for Precious Memories9/5/2012 c1 
13vildtiger
I love this story! I think Scar is a cool person, but I like his brother better, not sure why though
13vildtigerI love this story! I think Scar is a cool person, but I like his brother better, not sure why though
9/11/2011 c1 10Silence Is Not Golden
Well written. This is a nice take on Scar's past. I enjoyed it! :D
10Silence Is Not GoldenWell written. This is a nice take on Scar's past. I enjoyed it! :D
4/15/2011 c1 32Evil Overlady
It is so hard to find good fanfiction!
I don't know much about this series, but I can tell your passion for it in this piece. :) Beautifully crafted and seasoned with foreshadowing and ties back to the series (based off what I do know).
Keep it up! :D
32Evil OverladyIt is so hard to find good fanfiction!
I don't know much about this series, but I can tell your passion for it in this piece. :) Beautifully crafted and seasoned with foreshadowing and ties back to the series (based off what I do know).
Keep it up! :D
2/13/2011 c1 129WargishBoromirFan
This is about five different kinds of adorably awesome. :D I love Scar's interaction with his brother and the detail you use for the scenery here.
129WargishBoromirFanThis is about five different kinds of adorably awesome. :D I love Scar's interaction with his brother and the detail you use for the scenery here.
2/12/2011 c1 38Aurora-Borealis Coyote
Haha this was cute. ^_^ An interesting way of learning the concept of equivalent exchange...and May was funny at the end, like a little doctor. XD
But this line stood out to me. "Who in their right mind would want to die?" Doesn't know what he's in for... ._.
38Aurora-Borealis CoyoteHaha this was cute. ^_^ An interesting way of learning the concept of equivalent exchange...and May was funny at the end, like a little doctor. XD
But this line stood out to me. "Who in their right mind would want to die?" Doesn't know what he's in for... ._.
2/12/2011 c1 9Cap'nHoozits
I liked that so much. I love picturing Scar as a kid and I love the relationship he had with his brother.
Yeah, it was a little disappointing that Arakawa never revealed Scar's name. Some of us made up our own ^-^
9Cap'nHoozitsI liked that so much. I love picturing Scar as a kid and I love the relationship he had with his brother.
Yeah, it was a little disappointing that Arakawa never revealed Scar's name. Some of us made up our own ^-^
2/11/2011 c1 11Mamoru4ever
*thinks of chibi-scar and dies from cuteness*
I'm gonna sound like an idiot for this, but Scar is the YOUNGER brother? Intersting, he seems like the older brother type to me though haha oh wells, he's awesomeness anyways! Pshaw! Serial killers ALWAYS have a heart of gold, duh! ^^ But aw! Him sneaking out and seeing the animals eating the snakes... *shudders* hideous little things, but I liked his reaction to hearing about alchemy from his brother and even though it's really hard trying to envision his brother when I have no clue who he is . His brother seems like a nice guy (even if he did steal his woman). HURRAY FOR THE EPICNESS OF SCAR! I kinda wanna steal him even more now... XD
11Mamoru4ever*thinks of chibi-scar and dies from cuteness*
I'm gonna sound like an idiot for this, but Scar is the YOUNGER brother? Intersting, he seems like the older brother type to me though haha oh wells, he's awesomeness anyways! Pshaw! Serial killers ALWAYS have a heart of gold, duh! ^^ But aw! Him sneaking out and seeing the animals eating the snakes... *shudders* hideous little things, but I liked his reaction to hearing about alchemy from his brother and even though it's really hard trying to envision his brother when I have no clue who he is . His brother seems like a nice guy (even if he did steal his woman). HURRAY FOR THE EPICNESS OF SCAR! I kinda wanna steal him even more now... XD