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3/23/2004 c6 Megami
I loved this chapter! I can't wait for the next one.
3/22/2004 c6 OnlyyHatred
Oh, that was one sick chapter.
I loved it with all my heart.
The mixture of love and hopelessness is completely fantastic!
I seriously hope you update very soon!
3/22/2004 c6 SqrlDotYaynetscape.net
Write more chapters fast PLEASE!
3/22/2004 c6 8Asilin Kheldarson
aww! sweet! that was an incredible chapter! especially the ending...please continue...there has to be more...right?
2/24/2004 c5 yara80
please update
2/13/2004 c5 10Priestess of Passion
o! i love this story so much. ya just have to update! soon too! so whats going to happen? u have to completely hooked. is trunks going to find out what vegeta did to bulma? if he does what would he do? and what is going to happen btw bulma and ya-chan?
1/30/2004 c5 3Icy Light
GAH! Please update, please! I think I may be suffering from fan fic withdrawal...
12/21/2003 c5 1Mini Nicka
Horribly sad chapter I hope they get back together soon. Update soon please.
4/7/2003 c5 draegon-fire
Hey, it's been over a week, what happened? I'm sorry, but I totally forgot about this story. It's really good, hope you finish it.
3/18/2003 c5 7DustNight25832
i really hope thers gonna be more chapters it is kinda short but its good

byez
12/30/2002 c5 kandi
p.s.-great story
12/5/2002 c5 1SerenityZero
T_T
11/23/2002 c5 Serenity
i really like your story keep it coming ... don't wait to long before the next chapter i can't wait ... please hurry
11/22/2002 c4 Majin Danielle
Angel even! (heheh)
11/22/2002 c5 Majin Danielle
Three times now you have had me crying. The first was whae I read To give and angle her wings, the Yamcha POV. It just broke my heart. It was so touching!

Next I was crying when I read the Vow, when Bulma was in the hospital and Vegeta did what he did to her. Oh, and when she almost killed herself. I cried then too.

Now, I am crying with pity for Vegeta. The poor guy doesn't know when to leave his pride behind and just love her!

I need to read more of this story and soon. If you don't update this, I WILL COME AFTER YOU! I KNOW WHERE YOU LIVE! Well, not really, but you get the idea.

Love it! Keep going! Don't quit!

-Majin Danielle
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