for Gale's Back2/23/2011 c6 NameofHonesty
DIRTY FLIPPING LIAR I OFFICIALLY HATE GALE HE IS A POMPIDOU BRAT! . . . . . . ok, now that my emotions r let out update please.
DIRTY FLIPPING LIAR I OFFICIALLY HATE GALE HE IS A POMPIDOU BRAT! . . . . . . ok, now that my emotions r let out update please.
2/22/2011 c1
5Just An Ordinary Girl. Maybe
LOL Reading these reviews are making me smile(And Laugh) I appreaciate you reviewing to me. I actually thought this story would be a faliure cuz i'm an Author-In-Progress. I guess this story is not that bad for a 13-year-old girl =)
5Just An Ordinary Girl. MaybeLOL Reading these reviews are making me smile(And Laugh) I appreaciate you reviewing to me. I actually thought this story would be a faliure cuz i'm an Author-In-Progress. I guess this story is not that bad for a 13-year-old girl =)
2/22/2011 c4 WhyistheHungerGamescalledthat
OMG Gale how can you try to kill Peeta! Peetniss is better than Galness! OMG OMG OMG! Sorry I LOVE to say OMG and TALK alot! Or in this case Review alot
OMG Gale how can you try to kill Peeta! Peetniss is better than Galness! OMG OMG OMG! Sorry I LOVE to say OMG and TALK alot! Or in this case Review alot
2/22/2011 c3 Just An Ordinary Girl. Maybe
I love writing this story so much i don't want to finish it and it's almost done but don't worry there's a sequel ;)
I love writing this story so much i don't want to finish it and it's almost done but don't worry there's a sequel ;)
2/22/2011 c4
4PeetaMellark'sKatniss
ok now im gonna KILL gale! like wow i wish peeta would just kill him! like wow im SMILING! and its really weird cause when im ready to kill someone i smile. like woooowww im not even joking im just like FREAKING OUT! stupid stupid stupid stupid gale! UGHHHHHHHHhhh
4PeetaMellark'sKatnissok now im gonna KILL gale! like wow i wish peeta would just kill him! like wow im SMILING! and its really weird cause when im ready to kill someone i smile. like woooowww im not even joking im just like FREAKING OUT! stupid stupid stupid stupid gale! UGHHHHHHHHhhh
2/22/2011 c3 PeetaMellark'sKatniss
:0 WTF! stupid gale can't just walk in and try to bring them apart! that sick! ew that bastartd! like wowww i HATE him how like omfb! like wowwww.
:0 WTF! stupid gale can't just walk in and try to bring them apart! that sick! ew that bastartd! like wowww i HATE him how like omfb! like wowwww.
2/21/2011 c4
10Half of Halves
Gale (bloody murderer) ..
I can't believe he would dare put his hands on Peeta.
He needs to leave (but then that would end the story sooner, which the readers don't want)
:)
10Half of HalvesGale (bloody murderer) ..
I can't believe he would dare put his hands on Peeta.
He needs to leave (but then that would end the story sooner, which the readers don't want)
:)
2/21/2011 c3
10Half of Halves
Everything is so jumbled together that it's difficult to read. I'm so into this story that I didn't pay much attention to the single spacing before (usually it annoys me)
Instead of having everything as one giant paragraph, please double space and use the enter key on your keyboard after each paragraph.
It will be a lot easier for your readers' eyes.
Gale deserved that bloody nose!
Update soon :)
10Half of HalvesEverything is so jumbled together that it's difficult to read. I'm so into this story that I didn't pay much attention to the single spacing before (usually it annoys me)
Instead of having everything as one giant paragraph, please double space and use the enter key on your keyboard after each paragraph.
It will be a lot easier for your readers' eyes.
Gale deserved that bloody nose!
Update soon :)
