updating yet. I know it's on hiatus n all but...its so good. It's so emotionally driven, so deep and painfully similar to a relationship I have with my own husband that it drives me to tears...a lot. Of course my man isn't an alien prince with super powers, just very very very stubborn when it comes to feelings.
In fact most people think he's an emotionless weirdo. *sweatdrop* that changes with my pregnancy though, *happily remembers* ah the sweet changes men can go through.
anyway yes. write. or I will hunt you down. with sporks.
28o0KittyBlue0oI think I need to spork out your eyes for not updating yet. I know it's on hiatus n all but...its so good. It's so emotionally driven, so deep and painfully similar to a relationship I have with my own husband that it drives me to tears...a lot. Of course my man isn't an alien prince with super powers, just very very very stubborn when it comes to feelings.
In fact most people think he's an emotionless weirdo. *sweatdrop* that changes with my pregnancy though, *happily remembers* ah the sweet changes men can go through.
anyway yes. write. or I will hunt you down. with sporks.
8/28/2005 c2 12Juclesia
Love it. Writing's professional and you keep in character; you deserve all those reviews.
~Ja
12JuclesiaLove it. Writing's professional and you keep in character; you deserve all those reviews.
~Ja
6/26/2005 c7 15tehMimo
=D Wonderfull story! Vegeta's so harsh and cold... at least he's not OOC!
Anyway, I read your hiatus notice so I'm trying to be pacient... xD But I have to say UPDATE SOON! ^o^
15tehMimo=D Wonderfull story! Vegeta's so harsh and cold... at least he's not OOC!
Anyway, I read your hiatus notice so I'm trying to be pacient... xD But I have to say UPDATE SOON! ^o^
6/1/2004 c7 7DustNight25832
wow im glad i restumbled upon this im glad you updated even though it was a few months ago...hopefully youll update it again soon
7DustNight25832wow im glad i restumbled upon this im glad you updated even though it was a few months ago...hopefully youll update it again soon
4/16/2004 c2 Nicole
well kind of borind wheres the action? but i do kind of like the normal day at my house.
well kind of borind wheres the action? but i do kind of like the normal day at my house.
3/27/2004 c7 1Elvewin Darkdragon
KEEP WRITING! Vegeta is very in character but he IS slightly nicer in the tv series. If I would say anything needs changing, it's to make Veggie slightly less un-caring. 'Cos he DOES care.
1Elvewin DarkdragonKEEP WRITING! Vegeta is very in character but he IS slightly nicer in the tv series. If I would say anything needs changing, it's to make Veggie slightly less un-caring. 'Cos he DOES care.
3/25/2004 c7 Elvewin Darkdragon
Write more! I read "The Vow"and loved it. Post more chapters!
Just to say, be a bit careful with typing errors but that's all! Your stories are one of my few reasons for living!
Write more! I read "The Vow"and loved it. Post more chapters!
Just to say, be a bit careful with typing errors but that's all! Your stories are one of my few reasons for living!
3/23/2004 c7 draegon-fire
I see why Gohan thinks that's funny. I think Kami just has the twisted sense of humor. Or a really good sense of irony. The only place Vegeta is trying to get away from, is the one place he has to go. I think he shouldn't be spared, and Bulma should be awake when he gets there. That'll really put a cap on things. I honestly think they should sit down and talk things out. Or at least Bulma should confront him about what he was looking for in her head.
I see why Gohan thinks that's funny. I think Kami just has the twisted sense of humor. Or a really good sense of irony. The only place Vegeta is trying to get away from, is the one place he has to go. I think he shouldn't be spared, and Bulma should be awake when he gets there. That'll really put a cap on things. I honestly think they should sit down and talk things out. Or at least Bulma should confront him about what he was looking for in her head.
3/23/2004 c7 8Asilin Kheldarson
aw...poor veggie...poor bulma! they're having it rough aren't they. please continue!
8Asilin Kheldarsonaw...poor veggie...poor bulma! they're having it rough aren't they. please continue!