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12StarnightSam
I loved this! Such a good read! I hate it is over!
I adored Molly and Christopher, they were just what Jack needed. Such an interesting and entertaining plot! I loved the angst and the mystery, not to forget the love relationships between all your characters. I felt like I was there with them. You have a gift of drawing in the reader.
I have really enjoyed all your writings. You have a gift. Thanks for sharing it.
Now to find another of your stories!
12StarnightSamI loved this! Such a good read! I hate it is over!
I adored Molly and Christopher, they were just what Jack needed. Such an interesting and entertaining plot! I loved the angst and the mystery, not to forget the love relationships between all your characters. I felt like I was there with them. You have a gift of drawing in the reader.
I have really enjoyed all your writings. You have a gift. Thanks for sharing it.
Now to find another of your stories!
9/11/2011 c20 Schatze8210
An alien race corrupted by one seven-year old...and with "Tim Bits" no less! MARVELOUS!
An alien race corrupted by one seven-year old...and with "Tim Bits" no less! MARVELOUS!
8/4/2011 c1 8hedwiggins
I just started reading this, and am finding it very good. And while I understand that you needed SG1 to not believe in Jack for the purposes of your story, I believe 200% that even with evidence like that in front of them, there is no way in H*** ... er, ... in Netu that they would believe he would do something like that. In fact, even with that evidence, they would have done everything in their power to prove it was a lie and not betray him.
Moving past that, however, this is still a good story, and I'm looking forward to reading the rest.
8hedwigginsI just started reading this, and am finding it very good. And while I understand that you needed SG1 to not believe in Jack for the purposes of your story, I believe 200% that even with evidence like that in front of them, there is no way in H*** ... er, ... in Netu that they would believe he would do something like that. In fact, even with that evidence, they would have done everything in their power to prove it was a lie and not betray him.
Moving past that, however, this is still a good story, and I'm looking forward to reading the rest.
7/16/2011 c20 5sammie77
Finally read this story - couldn't get into it when first posted - the idea that Sam would believe that Jack was a traitor bothered me. Glad I got over that and read this - and now going to read the sequel. Excellent story - very well written. Enjoyed it very much!
5sammie77Finally read this story - couldn't get into it when first posted - the idea that Sam would believe that Jack was a traitor bothered me. Glad I got over that and read this - and now going to read the sequel. Excellent story - very well written. Enjoyed it very much!
7/11/2011 c20 18hifield
A lot of great moments in this chapter as well ... loved the Tim Bits - too funny. So nice to see them make plans for their new family.
Really enjoyed your story and now looking forward to The Camping Trip.
18hifieldA lot of great moments in this chapter as well ... loved the Tim Bits - too funny. So nice to see them make plans for their new family.
Really enjoyed your story and now looking forward to The Camping Trip.
7/11/2011 c19 hifield
So many emotions to work through for everyone! Loved his talk with Daniel and the discovery of all his new abilities - too cool. And then for him to review San's physics book was priceless.
Great chapter.
So many emotions to work through for everyone! Loved his talk with Daniel and the discovery of all his new abilities - too cool. And then for him to review San's physics book was priceless.
Great chapter.
6/23/2011 c13 hifield
So many good things in this chapter ending with Jack realizing that Sam would never willingly betray him. They could use some of that Asgard magic right about now. Loved it.
So many good things in this chapter ending with Jack realizing that Sam would never willingly betray him. They could use some of that Asgard magic right about now. Loved it.
6/22/2011 c12 hifield
Love how this is moving along especially the development of your oc characters.
Love how this is moving along especially the development of your oc characters.