for Pirates Nanoha6/4/2011 c4 
6Reader458
Whoah! Very very well done. And don't worry about taking long to update. I rather wait a bit for a good chapter than get stressed one.
Good luck with the writing
Reader458
6Reader458Whoah! Very very well done. And don't worry about taking long to update. I rather wait a bit for a good chapter than get stressed one.
Good luck with the writing
Reader458
6/1/2011 c4 60Major Mike Powell III
Well, well, soldier...
Now, THIS was interesting!
The start was quite nice, what with the NanoHayate FLUFF. ^O^ And I really liked the feelings Fate is eliciting within NanoHayate. *A*
And then, pretty brutal stuff there with Scaglietti's beatdown. And the gun to the jewels. XD By the time he finished that sentence of his 'bout...you know what...I SO wanted Hayate to shoot his nuts off! (Very angry face)
But then! Le Gaspe! He DIDN'T do it? :O
(Godzilla Facepalm)
Damn it! I guess he CAN die in peace now. ¬¬ Goddamn it! =A=
So, let NanoHayate's journey to find and seek retribution from the sonuvabitch that did this to Lady Fate!
Nice work, marine!
Update ASAP! That's an order!
Semper-Fi! Carry on!
60Major Mike Powell IIIWell, well, soldier...
Now, THIS was interesting!
The start was quite nice, what with the NanoHayate FLUFF. ^O^ And I really liked the feelings Fate is eliciting within NanoHayate. *A*
And then, pretty brutal stuff there with Scaglietti's beatdown. And the gun to the jewels. XD By the time he finished that sentence of his 'bout...you know what...I SO wanted Hayate to shoot his nuts off! (Very angry face)
But then! Le Gaspe! He DIDN'T do it? :O
(Godzilla Facepalm)
Damn it! I guess he CAN die in peace now. ¬¬ Goddamn it! =A=
So, let NanoHayate's journey to find and seek retribution from the sonuvabitch that did this to Lady Fate!
Nice work, marine!
Update ASAP! That's an order!
Semper-Fi! Carry on!
6/1/2011 c4 14Tear of Light
Damn, I was so ready to hate Scaglietti. But he just had to have that one redeeming feature about him, huh? Lol.
Well done! The chapter maybe short, but a great chapter nevertheless. I look forward to the next one. :)
14Tear of LightDamn, I was so ready to hate Scaglietti. But he just had to have that one redeeming feature about him, huh? Lol.
Well done! The chapter maybe short, but a great chapter nevertheless. I look forward to the next one. :)
6/1/2011 c4 Spikesagitta
What really? It's not that fellow? o.O I thought it was = =
Well, I'll say that who ever did it..their time is limited now
What really? It's not that fellow? o.O I thought it was = =
Well, I'll say that who ever did it..their time is limited now
4/10/2011 c3 6Reader458
Whoah. Yeah, that was dark. And I fully support Hayate in executing Scaglietti with extreme prejudice.
The story is very good, and I can't wait to see more of it. The piece with the lynch bolt at the end was so incredibly poignant, great work on that.
Good luck with the writing
Reader458
6Reader458Whoah. Yeah, that was dark. And I fully support Hayate in executing Scaglietti with extreme prejudice.
The story is very good, and I can't wait to see more of it. The piece with the lynch bolt at the end was so incredibly poignant, great work on that.
Good luck with the writing
Reader458
4/4/2011 c3 1Honulicious
aahhh this sucks! sorry, not your story, but fate's situation! i can't believe this happened to fate. btw, how old are the characters here? hmmm is fate at least nanoha's and hayate's age? is this story going to be about the love between the 3 of them? just curious ;P
1Honuliciousaahhh this sucks! sorry, not your story, but fate's situation! i can't believe this happened to fate. btw, how old are the characters here? hmmm is fate at least nanoha's and hayate's age? is this story going to be about the love between the 3 of them? just curious ;P
4/4/2011 c3 14Tear of Light
That was a very well written chapter. I can only imagine the anguish Fate was put through and I certainly hope the bastard suffers a long, torturous and painful end. If they could revive him and repeat that process, I'm all for that as well.
Keep up the great writing! I look forward to your next chapter. :)
14Tear of LightThat was a very well written chapter. I can only imagine the anguish Fate was put through and I certainly hope the bastard suffers a long, torturous and painful end. If they could revive him and repeat that process, I'm all for that as well.
Keep up the great writing! I look forward to your next chapter. :)
4/3/2011 c3 25SulliMike23
Oh man...Fate was raped. I don't care who you are that's enough to make me stop in my tracks.
25SulliMike23Oh man...Fate was raped. I don't care who you are that's enough to make me stop in my tracks.
4/3/2011 c3 60Major Mike Powell III
Well, well, soldier...
(Sigh) Leave it to you to pull such an emotional, powerful stunt. D:
Poor Fate...Whoever did this to her, be it Scaglietti or not...have Hayate follow through with her threat! Make him PAY! (Very angry face)
So, now it's up to Nanoha and Hayate to nurse Fate back to health with their love. Only they can do it.
Nice work, marine.
Update ASAP. That's an order.
Semper-Fi. Carry on.
60Major Mike Powell IIIWell, well, soldier...
(Sigh) Leave it to you to pull such an emotional, powerful stunt. D:
Poor Fate...Whoever did this to her, be it Scaglietti or not...have Hayate follow through with her threat! Make him PAY! (Very angry face)
So, now it's up to Nanoha and Hayate to nurse Fate back to health with their love. Only they can do it.
Nice work, marine.
Update ASAP. That's an order.
Semper-Fi. Carry on.
4/3/2011 c3 20ZonaRose
Wow... powerful chapter. I look forward to more on this story.
Poor Fate to have to go through that. I hope he gets his in the end. (Thinks of many ways the torture him. Hehehe.)
Keep up the really good work.
In Love & Light,
Zona Rose ~*
20ZonaRoseWow... powerful chapter. I look forward to more on this story.
Poor Fate to have to go through that. I hope he gets his in the end. (Thinks of many ways the torture him. Hehehe.)
Keep up the really good work.
In Love & Light,
Zona Rose ~*
4/3/2011 c3 Spikesagitta
...shit. Can you just blow up him anyway? It would make me feel better if nothing else.
...shit. Can you just blow up him anyway? It would make me feel better if nothing else.