for A Promise4/22 c1 annieathome1
I love your description of how Steven feels about Brendan - 'frustrated one minute...and 'frustrated' the next!' and that phrase about bumping into something hard & 'Brendan shaped' - too funny. and the image of Brendan taking off his jacket, rolling up his sleeves & sweeping up , looking 'dressed up, slick, hot and...domestic.' yes, yes, yes and yes! this was nice.
I love your description of how Steven feels about Brendan - 'frustrated one minute...and 'frustrated' the next!' and that phrase about bumping into something hard & 'Brendan shaped' - too funny. and the image of Brendan taking off his jacket, rolling up his sleeves & sweeping up , looking 'dressed up, slick, hot and...domestic.' yes, yes, yes and yes! this was nice.
4/15/2011 c1 
9neutronstarcollision
Please, please say this is going to be more than a one shot. The end had me crying it was just so amazing!
9neutronstarcollisionPlease, please say this is going to be more than a one shot. The end had me crying it was just so amazing!
2/3/2011 c1 iscreamloud
Brilliant fic and so very them! Can't wait to read more of your writing :-) x
Brilliant fic and so very them! Can't wait to read more of your writing :-) x
1/29/2011 c1 Boo
Brilliant! You write Brendan so well, can't wait to read more of your work! Really enjoyed this :-)
Brilliant! You write Brendan so well, can't wait to read more of your work! Really enjoyed this :-)
1/29/2011 c1 vik87
Brilliant story :) Loved it.
I loved that Brendan singled Ste out to stay behind. It was completely in character all the way through.
And I loved the tenderness.
Hope you write more.
Brilliant story :) Loved it.
I loved that Brendan singled Ste out to stay behind. It was completely in character all the way through.
And I loved the tenderness.
Hope you write more.