for Dribbles and Drabbles7/26/2011 c7 
8MarcusWilliams700
Yay an infant idea! Well, Kagome's conflict here is a good start... wonder what possibilities would arise from the crossing of those worlds? One thing that comes to mind for me is how Ranma has dual identities and Kagome does as well (I think); not sure how that could play out, but it stands out to me. Also, since pushing awkwardness tends to enhance conflict and result in better (or at least bigger) stories, would Kagome be the type to have a crush on Ranma as a boy, then find out he's a girl too? It's a great start!
8MarcusWilliams700Yay an infant idea! Well, Kagome's conflict here is a good start... wonder what possibilities would arise from the crossing of those worlds? One thing that comes to mind for me is how Ranma has dual identities and Kagome does as well (I think); not sure how that could play out, but it stands out to me. Also, since pushing awkwardness tends to enhance conflict and result in better (or at least bigger) stories, would Kagome be the type to have a crush on Ranma as a boy, then find out he's a girl too? It's a great start!
7/26/2011 c2 MarcusWilliams700
This was a really cool idea! So Yu Yu Hakusho deals with the underworld? While reading this, I thought... what if Ranma runs into the drowned girl who cursed the pond? Not sure how they'd interact, but the idea's interesting. This is one I'd definitely be interested in seeing continue! Good job!
This was a really cool idea! So Yu Yu Hakusho deals with the underworld? While reading this, I thought... what if Ranma runs into the drowned girl who cursed the pond? Not sure how they'd interact, but the idea's interesting. This is one I'd definitely be interested in seeing continue! Good job!
7/25/2011 c1 MarcusWilliams700
I've started listening to the Inkheart audio book and rereading this I really like how Meggie finds herself overwhelmed with the possibilities of entering another world, since it's far more interesting than if she had intimate knowledge of Naruto from the start. I'd be interested in finding out what happens next, although having not read Naruto I could easily become confused... still, the idea of an Inkheart crossover opens the door to a lot of possibilities :) (heh, I find it inspiring me to write something too)
I've started listening to the Inkheart audio book and rereading this I really like how Meggie finds herself overwhelmed with the possibilities of entering another world, since it's far more interesting than if she had intimate knowledge of Naruto from the start. I'd be interested in finding out what happens next, although having not read Naruto I could easily become confused... still, the idea of an Inkheart crossover opens the door to a lot of possibilities :) (heh, I find it inspiring me to write something too)
7/23/2011 c5 MarcusWilliams700
I liked this one :) I've never read Inuyasha (or Yuyu for that matter), but I felt like I understood the characters fairly well after reading this. Inuyasha can be a bit of a jerk, huh? Kagome seems pretty cool; though I think the Kagome/Kikyo relationship would make more sense if I knew more about the series, lol
I liked this one :) I've never read Inuyasha (or Yuyu for that matter), but I felt like I understood the characters fairly well after reading this. Inuyasha can be a bit of a jerk, huh? Kagome seems pretty cool; though I think the Kagome/Kikyo relationship would make more sense if I knew more about the series, lol