for Gale's Back5/10/2011 c7 
41kate882
yeah i don't like gale much eaither i mean its really pathetic of him he clamies he luvs her then just cuz she turns him down he gose off for a job in another distric if he had loved her he would have stayed and been her friend both in the book and in ur story
41kate882yeah i don't like gale much eaither i mean its really pathetic of him he clamies he luvs her then just cuz she turns him down he gose off for a job in another distric if he had loved her he would have stayed and been her friend both in the book and in ur story
5/10/2011 c5 kate882
i memerized that song and sing it around the house all the time i think it worrys my family that i'm singing a song about people being hung but oh well
i memerized that song and sing it around the house all the time i think it worrys my family that i'm singing a song about people being hung but oh well
5/10/2011 c4 kate882
hmmm well i supose that dosn't suprise me but you would think that he would remember that pete is there emoshionaly scaring children dosn't usaly work to get there mothers luv unless its some twisted mother but i don't think katniss is
hmmm well i supose that dosn't suprise me but you would think that he would remember that pete is there emoshionaly scaring children dosn't usaly work to get there mothers luv unless its some twisted mother but i don't think katniss is
4/17/2011 c8 12MockingjayFlying
OMG! I looooved this fanfiction story! AH-MAZING! Great job and I loove the fact that you hate Gale too! Amen sista or brotha! :) can't wait to read the sequal!
12MockingjayFlyingOMG! I looooved this fanfiction story! AH-MAZING! Great job and I loove the fact that you hate Gale too! Amen sista or brotha! :) can't wait to read the sequal!
3/12/2011 c8 TacoBelle
It's really good! I love everything about it! Although, I have one little criticism, when someone new speaks you have to start a new paragraph. For example,
"Hello my name is Rick." he said calmy, his grey eyes staring at me and his brown hairmoving in the wind. I look at him too, but with a fixed stare meant to be threatening.
"Hi Rick, my name is Bella, what are you doing here?" I menace.
"Well I saw you standing there alone and I thought you seemed lonely." he said with a smile. I begin to feel annoyed with this guy.
"Leave," I say flatly, "now." His face droops down in defeat and turns away and leaves.
Sorry, I don't mean to offend you. But I thought giving you some constructive criticism would be nice. But nonetheless, you are a great writer and please continue to write. =D
It's really good! I love everything about it! Although, I have one little criticism, when someone new speaks you have to start a new paragraph. For example,
"Hello my name is Rick." he said calmy, his grey eyes staring at me and his brown hairmoving in the wind. I look at him too, but with a fixed stare meant to be threatening.
"Hi Rick, my name is Bella, what are you doing here?" I menace.
"Well I saw you standing there alone and I thought you seemed lonely." he said with a smile. I begin to feel annoyed with this guy.
"Leave," I say flatly, "now." His face droops down in defeat and turns away and leaves.
Sorry, I don't mean to offend you. But I thought giving you some constructive criticism would be nice. But nonetheless, you are a great writer and please continue to write. =D
3/2/2011 c8 2PurpleSkies96
this is a pretty good story. i hate gale so much and he finally got what he deserved. keep writing!
2PurpleSkies96this is a pretty good story. i hate gale so much and he finally got what he deserved. keep writing!
3/1/2011 c8 10Half of Halves
woahh..Gale is looking to get revenge on them..uh oh..
I can't wait for the sequel! :)
10Half of Halveswoahh..Gale is looking to get revenge on them..uh oh..
I can't wait for the sequel! :)
2/28/2011 c7 katpee
it turned out great! i love that katniss ended up with peeta. continue!
it turned out great! i love that katniss ended up with peeta. continue!
2/25/2011 c7 10Half of Halves
I find it hilarious that in more than one of the fanfics I'm reading where Gale is trying to get with Katniss, he's borderline obsessive/ crazy/ stalker/ murderer..
He got beat up by Katniss! Ha! he deserves that for trying to murder Peeta.
Peeta & Gale sound like toddlers arguing..."You did it!" "No you did it!"
I'm glad that Katniss is smart and knew that Gale really did choke Peeta..
Updatee soon :)
10Half of HalvesI find it hilarious that in more than one of the fanfics I'm reading where Gale is trying to get with Katniss, he's borderline obsessive/ crazy/ stalker/ murderer..
He got beat up by Katniss! Ha! he deserves that for trying to murder Peeta.
Peeta & Gale sound like toddlers arguing..."You did it!" "No you did it!"
I'm glad that Katniss is smart and knew that Gale really did choke Peeta..
Updatee soon :)
2/24/2011 c6 Animal125
It waz really good! But so short Plz update soon!
It waz really good! But so short Plz update soon!