for Running Up That Hill7/30/2012 c1 
3Tellurium
You are fantastic. I think I love you(r writing). I'm glad that someone takes the time to deconstruct these in-betweens in the game as much as I like to do in my head. Excellent job!
3TelluriumYou are fantastic. I think I love you(r writing). I'm glad that someone takes the time to deconstruct these in-betweens in the game as much as I like to do in my head. Excellent job!
6/13/2012 c1 10Shayni May
D'aaaaaaaw!
That was cute! I adored it! Loved how your sentences sounded :D And you got Alistair's personality exactly!
10Shayni MayD'aaaaaaaw!
That was cute! I adored it! Loved how your sentences sounded :D And you got Alistair's personality exactly!
11/4/2011 c1 2Marvey4
Man, Alistair talks a lot! But I suppose it's understandable, considering his background. Hope you update. :)
2Marvey4Man, Alistair talks a lot! But I suppose it's understandable, considering his background. Hope you update. :)
6/28/2011 c1 3Thunderstar666
Loved this. The world definitely needs more Mahariel, particularly when it's this good. The game really didn't provide enough opportunities to express yourself as a semi-feral, Shem-hating foreigner. ;P
And Alistair? Was perfect. From sending mental apologies 'just in case' to the "pleasedonthurtme" to babbling Mahariel into submission and then forgetting his own promise - it's all just so Alistair. Great job, this was a joy to read.
3Thunderstar666Loved this. The world definitely needs more Mahariel, particularly when it's this good. The game really didn't provide enough opportunities to express yourself as a semi-feral, Shem-hating foreigner. ;P
And Alistair? Was perfect. From sending mental apologies 'just in case' to the "pleasedonthurtme" to babbling Mahariel into submission and then forgetting his own promise - it's all just so Alistair. Great job, this was a joy to read.
1/28/2011 c1 5Lady Cousland
This was really good. I like how you took a situation from the game itself and extended it, adding the Warden's emotions. It seemed pretty realistic, as far as realistic goes in a fantasy story :)
I like your characterization of Alistair. This seems like something he would do.
As for typos, there weren't very many. A few of the paragraphs could have been combined into one, but honestly it doesn't take away from the story.
Really well done,
Lady C.
5Lady CouslandThis was really good. I like how you took a situation from the game itself and extended it, adding the Warden's emotions. It seemed pretty realistic, as far as realistic goes in a fantasy story :)
I like your characterization of Alistair. This seems like something he would do.
As for typos, there weren't very many. A few of the paragraphs could have been combined into one, but honestly it doesn't take away from the story.
Really well done,
Lady C.
1/27/2011 c1 18Merilsell
First of all: You are damn right with your A/N *Dalish-sister fistbump*
Second: I so enjoyed this one-shot. Finally a Mahariel with personality, where I can notice that she is actually Dalish and not a Cousland pressed in a body of a Dalish. Alas a mistake many authors of Mahariel stories make...but your PC was indeed delightfully and distinguishable Dalish. Thanks you so much for that ^^
Your Mahariel seems to be fun and I would love to read more of her, especially with such a delightful Alistair at her side. This wall of words from him to get her to eat let me giggle, this is SO something Alistair would do. XD
*faved*
18MerilsellFirst of all: You are damn right with your A/N *Dalish-sister fistbump*
Second: I so enjoyed this one-shot. Finally a Mahariel with personality, where I can notice that she is actually Dalish and not a Cousland pressed in a body of a Dalish. Alas a mistake many authors of Mahariel stories make...but your PC was indeed delightfully and distinguishable Dalish. Thanks you so much for that ^^
Your Mahariel seems to be fun and I would love to read more of her, especially with such a delightful Alistair at her side. This wall of words from him to get her to eat let me giggle, this is SO something Alistair would do. XD
*faved*
1/25/2011 c1 7roxfox1962
A delightful one-shot, indeed.
"...a proud, frightened, injured, and cornered wolf that has been separated from her pack." fit perfectly as a depiction of Mahariel.
"He didn't like silence. It brought back memories of the Chantry and loneliness." was a haunting look into Alistair's thoughts.
I found Alistair's not-stop rambling, and the mention of 'Bob The Bug' to be *very* entertaining.
A very enjoyable read!
7roxfox1962A delightful one-shot, indeed.
"...a proud, frightened, injured, and cornered wolf that has been separated from her pack." fit perfectly as a depiction of Mahariel.
"He didn't like silence. It brought back memories of the Chantry and loneliness." was a haunting look into Alistair's thoughts.
I found Alistair's not-stop rambling, and the mention of 'Bob The Bug' to be *very* entertaining.
A very enjoyable read!
1/24/2011 c1 23Jaden Anderson
haha I like it :) random, but great. Always love Alistair's sense of humor. Good job
~Jaden
23Jaden Andersonhaha I like it :) random, but great. Always love Alistair's sense of humor. Good job
~Jaden