for Flush & Falldown2/5/2011 c2 
9Syd15
Wow, this was pretty amazing. The characters are spot on and the rythem of the words where perfect.
Great job!
I'm so glad I found this, thanks for sharing.
9Syd15Wow, this was pretty amazing. The characters are spot on and the rythem of the words where perfect.
Great job!
I'm so glad I found this, thanks for sharing.
2/4/2011 c2 Kaz
Wow loved it :o) soooo good and loved how desriptive it was, Alexis's phone call was a nice touch. Thanks for posting. Please write more Caskett. Kaz x
Wow loved it :o) soooo good and loved how desriptive it was, Alexis's phone call was a nice touch. Thanks for posting. Please write more Caskett. Kaz x
2/4/2011 c2 Nathan fan
It was awesome to get Kate's perspective on this! Thanks so much! One of the parts that you wrote focused on something that really struck me too. "She knows that Castle is not a brutal man," but she also has no doubt that, "Castle would have killed the man with his bare hands." I thought that was an extremely powerful scene and I totally agree with the way you interpreted it. I love your line that, "She and Castle need to stop playing phone tag with other people's hearts." What a fantastic way to express the situation! "Thank you, Alexander," was a great reference back to the earlier episode. It was a beautiful ending, again referencing the phone tag. I was very impressed with both chapters!
It was awesome to get Kate's perspective on this! Thanks so much! One of the parts that you wrote focused on something that really struck me too. "She knows that Castle is not a brutal man," but she also has no doubt that, "Castle would have killed the man with his bare hands." I thought that was an extremely powerful scene and I totally agree with the way you interpreted it. I love your line that, "She and Castle need to stop playing phone tag with other people's hearts." What a fantastic way to express the situation! "Thank you, Alexander," was a great reference back to the earlier episode. It was a beautiful ending, again referencing the phone tag. I was very impressed with both chapters!
2/4/2011 c2 5GhostWriterLost
is it possible to adore a phrase and still have no real idea what it means? I am, of course, referring to: "but she can't help but think maybe she and Castle need to stop playing phone tag with other people's hearts." Adore the concept; adore the story as a whole. You pack a heck of a wallop in two relatively short paragraphs and paint the aftermath of the adrenaline rush(es) spot on. Brava!
5GhostWriterLostis it possible to adore a phrase and still have no real idea what it means? I am, of course, referring to: "but she can't help but think maybe she and Castle need to stop playing phone tag with other people's hearts." Adore the concept; adore the story as a whole. You pack a heck of a wallop in two relatively short paragraphs and paint the aftermath of the adrenaline rush(es) spot on. Brava!
2/4/2011 c2 11Scarlet Royal
I believe that Kate would be the one to dream about him being dead. When you have an overbearingly dark job, like being a detective, it is almost like a part of the whole shebang. I like to write nightmares, being an unfortunate frequenter of them myself, so you wrote that VERY well.
11Scarlet RoyalI believe that Kate would be the one to dream about him being dead. When you have an overbearingly dark job, like being a detective, it is almost like a part of the whole shebang. I like to write nightmares, being an unfortunate frequenter of them myself, so you wrote that VERY well.
2/4/2011 c1 Scarlet Royal
Great perspective from Castle and I could not agree more with your ending note. In that last clip of Castle’s face, you could see that what he felt for Kate was more than some desire; it was a need for her in his life. I love it how in this series the most profound scenes are transpired without words. Yet again, great work!
Great perspective from Castle and I could not agree more with your ending note. In that last clip of Castle’s face, you could see that what he felt for Kate was more than some desire; it was a need for her in his life. I love it how in this series the most profound scenes are transpired without words. Yet again, great work!
2/4/2011 c2 I'm Widget
Awesome! I just wish this wasn't the end. Any thoughts of writing a sequel? Pretty please?
Awesome! I just wish this wasn't the end. Any thoughts of writing a sequel? Pretty please?
2/4/2011 c2 2Blooky
As much as I love the oneshot and this second chapter...I still feel like it's not finished. They are so raw and vulnerable right now, that the prospect of their dinner sounds very 'dangerous'. It's like they're not even in control of their own tag game. And they both know it. That tension you have created is truly awesome. It's teetering on the brink. And I'm wondering which way they will fall;).
2BlookyAs much as I love the oneshot and this second chapter...I still feel like it's not finished. They are so raw and vulnerable right now, that the prospect of their dinner sounds very 'dangerous'. It's like they're not even in control of their own tag game. And they both know it. That tension you have created is truly awesome. It's teetering on the brink. And I'm wondering which way they will fall;).
2/4/2011 c2 4SarahlovesA
Another amazing chapter. How do you do it? I could start quoting the best bits, but I would end up copying half of it! Again, I hardly drew breath when I was reading. Keep writing, pleeeeeeeeeease! The world needs more beautifully written prose and I need more images of Richard Castle being romantic and adorable in my head. :)
4SarahlovesAAnother amazing chapter. How do you do it? I could start quoting the best bits, but I would end up copying half of it! Again, I hardly drew breath when I was reading. Keep writing, pleeeeeeeeeease! The world needs more beautifully written prose and I need more images of Richard Castle being romantic and adorable in my head. :)
2/4/2011 c2 23Sandiane Carter
That was really good. You did right not to expand too much on the kiss and the ambulance scene (though I love your take on it); the bit with Montgomery at the station and then Kate's reaction when she gets home were spot-on and very moving.
Interesting dream, too (as opposed to Castle's). And I loved that ending, which is entirely believable (if not entirely bright and sunny ;) ! Good work !
23Sandiane CarterThat was really good. You did right not to expand too much on the kiss and the ambulance scene (though I love your take on it); the bit with Montgomery at the station and then Kate's reaction when she gets home were spot-on and very moving.
Interesting dream, too (as opposed to Castle's). And I loved that ending, which is entirely believable (if not entirely bright and sunny ;) ! Good work !
2/4/2011 c2 Jjf
I really happy too. Phone tag. With other peoples hearts. Great. Love the POV and so looking forward to the dinner.
I really happy too. Phone tag. With other peoples hearts. Great. Love the POV and so looking forward to the dinner.