12/5/2012 c1 4cheesebread222
you should continue the story. its good. a few grammatical errors here and there, but good none the less.

the only thing i would suggest is not calling the shared dream thing an Inception device. it just...i don't know, feels kinda weird to call it that. in the film its original function was to train solders, and most of its use was to steal information. Inception was rare and many believed it impossible.

but defiantly continue your story. it would be great, and with a well developed plot would really go far.

anyway, i hope you do continue it, and if you do, then i cant wait for more.

9/2/2011 c1 2AnarchyTurtle
Hey, thanks for reviewing my story. Nice chapter btw, by the looks of things your not continuing your story. Shame, it had potential. Mind you Inception is a goddamn confusing film. Getting the plot straight would be a **. Nonetheless nicely done.