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5Velocity9
Pretty good! But keep in mind that adult-Conner sent the 2nd SchwarzzenATOR back in *a hurried move* to counter-act Skynet's sending back the liquid-Terminator to kill young-Conner.
Great story...Plz read my fanfic, "The Terminator Political Parody"
5Velocity9Pretty good! But keep in mind that adult-Conner sent the 2nd SchwarzzenATOR back in *a hurried move* to counter-act Skynet's sending back the liquid-Terminator to kill young-Conner.
Great story...Plz read my fanfic, "The Terminator Political Parody"
12/16/2003 c1 Viper
Maybe I'd believe that female terminators did suck if you didn't also believe that this is a good story. And though I had formed no opinion one way or the other on the goodness of female terminators, I will now hold the opinion that they are the supreme beings of the universe, due to the fact that I am diametrically opposed to anyone who cannot see the glaring errors in this story. It seems to be separated into sentence long paragraphs. It has many horrific spelling mistakes. It makes no sense whatsoever, as a Terminator fic, or any other piece of fiction at all.
Then there is: "more scarier". MORE SCARIER? And no one thought to point this error out? Doesn't it jolt anyone else right out of the story? Just me then.
Maybe I'd believe that female terminators did suck if you didn't also believe that this is a good story. And though I had formed no opinion one way or the other on the goodness of female terminators, I will now hold the opinion that they are the supreme beings of the universe, due to the fact that I am diametrically opposed to anyone who cannot see the glaring errors in this story. It seems to be separated into sentence long paragraphs. It has many horrific spelling mistakes. It makes no sense whatsoever, as a Terminator fic, or any other piece of fiction at all.
Then there is: "more scarier". MORE SCARIER? And no one thought to point this error out? Doesn't it jolt anyone else right out of the story? Just me then.
9/1/2003 c1 Moonwalker
Yep. This was very good, but female terminators suck. However it is just my opinion so don't get mad. And don't you guys think that I am some kind of male chauvinist. I'm female myself.
Anyway...you can write really skilfully and your story is easy to read.
Yep. This was very good, but female terminators suck. However it is just my opinion so don't get mad. And don't you guys think that I am some kind of male chauvinist. I'm female myself.
Anyway...you can write really skilfully and your story is easy to read.
7/1/2003 c1 rothoshotmail.com
Very good, but if John brought himself to the future then wouldn't that create a temporal feedback loop and cause them to keep repeating the events from all the movies again and again and again ad infinitum?
Very good, but if John brought himself to the future then wouldn't that create a temporal feedback loop and cause them to keep repeating the events from all the movies again and again and again ad infinitum?
2/13/2003 c1 11Caleb Nova
Interesting concept. Few things though- Cyberdyne isn't the evil of the future, Skynet is. Skynet is a super-aware Neurodyne processor built by Cyberdyne then used by the U.S military. Two, the Terminator played by Arnold was actually a Terminator 800 Series Model 101. As one of the producers explained it, the 800 series is the type of exoskeleton, and the model number is the facade. So, all Model 101s look like Arnold, and Model 102 would look like someone else. Other than that, you should continue.
11Caleb NovaInteresting concept. Few things though- Cyberdyne isn't the evil of the future, Skynet is. Skynet is a super-aware Neurodyne processor built by Cyberdyne then used by the U.S military. Two, the Terminator played by Arnold was actually a Terminator 800 Series Model 101. As one of the producers explained it, the 800 series is the type of exoskeleton, and the model number is the facade. So, all Model 101s look like Arnold, and Model 102 would look like someone else. Other than that, you should continue.
5/9/2002 c1 Arrow4
lovely, intriguing, indeed. I am quite looking forward to the next bit, whenever it is to come. Very stirring. I do have one thing to say:"more scarier" ? Please.
lovely, intriguing, indeed. I am quite looking forward to the next bit, whenever it is to come. Very stirring. I do have one thing to say:"more scarier" ? Please.
5/8/2002 c1 T
keep on writing you have an interesting story here
keep on writing you have an interesting story here
4/4/2002 c1 Harpo
Ohhh... I lvoe where this is going! When's the next part gonna be up? I love it! Only bad part: the dis on Arnold! He's just...cool! ::pouts:: But I like this alot, one of the better writen terminator fics out there. Keep up the great work!
Ohhh... I lvoe where this is going! When's the next part gonna be up? I love it! Only bad part: the dis on Arnold! He's just...cool! ::pouts:: But I like this alot, one of the better writen terminator fics out there. Keep up the great work!
3/23/2002 c1 speedfreakssj
cool story oly you need to get the next chapters up in a month :). I think it would be a very cool fix when it's done.
cool story oly you need to get the next chapters up in a month :). I think it would be a very cool fix when it's done.
3/22/2002 c1 Number 36
Sounds intriguing! Writing in the first person makes it a little more interesting, too. Can't wait to read more...
Sounds intriguing! Writing in the first person makes it a little more interesting, too. Can't wait to read more...