for Edward's Confidence6h ago c26 bhailey639
Quick question... is Tyler an real character in twilight? Or is he a made up character?btw great story!
Quick question... is Tyler an real character in twilight? Or is he a made up character?btw great story!
5/30 c37 Guest
Woooo
Woooo
5/22 c4 Holidai
I am rereading this story, I have no idea which chapters I have reviewed in the past but I doubt it was all of them, I tend to get a bit absorbed in stories that have lots of chapters and forget to stop and review as often as I should. I just wanted to say I like how you wrote Edward in this chapter. He's a little more human, a little more unsure. I even like Bella confiding in Carlisle a bit about what Edward did. I just think its real sweet and I wanted to mention that cause its a definite plus in my eyes. :)
I am rereading this story, I have no idea which chapters I have reviewed in the past but I doubt it was all of them, I tend to get a bit absorbed in stories that have lots of chapters and forget to stop and review as often as I should. I just wanted to say I like how you wrote Edward in this chapter. He's a little more human, a little more unsure. I even like Bella confiding in Carlisle a bit about what Edward did. I just think its real sweet and I wanted to mention that cause its a definite plus in my eyes. :)
4/5 c1 Guest
...no sex? ok jk, but srsly, u just stole that hole chap from S.M. ok umm not really I guess, but still
...no sex? ok jk, but srsly, u just stole that hole chap from S.M. ok umm not really I guess, but still
3/30 c176 Sand123
I loved the part in the last chapter where Charlie ask if Edward could change him right then, hope you surprise us someday with the changing of Renee and Charlie and about the twins
I loved the part in the last chapter where Charlie ask if Edward could change him right then, hope you surprise us someday with the changing of Renee and Charlie and about the twins
3/30 c175 Sand123
I enjoyed her version a lot thanks for sharing your writing talent , I'am now onto your new story
I enjoyed her version a lot thanks for sharing your writing talent , I'am now onto your new story
3/30 c174 Sand123
sorry I did not post for a number of chapters, but I was in bed reading and I had a sick pug so I could read, but I was not able to type with out disturbing her , but I loved them all...
sorry I did not post for a number of chapters, but I was in bed reading and I had a sick pug so I could read, but I was not able to type with out disturbing her , but I loved them all...