for An Evolution of the Omnitrix5/7/2011 c4 
1Mossyhairundys
Huh? WTH? You got some touch ups to do. Did you proof read your stories? Spelling mistakes and grammatical errors, please proof read. A little bit Mary sueish. But nonetheless,interesting story.
1MossyhairundysHuh? WTH? You got some touch ups to do. Did you proof read your stories? Spelling mistakes and grammatical errors, please proof read. A little bit Mary sueish. But nonetheless,interesting story.