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11/29/2012 c1 Ya Wen
Hahaha! I laughed myself crazy at the end and the fact that two people of the opposite sex spending time together isn't a date. Very funny yet romantic story.
8/7/2012 c1 Guest
Maleficent, not pretty? Dude, she is beautiful. I don't see why people would think otherwise. Anyways, great story.
10/15/2011 c1 1harpyvixen
I LOVE this story! Great job! I'm so happy to see more and more Maleficent fanfic! Some of the moments here between Maleficent and Jafar are just *begging* for fanart, I'm going to give it a whirl when I have more time.
4/23/2011 c1 BUBBLYbuttons2me
I LUV YUR STORY! awwwwwwwww its cute when Jafar defends Maleficent! Keep up the good work!
4/19/2011 c1 DontTouchMyStereo
AAAAAWWWWWWW! :) I teared up a little at the end lol...
4/1/2011 c1 4Demons 'n' Vampires
Great story. I loved it. I'm glad that Jafar and Maleficent get together in the end. They're a great couple and I'm glad to see that their are more fans of them.

I liked the idea of Grimhilde and Hook as a couple. Very original.

'Gaston, who was alternating between flirting with every woman who walked by and staring adoringly at himself in a small mirror.' lol. He is so egotistical.

I hope you continue to write more stories about Jafar and Maleficent, or even stories about Grimhilde and Hook.

Take care

D'n'V
2/25/2011 c1 5Isiscat321
Hey, great job. I hope you write more between these two, not that I'm one to talk since I haven't written anymore either, but I really enjoyed this one. Short, sweet, to the point, and not too much out of character. Good Job! :)
2/22/2011 c1 8SnapesLvK
Cute story! :) Jafar and Maleficent is a wonderful couple! ^^
2/15/2011 c1 20D.Minx
Heya hun, this was a great first fic. I really liked the song link (not a big fan of Lionel Richie but hey, the song fitted your fic).

Hmm, bit sappy for me (I always figured that if Maleficent knew what love was she'd hold some deep-seated resentment towards whoever was making her feel that way, and if she couldn't find a way to purge herself of her feelings she'd pull a 'black widow' move and use them before bumping them off so nobody would figure out her shame) but I still liked it.

And Mal shouldn't worry, not every couple is there... Hades wasn't there with his date to make fun of her so it's all good! XD

TC.. Ditzy X
2/14/2011 c1 2Deadlyrose70
woa moma i loved it i wonder what happened to grim and hook? btu anyhow i really loved it great job

a real masterpiece! bravo! ill upload my fourth part later!

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