for The Power of Loyalty9/1/2012 c4 
9excessivelyperky
Nicely done. Would it be too much for black to have a life and family, as the other two have or had? I suppose so...
9excessivelyperkyNicely done. Would it be too much for black to have a life and family, as the other two have or had? I suppose so...
9/1/2012 c3 excessivelyperky
Of course Snape is confused. Nobody's ever thanked him before. (you know, like nobody did in canon).
Good chapter.
Of course Snape is confused. Nobody's ever thanked him before. (you know, like nobody did in canon).
Good chapter.
9/1/2012 c2 excessivelyperky
Ah, now it makes sense. Dumbledore would do anything to rescue Harry. One hopes he doesn't leave Snape behind...
Ah, now it makes sense. Dumbledore would do anything to rescue Harry. One hopes he doesn't leave Snape behind...
7/21/2012 c1 Naniwoiutennen
Oh my, this story was brilliant. It was so beautifully done! Keep up the great work.
P.S. Sorry I didnt log in, but I did sign with my screenname :P
Oh my, this story was brilliant. It was so beautifully done! Keep up the great work.
P.S. Sorry I didnt log in, but I did sign with my screenname :P
5/3/2011 c4 34Deleted12
Wow.
The writing in this is incredible. The way you can work out which character is which without naming any is fantastic - it builds up the tension even more.
Simply amazing fic! :)
Wow.
The writing in this is incredible. The way you can work out which character is which without naming any is fantastic - it builds up the tension even more.
Simply amazing fic! :)
4/18/2011 c4 1TheWildMage
Nicely done. I thoroughly enjoyed the symbolism, and really liked how you incorporated their eye colors into the chapter names. Your style's a bit too flowery for my taste, but it's reminiscent of old Norse tales - very cool. Not something that you read everyday!
1TheWildMageNicely done. I thoroughly enjoyed the symbolism, and really liked how you incorporated their eye colors into the chapter names. Your style's a bit too flowery for my taste, but it's reminiscent of old Norse tales - very cool. Not something that you read everyday!
2/6/2011 c4 136Kitty O
I really like how you did this. Very powerful, and the eyecolor thing was amazing. This was so well written. But I wanna know what happened to Remus!
Bad voldie...
136Kitty OI really like how you did this. Very powerful, and the eyecolor thing was amazing. This was so well written. But I wanna know what happened to Remus!
Bad voldie...
2/5/2011 c4 8misundersnape
Bravo!
I loved this.
I had never thought of these key player's eye colours in quite this way before, but it just seems so obvious now that you have pointed it out this way in this fic.
Lovely ending... if only.
Clearly you have more compassion in your 'typing fingers' than the esteemed canon author.
Great job, thanks for sharing.
misundersnape...
8misundersnapeBravo!
I loved this.
I had never thought of these key player's eye colours in quite this way before, but it just seems so obvious now that you have pointed it out this way in this fic.
Lovely ending... if only.
Clearly you have more compassion in your 'typing fingers' than the esteemed canon author.
Great job, thanks for sharing.
misundersnape...
2/3/2011 c3 irockursocksoff
This went from painful to sweet..it takes an amazing author to convey such emotions in such short writings.
This went from painful to sweet..it takes an amazing author to convey such emotions in such short writings.