for Pure Revelations5/12 c34 Lillicat1
Weber and Cheney give me the big time creeps. I hope that Bella can get some counseling before she drives Edward away, but I don't know how she can do so without alerting the powers at LaVerrot.
Weber and Cheney give me the big time creeps. I hope that Bella can get some counseling before she drives Edward away, but I don't know how she can do so without alerting the powers at LaVerrot.
5/12 c32 Lillicat1
Jasper has enough psychological knowledge to recognize Bella's symptoms of PTS over her rapr that has been suppressed for years. I just hope she can get Edward to understand.
Tanya is such a douche. She needs to be exposed for what she is.
Jasper has enough psychological knowledge to recognize Bella's symptoms of PTS over her rapr that has been suppressed for years. I just hope she can get Edward to understand.
Tanya is such a douche. She needs to be exposed for what she is.
5/12 c31 Lillicat1
Edwards accidental "release" in class was hysterical. If E&B ever do make love, it will be a neucular explosion . The naming of Edwards penis the "phython" just cracks me up. When Alice said the" phython go your tongue ", Bella had no clue.
Edwards accidental "release" in class was hysterical. If E&B ever do make love, it will be a neucular explosion . The naming of Edwards penis the "phython" just cracks me up. When Alice said the" phython go your tongue ", Bella had no clue.
5/12 c27 Lillicat1
How in the hell did Tanya follow Edward into the men's bathroom w/out being noticed?
How in the hell did Tanya follow Edward into the men's bathroom w/out being noticed?
5/12 c25 Lillicat1
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What I don't understand, is how has Tanya managed to be sexually active when they are all watched so carefully?
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What I don't understand, is how has Tanya managed to be sexually active when they are all watched so carefully?
5/12 c24 Lillicat
Ive always wished that the Tanya /Edward/Bella triangle was brought out more in the Saga, instead of beating the Edward/Bella/Jacob triangle to death. It gives the story more depth. Thanks for doing that.
Ive always wished that the Tanya /Edward/Bella triangle was brought out more in the Saga, instead of beating the Edward/Bella/Jacob triangle to death. It gives the story more depth. Thanks for doing that.
5/12 c23 Lillicat1
Love the closet mishap. That was priceless.
Love the closet mishap. That was priceless.
5/11 c18 Lillicat1
The "python" is hysterical. What happened with Bella is she is allergic to the sunscreen . It's good that Edward was able to tell his Mom how he feels about Bella.
The "python" is hysterical. What happened with Bella is she is allergic to the sunscreen . It's good that Edward was able to tell his Mom how he feels about Bella.
5/11 c16 Lillicat1
Your story reminds me of the Flock , where laboratories existed to develop a cloned super race. Very interesting story. I am more ha ready for Bella & Edward to get together.
Your story reminds me of the Flock , where laboratories existed to develop a cloned super race. Very interesting story. I am more ha ready for Bella & Edward to get together.
5/11 c1 lillicat1
This is really different. I always like stories where Tanya is after Edward, but Bella gets him.
This is really different. I always like stories where Tanya is after Edward, but Bella gets him.
5/4 c95 jujubakiller
Wow! This story was such a crazy ride!
I really enjoyed it. SOmetimes I though it was too long, but then, when all the details started coming together I thought everything added up.
It's marked as completed, so, are you girls still planing on an epilogue?
Wow! This story was such a crazy ride!
I really enjoyed it. SOmetimes I though it was too long, but then, when all the details started coming together I thought everything added up.
It's marked as completed, so, are you girls still planing on an epilogue?
4/30 c95 mcanary
WHEW! I just started this story last Wednesday and i've just finished the last chapter here on tuesday evening! Talk about some serious reading here. Once i started, i didn't want to put the laptop down. This has been so very well written and full of twists and surprises that you most definitely kept the reader on their toes. You two complement each other so well in your writing styles, that it just flowed so well together that it is hard to believe that it was actually two different authors writing this. Bravo! I will most definitely be checking out your other stories, great job and thanks for sharing!
WHEW! I just started this story last Wednesday and i've just finished the last chapter here on tuesday evening! Talk about some serious reading here. Once i started, i didn't want to put the laptop down. This has been so very well written and full of twists and surprises that you most definitely kept the reader on their toes. You two complement each other so well in your writing styles, that it just flowed so well together that it is hard to believe that it was actually two different authors writing this. Bravo! I will most definitely be checking out your other stories, great job and thanks for sharing!
4/28 c29 Fanatic22
29 Chapters of slow burn! Get to the point!
I like the mystery that's why im still reading but come on! Its just really slow.
29 Chapters of slow burn! Get to the point!
I like the mystery that's why im still reading but come on! Its just really slow.
4/28 c95 9696scarlet
I really love this story - thank you! Are you still planning on writing an epilogue?
I really love this story - thank you! Are you still planning on writing an epilogue?
4/23 c95 Jaygm
What a story! I saved the last chapter until this morning. I read like crazy last night and finally stopped when I knew that things were going to be okay for Edward and Bella. Can't wait for the epilogue- there are still questions as to where they will go from here.
Thanks for the fantastic tale!
What a story! I saved the last chapter until this morning. I read like crazy last night and finally stopped when I knew that things were going to be okay for Edward and Bella. Can't wait for the epilogue- there are still questions as to where they will go from here.
Thanks for the fantastic tale!