for In a Heartbeat12/21/2011 c1 Tear-Dropper
It's a beautiful story... I almost cried, remembering that scene. When the Mino dropped... I nearly died of heart attack. Oh, and now they'd just kill him? WHY?
It's a good thing Yomiel survived.
A good thing.
I like the ending. Yeah, like, because I hate it that they actually have to separate Sissel and Yomiel. Oh well, it's a good enough ending. Maybe Detective Jowd would be kind enough to let them meet. Right? *prepares a knife*
It's a beautiful story... I almost cried, remembering that scene. When the Mino dropped... I nearly died of heart attack. Oh, and now they'd just kill him? WHY?
It's a good thing Yomiel survived.
A good thing.
I like the ending. Yeah, like, because I hate it that they actually have to separate Sissel and Yomiel. Oh well, it's a good enough ending. Maybe Detective Jowd would be kind enough to let them meet. Right? *prepares a knife*
3/20/2011 c1 Juno
I love how you gave this scene so much depth and emotion... thanks a lot for writing this!
I love how you gave this scene so much depth and emotion... thanks a lot for writing this!
2/21/2011 c1 
5Skedaddle-San
You did a great job in writing this up. Sissel was quite IC here and I loved how you wrote the scene.
Keep it up! ;)
-Sked-San-san
5Skedaddle-SanYou did a great job in writing this up. Sissel was quite IC here and I loved how you wrote the scene.
Keep it up! ;)
-Sked-San-san
2/20/2011 c1 2vodkaCanidae
I loveee this scene! Ghost Trick has a wonderful storyline. Even I was thrown for the loop at times. Thanks for writing this! ^^
2vodkaCanidaeI loveee this scene! Ghost Trick has a wonderful storyline. Even I was thrown for the loop at times. Thanks for writing this! ^^
2/18/2011 c1 Mezza
Lol, all I thought was "ouch" when he got pierced in the back. They seriously shouldn't have hooks on a lamppost. And then got flattened under the rock. I really thought he had died too and was crying until Jowd went over and found he's alive. Then I felt a little cheated. But good ending's a good ending, I'm glad Yomiel didn't die after all that effort spent to save him. xD;; Or they'll keep repeating the same thing over and over again until they do get it.
Yes, Ghost Trick should have more fanfiction! :DD
Lol, all I thought was "ouch" when he got pierced in the back. They seriously shouldn't have hooks on a lamppost. And then got flattened under the rock. I really thought he had died too and was crying until Jowd went over and found he's alive. Then I felt a little cheated. But good ending's a good ending, I'm glad Yomiel didn't die after all that effort spent to save him. xD;; Or they'll keep repeating the same thing over and over again until they do get it.
Yes, Ghost Trick should have more fanfiction! :DD
2/13/2011 c1 41SyberiaWinx
That's so great!^^ I love Yomiel.D :
I hope you'll read and review my Ghost Trick story.
41SyberiaWinxThat's so great!^^ I love Yomiel.D :
I hope you'll read and review my Ghost Trick story.