for iChange for Freddie3/12/2011 c4 Annfnancnjak
Oh no! Sam is getting too thin! Please make sure this story ends happily?:) please? I love it so far and I can't wait until the next chapter!:)
Oh no! Sam is getting too thin! Please make sure this story ends happily?:) please? I love it so far and I can't wait until the next chapter!:)
3/12/2011 c4 Coolio
Nice story but sometimes u can raddle on with the sentences like "Don't touch me! Don't talk to me! Don't do anything with me! Just leave me alone. I don't want to see you ever again, Freddie Benson. You broke my heart. I can't believe this. Why are you doing this to me? I…I can't take this. Just stay away from me, Freddie. Because everytime I see you with Jen, you make my heart feel like it's going to explode and I can't take it anymore! So, just leave me alone! We're not friends anymore! We're not friends. Just….go away!" she shouts. She turns around and runs out my bedroom. I stare after her and sit down on my bed. What have I done?
You see she keeps saying 'Leave me alone' or 'Go away' - after u say tht u pretty much leave.
And you kinda use a lot the word 'Amazing' u can always choose another word coz some readers may get a bit bored with it
But anyways the rest is awesome
Nice story but sometimes u can raddle on with the sentences like "Don't touch me! Don't talk to me! Don't do anything with me! Just leave me alone. I don't want to see you ever again, Freddie Benson. You broke my heart. I can't believe this. Why are you doing this to me? I…I can't take this. Just stay away from me, Freddie. Because everytime I see you with Jen, you make my heart feel like it's going to explode and I can't take it anymore! So, just leave me alone! We're not friends anymore! We're not friends. Just….go away!" she shouts. She turns around and runs out my bedroom. I stare after her and sit down on my bed. What have I done?
You see she keeps saying 'Leave me alone' or 'Go away' - after u say tht u pretty much leave.
And you kinda use a lot the word 'Amazing' u can always choose another word coz some readers may get a bit bored with it
But anyways the rest is awesome
2/22/2011 c3 
13theofficialseddiefan
Awesome story! There are lots of stories like this and you made yours special and unique! More please! :)
13theofficialseddiefanAwesome story! There are lots of stories like this and you made yours special and unique! More please! :)
2/20/2011 c3 10rockingfreakshow
I like how they seem closer in this chapter :]
& yeah @Mystapleza it made me think of The Ice Princess too XD
10rockingfreakshowI like how they seem closer in this chapter :]
& yeah @Mystapleza it made me think of The Ice Princess too XD
2/20/2011 c3 4Mystapleza
Nice... Can't wait for the next chapter... It does kinda reflect the movie ice princess in a way, but that is so cool... I liked the skating lesson from Sam to Freddie that was just kinda cute and reminded me of the times i've had to teach people to ice skate... Update soon i want to see jen dump freddie... I think it will happen like this... Sam and jen will do an open skate at the same time... Then they clear the ice and freddie comes by on the zamboni... Then jen happens to notice freddie looking at sam as he drives by on the zamboni which triggers a fight and the break up
4MystaplezaNice... Can't wait for the next chapter... It does kinda reflect the movie ice princess in a way, but that is so cool... I liked the skating lesson from Sam to Freddie that was just kinda cute and reminded me of the times i've had to teach people to ice skate... Update soon i want to see jen dump freddie... I think it will happen like this... Sam and jen will do an open skate at the same time... Then they clear the ice and freddie comes by on the zamboni... Then jen happens to notice freddie looking at sam as he drives by on the zamboni which triggers a fight and the break up
2/19/2011 c3 2StandardNostalgia
I love this story. It's actually very original, and I can't wait 'till you update again.
Your writing style is very curious, but I enjoy it; It gives a freshness to the story.
Keep writing.
-Charlie Ride
2StandardNostalgiaI love this story. It's actually very original, and I can't wait 'till you update again.
Your writing style is very curious, but I enjoy it; It gives a freshness to the story.
Keep writing.
-Charlie Ride
2/19/2011 c3 18seddieSUPERFAN101
Their getting closer that's good then freddie would start liking sam keep writing it's really good
18seddieSUPERFAN101Their getting closer that's good then freddie would start liking sam keep writing it's really good
2/19/2011 c3 14moonyandpadfoot07
Great chapter ! I can't wait for the next one! =)
When I read this line, "I wish he could just realize that I like him and date me. Jen isn't the right one for him. I just know it. She's going to break his heart and he's going to be depressed. I just know it." The song "You Belong with Me" started playing in my ears.
This supperrrrr awesome! Update SOON! :D
14moonyandpadfoot07Great chapter ! I can't wait for the next one! =)
When I read this line, "I wish he could just realize that I like him and date me. Jen isn't the right one for him. I just know it. She's going to break his heart and he's going to be depressed. I just know it." The song "You Belong with Me" started playing in my ears.
This supperrrrr awesome! Update SOON! :D