for Kings12/2/2012 c2 revolutionaryowl
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEAS Update. Really.
This could be one of the best fanfics EVER if you complete it.
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEAS Update. Really.
This could be one of the best fanfics EVER if you complete it.
11/6/2012 c2 xsasuhinax
Oh sam you naive girl. We need David in here!
Oh sam you naive girl. We need David in here!
10/15/2012 c2 M.M
I LOOOOOOOVEEEEEEEEE IT! O.O it's so addicted ...please keep writing and I will review every chapter i'll promise !
I LOOOOOOOVEEEEEEEEE IT! O.O it's so addicted ...please keep writing and I will review every chapter i'll promise !
10/7/2012 c2 nevada
Creepy, but very cool. I'd love if you'd continue this.
Creepy, but very cool. I'd love if you'd continue this.
6/27/2012 c2 Guest
It looks good. when is The True Motive coming out?
It looks good. when is The True Motive coming out?
6/18/2012 c2 Elliette
Oh I really like this story so far, its awesome. Cant wait to read the rest of it (: 3
Oh I really like this story so far, its awesome. Cant wait to read the rest of it (: 3
6/18/2012 c2 
18The Last Poison Apple
Oh, Tim is so very very conceiving. I liked this chapter. A lot.
18The Last Poison AppleOh, Tim is so very very conceiving. I liked this chapter. A lot.
6/16/2012 c2 Athena Knightstar
Too lazy to login.. sorry!
It's great that you've finally updated (I was getting bored with rereading your stories over and over again. I hope you update again soon!
Too lazy to login.. sorry!
It's great that you've finally updated (I was getting bored with rereading your stories over and over again. I hope you update again soon!
6/15/2012 c2 52Cresenta's Lark
Glad to see you had time to write for your readers. I'm sure they were waiting for this chap. :)
Anyway. Sam is right to be worried. Scam kinda equals danger and control so she has a brain in here to be...intimadated.
Lol I loved how Scam just played her into doing what he wanted. He's a boss. A smart, smart boss. That's it.
On a side note: YAY SHE TOUCHED HIM! She wants him. jk. Well not jk. Not really.
This chapter just confirms what I'm sure we all know. Sam doesn't have a chance against him - in anything tbh.
Swearing at him will do nothing. I'm talking about here: Oh that asshole. - Really Sam, that the best you can do?
Yep, she's def losing. Doi.
Giving in would be easier for her but eh Sam is a drama queen ofc. So she will probs resist which is great because well...Scam gets to play with her more and that more chapters which YAY!
Anyway, hope your inspiration stays longer too. Good luck with everything.
PS: This chap just shows even though it's been a while you still write just as flawlessly as ever. Which is awesome.
- Cresenta
52Cresenta's LarkGlad to see you had time to write for your readers. I'm sure they were waiting for this chap. :)
Anyway. Sam is right to be worried. Scam kinda equals danger and control so she has a brain in here to be...intimadated.
Lol I loved how Scam just played her into doing what he wanted. He's a boss. A smart, smart boss. That's it.
On a side note: YAY SHE TOUCHED HIM! She wants him. jk. Well not jk. Not really.
This chapter just confirms what I'm sure we all know. Sam doesn't have a chance against him - in anything tbh.
Swearing at him will do nothing. I'm talking about here: Oh that asshole. - Really Sam, that the best you can do?
Yep, she's def losing. Doi.
Giving in would be easier for her but eh Sam is a drama queen ofc. So she will probs resist which is great because well...Scam gets to play with her more and that more chapters which YAY!
Anyway, hope your inspiration stays longer too. Good luck with everything.
PS: This chap just shows even though it's been a while you still write just as flawlessly as ever. Which is awesome.
- Cresenta
6/15/2012 c2 24KraZiiePyrozHavemoreFun
Ivy! Youre alive! Yay! Oh how Ive missed you and your wonderful updates! (Im sure Cresenta is jumping up and down in joy as we speak) I love how you described sams view, very nice! Also, that whole scene where she tried to get him to back off, and yet only cemented her status, was perfectly written! Please keep the updates up!
24KraZiiePyrozHavemoreFunIvy! Youre alive! Yay! Oh how Ive missed you and your wonderful updates! (Im sure Cresenta is jumping up and down in joy as we speak) I love how you described sams view, very nice! Also, that whole scene where she tried to get him to back off, and yet only cemented her status, was perfectly written! Please keep the updates up!
4/28/2012 c1 18The Last Poison Apple
This is pretty old so the comment is pretty late, but I really think you should continue with this! I'm dying to see where it goes.
18The Last Poison AppleThis is pretty old so the comment is pretty late, but I really think you should continue with this! I'm dying to see where it goes.
5/28/2011 c1 56PhantomPotterGirl
This is good. I mean REALLY REALLY good. YOU *points at you* HAVE *urgent puppy face* TO *points with urgent puppy face* UPDATE *scribbles madly on laptop* okay? :P Because, I swear this is the MOST original (there are others but let's just talk about your story for now) plotline I've ever read about.
WHOEVER thinks this is a fail is A TOTAL IDIOT NOT to see the genius that is clearly in front of them! :D I LOVE your stuff and I really want you to continue this. :D (and your other stuff) :P
56PhantomPotterGirlThis is good. I mean REALLY REALLY good. YOU *points at you* HAVE *urgent puppy face* TO *points with urgent puppy face* UPDATE *scribbles madly on laptop* okay? :P Because, I swear this is the MOST original (there are others but let's just talk about your story for now) plotline I've ever read about.
WHOEVER thinks this is a fail is A TOTAL IDIOT NOT to see the genius that is clearly in front of them! :D I LOVE your stuff and I really want you to continue this. :D (and your other stuff) :P
4/26/2011 c1 14Persephatta
This is good, you could feel the tension building and you know there is going to be plenty of drama to follow. The characters are really interesting and it's so cool how Tim can control the school like that. I can't wait for more, keep up the good work =)
14PersephattaThis is good, you could feel the tension building and you know there is going to be plenty of drama to follow. The characters are really interesting and it's so cool how Tim can control the school like that. I can't wait for more, keep up the good work =)