for iChange for Freddie7/23/2011 c6
8SavySoCool
Haha, what a cute way to end an amazing story. I have one word to describe the entire thing: amazing. You are an awesome writer, an I'm definetly going to read your other stories.
8SavySoCoolHaha, what a cute way to end an amazing story. I have one word to describe the entire thing: amazing. You are an awesome writer, an I'm definetly going to read your other stories.
7/23/2011 c2 SavySoCool
This story is so cute. I'm reading it right now, but I just had to stop here and comment. I am such a wimp (Freddie's words to Sam made me cry...). Also, I can't believe how much of a jerk Freddie's being. That remark about her being pregnant! So mean. Anyway, I love this idea and story. Amazing job.
This story is so cute. I'm reading it right now, but I just had to stop here and comment. I am such a wimp (Freddie's words to Sam made me cry...). Also, I can't believe how much of a jerk Freddie's being. That remark about her being pregnant! So mean. Anyway, I love this idea and story. Amazing job.
7/17/2011 c6
27cynthiarox99
Ahh geez...you are pure amazingly, fantasically, magical! You have serious talent just like a lot of people on here! Keep writin'!:) :3
27cynthiarox99Ahh geez...you are pure amazingly, fantasically, magical! You have serious talent just like a lot of people on here! Keep writin'!:) :3
7/8/2011 c6
24Spottedwind19
It was a really short story but it worked. Although I wished u would hav fit more about her ice skating in but maybe u didn't kno enough about ice skatinh
24Spottedwind19It was a really short story but it worked. Although I wished u would hav fit more about her ice skating in but maybe u didn't kno enough about ice skatinh
7/4/2011 c2
6Kaitley
Haha! I love how Sam picked ice skating! Not sure if you knew this ( you probably did) but Jenette McCurdy ice skates! (:
Haha its really pretty funny how Sam HATES Jenette. its like shes criticizing herself. Oh the irony.
Love as always, kaitley
P.S. SWIMMING IS NOT FOR LOSERS! ;) (force of habit... Ive been competitive swimming for 6 years) :D
6KaitleyHaha! I love how Sam picked ice skating! Not sure if you knew this ( you probably did) but Jenette McCurdy ice skates! (:
Haha its really pretty funny how Sam HATES Jenette. its like shes criticizing herself. Oh the irony.
Love as always, kaitley
P.S. SWIMMING IS NOT FOR LOSERS! ;) (force of habit... Ive been competitive swimming for 6 years) :D
6/16/2011 c1 hey
sam was really ooc :/ still good tho i also luv ur other stories ur a gr8 writer
sam was really ooc :/ still good tho i also luv ur other stories ur a gr8 writer
4/4/2011 c6
1TnxDan
Hi Fiddlegirl, I luv it!
All I can say is Freddie the NUB woke up and
realized that he loved Sam not Jen and Finally!
Could have been longer for the anticipation...
..of what was coming but the ending moment...
..was so beautiful and "OMG I whisper" Perfect!
Awesome Ending! Great Thought! A++++++++++! Bravo!
"Your Fan Always" John:D
p.s. I don't want him to love Jen anyway! lol.
1TnxDanHi Fiddlegirl, I luv it!
All I can say is Freddie the NUB woke up and
realized that he loved Sam not Jen and Finally!
Could have been longer for the anticipation...
..of what was coming but the ending moment...
..was so beautiful and "OMG I whisper" Perfect!
Awesome Ending! Great Thought! A++++++++++! Bravo!
"Your Fan Always" John:D
p.s. I don't want him to love Jen anyway! lol.
4/3/2011 c6
6hartful13
This may sound crazy but I actually think you should re-write this... This never really felt Like it can truly be what it can be I mean this could have been better really You had a solid concept but the final works felt it came up short for example It never felt like Sam was she was I mean the stuff she could say could be in her mind but seriously it could have been better heck even more darker like should have taken longer for Freddie to notice and heck even when he breaks up with Jen she may not be there at the entrance.
The story is Okay but, I honestly have to say it could have been better. I hope this doesn't discourage you because I feel that you didn't really have enough make me feel the way this story could have been. I mean it felt to fast where something like this could have been longer than it is. you could have put more focus on the anorexia, and the skating have more thoughts for Freddie I mean. So yea I hope the best to ya if you do re-do this one or do other works. Good luck to you.
6hartful13This may sound crazy but I actually think you should re-write this... This never really felt Like it can truly be what it can be I mean this could have been better really You had a solid concept but the final works felt it came up short for example It never felt like Sam was she was I mean the stuff she could say could be in her mind but seriously it could have been better heck even more darker like should have taken longer for Freddie to notice and heck even when he breaks up with Jen she may not be there at the entrance.
The story is Okay but, I honestly have to say it could have been better. I hope this doesn't discourage you because I feel that you didn't really have enough make me feel the way this story could have been. I mean it felt to fast where something like this could have been longer than it is. you could have put more focus on the anorexia, and the skating have more thoughts for Freddie I mean. So yea I hope the best to ya if you do re-do this one or do other works. Good luck to you.
4/2/2011 c6
14moonyandpadfoot07
Why does it have to be so short! Noooo!
Good ending. I love this story! And yeah, I'll be lookign forward to your next story! :D
14moonyandpadfoot07Why does it have to be so short! Noooo!
Good ending. I love this story! And yeah, I'll be lookign forward to your next story! :D
4/2/2011 c6
4Mystapleza
Love the ending and it couldn't have come at a better time just one week before iomg... It even has some of the lines and phrases from the episode only directed towards different characters... Did u really plan it that way cuz if u did u r freakin amazing
4MystaplezaLove the ending and it couldn't have come at a better time just one week before iomg... It even has some of the lines and phrases from the episode only directed towards different characters... Did u really plan it that way cuz if u did u r freakin amazing
3/28/2011 c5 SeddieTaang
please update soon! i really cant wait to see what happens!
please update soon! i really cant wait to see what happens!
3/23/2011 c5 Hannah Cha
I am officially depressed.
I am officially depressed.
