for A Warrior Arise4/22 c2 Guest
could u please make another hermione and ardeth story
could u please make another hermione and ardeth story
7/16/2012 c23 Guest
oh wow. i hope you update this one soon. i am really really excited to see what else comes in this story
oh wow. i hope you update this one soon. i am really really excited to see what else comes in this story
4/10/2012 c23 spiderprincesscat
I started reading your story today and was wandering if you could continue it. I like the story line and can't wait to read more. Your new fan S.P.
I started reading your story today and was wandering if you could continue it. I like the story line and can't wait to read more. Your new fan S.P.
8/17/2011 c20 
1Lady Luna Slag
I can't believe Harry. After EVERYTHING Hermione's done for him he's still taking RON'S side even after hearing what Ron did to her. Plus saying that she 'abandoned' him during their SECOND year? How is nearly being PETRIFIED TO DEATH while trying to help HIM 'abandoning' him? And like she said, who was there for him when RON got jealous during the triwizard tournament and didn't speak to him for WEEKS/MONTHS until the GIT finally got over himself and decided he wanted back in the group? WHO stayed with Harry during the horucrux hunt when a certain redhead got ** off and ABANDONED the both of them because he was jealous of an IMAGINARY affair he thought the two were having behind his back while on the horucrux hunt, and didn't come back for MONTHS? Hermione's stuck with him through thick and thin and been a more reliable friend than Ron has been when they were in Hogwarts, yet after everything Hermione and Harry have been through every time RON abandoned them in a fit of rage, Harry's still taking RON'S side in the matter over Hermiones?
1Lady Luna SlagI can't believe Harry. After EVERYTHING Hermione's done for him he's still taking RON'S side even after hearing what Ron did to her. Plus saying that she 'abandoned' him during their SECOND year? How is nearly being PETRIFIED TO DEATH while trying to help HIM 'abandoning' him? And like she said, who was there for him when RON got jealous during the triwizard tournament and didn't speak to him for WEEKS/MONTHS until the GIT finally got over himself and decided he wanted back in the group? WHO stayed with Harry during the horucrux hunt when a certain redhead got ** off and ABANDONED the both of them because he was jealous of an IMAGINARY affair he thought the two were having behind his back while on the horucrux hunt, and didn't come back for MONTHS? Hermione's stuck with him through thick and thin and been a more reliable friend than Ron has been when they were in Hogwarts, yet after everything Hermione and Harry have been through every time RON abandoned them in a fit of rage, Harry's still taking RON'S side in the matter over Hermiones?
8/17/2011 c4 Lady Luna Slag
Hmmm... Unless I MISSED something concerning the timeline of this story, WHY is Evy, and probably Johnathan and those dock workers openly staring at Hermiones choice in clothes *lol*, acting like this is STILL the EARLY 20th century, instead of it being the more modern 21st century, with Evy's talk about how 'improper' it is for a lady like Hermione to dress like that, or that people would talk about her or get the wrong idea in THIS day an age? It's like Hermione went back in time to meet her long lost brother, instead of staying in the more modern 21st century where what Evy just described should no longer matter to people in this day and age, unless she and Johnathan have been living under rocks their whole lives in england. *lol*
Hmmm... Unless I MISSED something concerning the timeline of this story, WHY is Evy, and probably Johnathan and those dock workers openly staring at Hermiones choice in clothes *lol*, acting like this is STILL the EARLY 20th century, instead of it being the more modern 21st century, with Evy's talk about how 'improper' it is for a lady like Hermione to dress like that, or that people would talk about her or get the wrong idea in THIS day an age? It's like Hermione went back in time to meet her long lost brother, instead of staying in the more modern 21st century where what Evy just described should no longer matter to people in this day and age, unless she and Johnathan have been living under rocks their whole lives in england. *lol*
8/17/2011 c23 4Hotgirlow
Please tell me your'e gonna update soon i love this story and keep rereading it lol and i loved it when Rick said don't scared the big bad wizards to much. :D
4HotgirlowPlease tell me your'e gonna update soon i love this story and keep rereading it lol and i loved it when Rick said don't scared the big bad wizards to much. :D
8/16/2011 c22 timber
came across your story while looking for something to read.
had to ask though about the title.
a warrior arise. wow! way improper english.
i know i am picky but it should either be: a warrior arose or a warrior arisen. you could also drop the a and just make warrior arise. any of those are fine, but your title is just bad, bad grammar.
came across your story while looking for something to read.
had to ask though about the title.
a warrior arise. wow! way improper english.
i know i am picky but it should either be: a warrior arose or a warrior arisen. you could also drop the a and just make warrior arise. any of those are fine, but your title is just bad, bad grammar.