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5likkle cloud
Aweeee a little aschXluke... hope theres more of that to come! lol, update soon! :D
5likkle cloudAweeee a little aschXluke... hope theres more of that to come! lol, update soon! :D
5/17 c38 9dawn chase
I can't wait for the next chapter! I feel like its all building up to something really big
9dawn chaseI can't wait for the next chapter! I feel like its all building up to something really big
4/10 c37 2Mizu Hoseki
it's just so entertaining and interesting to see Sync playing along with the 'heros' of the story instead of being an actual enemy...
-pouts-
a small part of me wished Luke hadn't stopped the two from fighting so soon though, I like a good fight every now and then... but meh if I get that deprived I'll pop in a video game or something.
-giggles-
watching Sync rip Van apart would be an immensely interesting event in and of itself.
-stares-
Peony and Natalia... still seems a little weird in my book, but meh! on the side note... funny as hell
-hums-
for some bizarre reason I feel as though I'm contradicting myself in a previous review, but... bah!
keep up the wonderful work!
-Mizu
2Mizu Hosekiit's just so entertaining and interesting to see Sync playing along with the 'heros' of the story instead of being an actual enemy...
-pouts-
a small part of me wished Luke hadn't stopped the two from fighting so soon though, I like a good fight every now and then... but meh if I get that deprived I'll pop in a video game or something.
-giggles-
watching Sync rip Van apart would be an immensely interesting event in and of itself.
-stares-
Peony and Natalia... still seems a little weird in my book, but meh! on the side note... funny as hell
-hums-
for some bizarre reason I feel as though I'm contradicting myself in a previous review, but... bah!
keep up the wonderful work!
-Mizu
4/7 c37 Guest
Liked to see you update again
Liked to see you update again
3/13 c2 1Animegirlluver
Ok a boy marrying a boy is just so...wierd...I was thinking Luke marrying Natalia not Asch.
1AnimegirlluverOk a boy marrying a boy is just so...wierd...I was thinking Luke marrying Natalia not Asch.
3/7 c36 2Mizu Hoseki
dun dun DUN!
-face palms-
if Van was aiming for a pissy Sync, well... he got it.
Luke has a good gut for this kinda thing...
-waves-
-can't wait to see the next chapter!
-Mizu
2Mizu Hosekidun dun DUN!
-face palms-
if Van was aiming for a pissy Sync, well... he got it.
Luke has a good gut for this kinda thing...
-waves-
-can't wait to see the next chapter!
-Mizu
3/7 c36 Guest
Sync you better hurry over fast. It doesnt look too good. I love this story. :D So much drama.
Sync you better hurry over fast. It doesnt look too good. I love this story. :D So much drama.
1/1 c1 1Lil'MissEya
OwO
Hi! I'm new, and have not alot to say about this chapter. (But that doesn't mean I don't like it.)
Okay, here goes...
Awesome.
Tis is all.
1Lil'MissEyaOwO
Hi! I'm new, and have not alot to say about this chapter. (But that doesn't mean I don't like it.)
Okay, here goes...
Awesome.
Tis is all.
12/30/2012 c35 9dawn chase
I can't wait for the next chapter. I love how you capture the characters so perfectly!
9dawn chaseI can't wait for the next chapter. I love how you capture the characters so perfectly!
12/29/2012 c35 2Mizu Hoseki
oh dear, we've got trouble poor Ion and Anise.
-stares-
Natalia and Peony married? that makes me giggle
oh I can't wait for the next chapter
-giggles insanely-
Mizu
2Mizu Hosekioh dear, we've got trouble poor Ion and Anise.
-stares-
Natalia and Peony married? that makes me giggle
oh I can't wait for the next chapter
-giggles insanely-
Mizu
12/29/2012 c35 17guren666
Oh my ! Finally a story with a proper plot twists along the way. You made my day. :D
17guren666Oh my ! Finally a story with a proper plot twists along the way. You made my day. :D
12/8/2012 c34 2Mizu Hoseki
-stares-
I'm sorry the thought of Jade and Natalia getting married to one another is so strange and bizarre that I can't even imagine it...
-hums-
but a dumbstruck Jade would be an entirely different matter if you ask me - I would love to see something like that for sure
I wonder what Ingobert's response to marrying Natalia and Peony would be, though I imagine that would have solved a lot more problems then Asch and Luke getting married. why not just merge both kingdoms and be done with it, screw the score and all that annoying crap. then go out and bet the snot out of Van
I agree with Sync, the way Jade pulled the rug out from under the guards was very entertaining -
Mizu
2Mizu Hoseki-stares-
I'm sorry the thought of Jade and Natalia getting married to one another is so strange and bizarre that I can't even imagine it...
-hums-
but a dumbstruck Jade would be an entirely different matter if you ask me - I would love to see something like that for sure
I wonder what Ingobert's response to marrying Natalia and Peony would be, though I imagine that would have solved a lot more problems then Asch and Luke getting married. why not just merge both kingdoms and be done with it, screw the score and all that annoying crap. then go out and bet the snot out of Van
I agree with Sync, the way Jade pulled the rug out from under the guards was very entertaining -
Mizu