for Chasing Pavements8/9/2012 c1 
5Cashii11
I cannot for the life of me understand how this doesn't have a hundred thousand reviews and as many faves. It's awesomesauce *clapclapclap*
5Cashii11I cannot for the life of me understand how this doesn't have a hundred thousand reviews and as many faves. It's awesomesauce *clapclapclap*
5/22/2012 c1 HJWKSKSLLDKDOFOFPJFCJFJCJFIKSG
FUCK YOU THIS IS OFFENSIVE TO AMERICANS, YOU IDIOT! DON'T YOU KNOW WHAT 'CHASING PAVEMENTS' MEANS? IT IS OFFESIVE TO AMERICANS! DELETE THIS STORY NOW! I'VE ALREADY REPORTED IT 27 TIMES, DON'T MAKE ME DO IT AGAIN!
YOUR PROBABLY A TERRORIST! SUCK MY COCK, BITCH!
FUCK YOU THIS IS OFFENSIVE TO AMERICANS, YOU IDIOT! DON'T YOU KNOW WHAT 'CHASING PAVEMENTS' MEANS? IT IS OFFESIVE TO AMERICANS! DELETE THIS STORY NOW! I'VE ALREADY REPORTED IT 27 TIMES, DON'T MAKE ME DO IT AGAIN!
YOUR PROBABLY A TERRORIST! SUCK MY COCK, BITCH!
2/2/2012 c1 18I'mDifferent-GetOverIt
Awww. This is rather sweet. I found Sadie IC. :) I like the way you wrote Emma too. She seemed very sweet and nice. Janie reminded me of so many girls I know...
I think the best thing about this is that I can relate to it. I've been in Sadie's friendless position before. And it's hell.
So kudos to you for writing this. I usually don't like Sadie much, but this...wow. I love this. :)
Keep writing!
~Different
18I'mDifferent-GetOverItAwww. This is rather sweet. I found Sadie IC. :) I like the way you wrote Emma too. She seemed very sweet and nice. Janie reminded me of so many girls I know...
I think the best thing about this is that I can relate to it. I've been in Sadie's friendless position before. And it's hell.
So kudos to you for writing this. I usually don't like Sadie much, but this...wow. I love this. :)
Keep writing!
~Different
2/18/2011 c1 enjoylife1994
Wow. Sadie's character was just...wow. I had a fondness for Sadie but I never actually imagined her being THAT bad. That said, I think you portrayed her really well. It shows the angst she's going through. I like the effort Gran puts in. But Sadie just needs a discipline check, really.
But that was well-written. I enjoyed reading it very much :)
Wow. Sadie's character was just...wow. I had a fondness for Sadie but I never actually imagined her being THAT bad. That said, I think you portrayed her really well. It shows the angst she's going through. I like the effort Gran puts in. But Sadie just needs a discipline check, really.
But that was well-written. I enjoyed reading it very much :)
1/22/2011 c1 Pony
Sweet! Good job
Sweet! Good job
1/21/2011 c1 1Camorra
Cute, well-written, and little to no grammar mistakes!
Exellent work! Keep it up!
1CamorraCute, well-written, and little to no grammar mistakes!
Exellent work! Keep it up!
1/21/2011 c1 2mythomagic
wow. i mean, i never liked sadie, but during this, she was such a JERK, even more than usual! if i was gran, she would have been grounded for life! in other words...I LOVED IT! and i'm so happy you've written another kane chronicles story! FINALLY! GREAT JOB! and i love gran's character! pure genius! keep it up!
-mythomagic (aka greenplanet)
p.s. recycle please! save our planet!
2mythomagicwow. i mean, i never liked sadie, but during this, she was such a JERK, even more than usual! if i was gran, she would have been grounded for life! in other words...I LOVED IT! and i'm so happy you've written another kane chronicles story! FINALLY! GREAT JOB! and i love gran's character! pure genius! keep it up!
-mythomagic (aka greenplanet)
p.s. recycle please! save our planet!