for The Magic That Is Life8/3/2011 c3
16Kaos and Magnus
Very good chapter, I wonder though, why this widow is not as lethal as she should be
16Kaos and MagnusVery good chapter, I wonder though, why this widow is not as lethal as she should be
6/22/2011 c2 Kaos and Magnus
A cliffhanger, well, not bad, typical rpg beginning, all is good and cute, and then everything goes spiraling damn too fast to hell
Good work, keep it up
A cliffhanger, well, not bad, typical rpg beginning, all is good and cute, and then everything goes spiraling damn too fast to hell
Good work, keep it up
5/14/2011 c1
3Druss the Legend
kewl!
using one of the most violent pokegirl in your fic! now i cant wait for the next installment!
i hope both Felix and the Anima bonds soon...hmm, i wonder if you'll give them a delta-bond from the start...or even a recognition...it'll allow us to relate more easily to the Anima...
so will the village throw out Felix due to the prejudice towards the pokegirl...thereby causing him to start his journey...something like attacking the Anima, and having Felix jumping in the way of the attack...the stress causing Talia to threshold and then having all three leave the village and start the journey...
well, whatever...
please continue this story and be assured that you will have at least one fan following this story...
ciao!
3Druss the Legendkewl!
using one of the most violent pokegirl in your fic! now i cant wait for the next installment!
i hope both Felix and the Anima bonds soon...hmm, i wonder if you'll give them a delta-bond from the start...or even a recognition...it'll allow us to relate more easily to the Anima...
so will the village throw out Felix due to the prejudice towards the pokegirl...thereby causing him to start his journey...something like attacking the Anima, and having Felix jumping in the way of the attack...the stress causing Talia to threshold and then having all three leave the village and start the journey...
well, whatever...
please continue this story and be assured that you will have at least one fan following this story...
ciao!
3/13/2011 c1 Guest
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2/23/2011 c1
4Arashigan16
Nice, do you know where I can find info about pokegirls like pictures? I got problems imagining how they look.
4Arashigan16Nice, do you know where I can find info about pokegirls like pictures? I got problems imagining how they look.
