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6/24/2012 c4 6Hazmatt
Wonderful chapter! I really enjoyed it! Very sweet and moving!
6/24/2012 c3 Hazmatt
Incredible chapter! Very hot! I really enjoyed it! Very sweet and emotional! They are perfect for each other!
6/24/2012 c2 Hazmatt
Amazing chapter! I really enjoyed it! Very hot! I hope everything works out!
6/24/2012 c1 Hazmatt
Amazing chapter! I really enjoyed it! Very deep! I hope everything works out!
3/24/2011 c4 bevlengy
loved this sarah, thankyou..i don't write but i like the shipper stories.yay ! :)
3/20/2011 c4 33cifan
Oh, what a nice, sweet ending! I really enjoyed this story, Snyder!
3/20/2011 c3 cifan
Ho-ly crap. HOT! You were on fire, girl!
3/16/2011 c4 2rindy713
yep, that's classic bobby. he sees so clearly how much alex matters to people, and yet he can't grasp that he means something to people. now that he knows alex loves him, maybe that will change over time. now he has something really good in his life that he won't want to lose!
3/14/2011 c4 48superfelix
Finally, I'll finish reading that story.

She loves the size of him and finds his warm bulk comforting...so sweet.

You've always had me...lol.

This feels so right...oh yes!

I've thought about what my life would be like without you in it...sigh.

I can't help but wonder if it's the last time I'm going to see you alive...oh no, poor Alex.

"But what about me? Don't you think I'd feel guilty if something happen to you? You don't think it would kill me if something happened to you when I was supposed to have your back?" she asks. "It goes both ways you know."...so right.

Because every time you do, a part of me dies...sniff.

They make love again and as the world around them continues on, Alex and Bobby are too busy getting lost in each other to care about anything else but them and the love they feel for one another...lovely last line.
3/14/2011 c4 greeneyesbell1
sorry my review is late...i love the attention to the emotional details and aspects of this,very well written once again i am majorley pleased by your work...5 stars my dear...cannot wait until your next story..:)
3/7/2011 c4 crazy for loci
I love happy endings and what a Happy Ending. Thank you. What I would give for this to be what happens with them at the end.
3/4/2011 c4 di1959uk
Oh wow! What a wonderful chapter and equally fabulous ending. Just LOVED it!

Read it really quickly as I'm off out for the evening but will re-read again over the weekend.

Looking forward to more stories from you.
2/27/2011 c3 2Medea Callous
Good chapter! I liked the dialogue. But I don't actually think BG goes commando - I think that was just VDO blowing smoke. He's a joker sometimes in interviews, particularly when he's asked questions he doesn't feel like answering. I really don't think wardrobe would let him go without wearing underwear, and I don't see any reason why the actor would make that choice for him as a character. Just my opinion.
2/23/2011 c3 di1959uk
Oh boy! This chapter is fantastic, you are such a good writer! I love all your stories but this has to be a favourite. Roll on Chapter 4!
2/20/2011 c3 48superfelix
There's a hunger in his eyes she's never seen before and yet she also detects vulnerability in them that she suspects is shown in her expressions as well...great line.

And I don't want to be hurt...lol.

She could never be just a one night stand to him...And he not fo her.

If this happens, there's no turning back for me. I want you, all of you...Sweet, he speaks about his fears.

"Are you willing to risk our friendship, our partnership for love?" he asks...Great line

Before it even lands on the floor, Bobby hands are all over her...lol

"No more waiting. Foreplay can come later,"...lol, NO!

They can take their time and make love later but right now she wants to be fucked by the man she loves...what? No!

"You are big," she informs him with a devilish grin...Omg, naughty
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