for Vi Character study2/7/2012 c1 
47JackieStarSister
I like this, a nice retelling of that scene.I'd like to see more of this.
I can't remember, and it was hard to tell - who said, "I thought at least you believed in me"?
In case you're interested, I'm writing some poems from Ariel's point of view.
Good job on this. Keep writing!
47JackieStarSisterI like this, a nice retelling of that scene.I'd like to see more of this.
I can't remember, and it was hard to tell - who said, "I thought at least you believed in me"?
In case you're interested, I'm writing some poems from Ariel's point of view.
Good job on this. Keep writing!
2/21/2011 c1 24RedCloakedMaiden
Good, good! This was my favorite scene. But remember: what ISN'T said is a lot more important than what is said. Especially with Vi, who hasn't been voicing her real opinion for years.
24RedCloakedMaidenGood, good! This was my favorite scene. But remember: what ISN'T said is a lot more important than what is said. Especially with Vi, who hasn't been voicing her real opinion for years.
2/12/2011 c1 8SometimesAllyWrites
hey hey Nels! great job! ohemgee i cant wait to come see footloose! youre going to do a great job! and this is a good character study! i already know that you will love me forever and always, but at least i am actually commenting, right? just because i read all your stuff in French, doesnt mean i wont comment..i'll try to comment more often. Lov ya!
~allygraced
8SometimesAllyWriteshey hey Nels! great job! ohemgee i cant wait to come see footloose! youre going to do a great job! and this is a good character study! i already know that you will love me forever and always, but at least i am actually commenting, right? just because i read all your stuff in French, doesnt mean i wont comment..i'll try to comment more often. Lov ya!
~allygraced