for Saiyan in Mahora5/3 c59 Tepheris
I hope you are going to pick up that phone… BECAUSE I CALLED IT! *:.｡. o()o .｡.:*Hmm, you'd think that someone on Planet Minerva would have something like the Words of Death like in Paulini's Inheritence series. Something wouldn't work against another Mage, but against a non-Mage would be an instant kill. The chant might have to be long and something that couldn't be done mentally, but still. It would be a nice twist if the some of the Minervans actually managed to put up a fight against all the Neo-Planet Trade Orginizarion (except Turles and Kureeza himself of course). Kinda like if there had been a couple Warrior-caste Namekians around Nail's level.
TT
I'm sad to hear there won't be updates anytime soon. What else am I supposed to read? Honor Trip and Bringer of Death? Awwww, but I want more Saiyan in Mahora!
I hope you are going to pick up that phone… BECAUSE I CALLED IT! *:.｡. o()o .｡.:*Hmm, you'd think that someone on Planet Minerva would have something like the Words of Death like in Paulini's Inheritence series. Something wouldn't work against another Mage, but against a non-Mage would be an instant kill. The chant might have to be long and something that couldn't be done mentally, but still. It would be a nice twist if the some of the Minervans actually managed to put up a fight against all the Neo-Planet Trade Orginizarion (except Turles and Kureeza himself of course). Kinda like if there had been a couple Warrior-caste Namekians around Nail's level.
TT
I'm sad to hear there won't be updates anytime soon. What else am I supposed to read? Honor Trip and Bringer of Death? Awwww, but I want more Saiyan in Mahora!
5/3 c58 Tepheris
If there were a Ginyu Force out of the Negima characters, Kagetarō would be Burter.
Piccolo took his cape and turban off. $41 just got real.
(Read with the Team Four Stat Kanassan/jin voices):
I can see the future! Kenskywalk rehashes the Namek Saga on Planet Minerva! The purple guy can switch bodies with people! Tullece flies around like a jackass saying "Come and get me Kureeza!" and is forced to team up with the Mahora team to face! Gohan becomes a Super Saiyan IV to beat Kureeza (or at least has a tail when he transforms into Mystic, which seeing as he has access to his full potential in Mystic form)!
If there were a Ginyu Force out of the Negima characters, Kagetarō would be Burter.
Piccolo took his cape and turban off. $41 just got real.
(Read with the Team Four Stat Kanassan/jin voices):
I can see the future! Kenskywalk rehashes the Namek Saga on Planet Minerva! The purple guy can switch bodies with people! Tullece flies around like a jackass saying "Come and get me Kureeza!" and is forced to team up with the Mahora team to face! Gohan becomes a Super Saiyan IV to beat Kureeza (or at least has a tail when he transforms into Mystic, which seeing as he has access to his full potential in Mystic form)!
5/3 c57 Tepheris
Rakan used Self-Destruct! Rakan is hit by recoil!
Nice enterance into the Rakan arc, I can hardly wait for more! Good thing I still have a few chapters to go. (ﾟωﾟ)ﾉ
Rakan used Self-Destruct! Rakan is hit by recoil!
Nice enterance into the Rakan arc, I can hardly wait for more! Good thing I still have a few chapters to go. (ﾟωﾟ)ﾉ
5/3 c56 Tepheris
Ah, Jack Rakan makes his debut. Debut, that word is spelled funny. Silent t and long u, I know the word comes from French but shouldn't an attempt have been made to spell it in proper English? Man, English orthography is a mess. No wonder English is said to be the hardest language to learn. I mean "fish" could be spelled g-h-o-t-i.
Ah, Jack Rakan makes his debut. Debut, that word is spelled funny. Silent t and long u, I know the word comes from French but shouldn't an attempt have been made to spell it in proper English? Man, English orthography is a mess. No wonder English is said to be the hardest language to learn. I mean "fish" could be spelled g-h-o-t-i.
5/3 c55 Tepheris
Okay, so Gohan's tail got cut off, no Super Saiyan IV any time soon then… or maybe that's just what you want us to think! ！(_;) DUN DUN DUN DUNN DUNN DUNNNN!
Okay, so Gohan's tail got cut off, no Super Saiyan IV any time soon then… or maybe that's just what you want us to think! ！(_;) DUN DUN DUN DUNN DUNN DUNNNN!
5/3 c54 Tepheris
Magita Magica Sirius Lukis
I think you meant Sagita Magica Series Lucius?
Hmm, General Rilldo, Super Oozaru, Gohan getting his tail back… signs point to Gohan reaching the level of Super Saiyan 4. I wouldn't have pegged you as the type to include anything GT, most authors on Fanfiction seem to despise GT with a passion.
Magita Magica Sirius Lukis
I think you meant Sagita Magica Series Lucius?
Hmm, General Rilldo, Super Oozaru, Gohan getting his tail back… signs point to Gohan reaching the level of Super Saiyan 4. I wouldn't have pegged you as the type to include anything GT, most authors on Fanfiction seem to despise GT with a passion.
5/2 c52 Tepheris
Oh, Kureeza, my mistake. I thought Frieza was back from the dead. Hey, it happens every third movie (-; ) Nice touch bringing him in, though, it's quite unexpected to see characters from Neko Majin popping up.
Oh, Kureeza, my mistake. I thought Frieza was back from the dead. Hey, it happens every third movie (-; ) Nice touch bringing him in, though, it's quite unexpected to see characters from Neko Majin popping up.
5/2 c51 Tepheris
"Recognized the Ki signature"? So… did Vegeta meet Tarble during his search for Goku or something, because Vegeta didn't learn how to sense Ki until after his battle on Earth.
The armor is RIT armor, not exclusively Saiyan.
Also…
FRIEEEEEEZA!
"Recognized the Ki signature"? So… did Vegeta meet Tarble during his search for Goku or something, because Vegeta didn't learn how to sense Ki until after his battle on Earth.
The armor is RIT armor, not exclusively Saiyan.
Also…
FRIEEEEEEZA!
5/2 c50 Tepheris
Oh, Tarble makes his appearance? Sweet, there is sure to be some hilariously awkward scenarios that ensue. Ah crap-baskets, I had another comment to make that I thought was around Gohan's role as a mentor to Negi in profoundness, but I forgot what it was. Maybe it was about Gohan being able to lighten the burden of all the girls having crushes on Negi and this improving the group dynamic, but that doesn't seem as grand as I thought my other observation was… ah, I'm probably not making sense here, am I?
Oh, Tarble makes his appearance? Sweet, there is sure to be some hilariously awkward scenarios that ensue. Ah crap-baskets, I had another comment to make that I thought was around Gohan's role as a mentor to Negi in profoundness, but I forgot what it was. Maybe it was about Gohan being able to lighten the burden of all the girls having crushes on Negi and this improving the group dynamic, but that doesn't seem as grand as I thought my other observation was… ah, I'm probably not making sense here, am I?
5/2 c47 Tepheris
Innnnnteresting (Read with TFS Vegeta's voice when he learns the Dragonballs aren't being guarded by Frieza or the Ginyu Force)! I thought Videl was out of the picture, shame on me. And Gohan definitely has feelings for Asuna now, eh?
Innnnnteresting (Read with TFS Vegeta's voice when he learns the Dragonballs aren't being guarded by Frieza or the Ginyu Force)! I thought Videl was out of the picture, shame on me. And Gohan definitely has feelings for Asuna now, eh?
5/2 c46 Tepheris
I love the working in of that moment in Yo! Son Goku and his Friends Return! where Goku and Vegeta get into a fight over food. It was unexpected but a pleasant surprise.
I love the working in of that moment in Yo! Son Goku and his Friends Return! where Goku and Vegeta get into a fight over food. It was unexpected but a pleasant surprise.
5/2 c43 Tepheris
Uh-Ohs -aru (it's a pun!)! This isn't going to end well… or so one might think, if they weren't familiar with the Saiyan Saga! But then again, you said there would be surprises, so maybe it really WON'T end well. But then again, who writes a story where the good guys loose? So it probably will all work out. But you probably knew that some of your readers would figure that out, so the surprise is Gohan loosing and needing to be brought back with the Dragonballs. However, almost no-one kills off their main character, so Gohan will probably be fine. On the other hand, you probably knew that your readers would think that, so you'll surprise us by killing someone off. Though if you did that, it would probably upset readers, so you'd avoid doing that. But then again, one has to take into account that there are Dragonballs, so the dead can be brought back… oh forget this, I'll just read the next chapter.
Uh-Ohs -aru (it's a pun!)! This isn't going to end well… or so one might think, if they weren't familiar with the Saiyan Saga! But then again, you said there would be surprises, so maybe it really WON'T end well. But then again, who writes a story where the good guys loose? So it probably will all work out. But you probably knew that some of your readers would figure that out, so the surprise is Gohan loosing and needing to be brought back with the Dragonballs. However, almost no-one kills off their main character, so Gohan will probably be fine. On the other hand, you probably knew that your readers would think that, so you'll surprise us by killing someone off. Though if you did that, it would probably upset readers, so you'd avoid doing that. But then again, one has to take into account that there are Dragonballs, so the dead can be brought back… oh forget this, I'll just read the next chapter.
5/1 c42 Tepheris
Hmmmm, Gogeta huh? Very exciting, I'd read the next chapter but I really do have to get to sleep. Boy, the Jinzoningen sure are a LOT stronger than their originals. I guess that Gohan actually was telling lie when he said the original #17 was stronger.
Hmmmm, Gogeta huh? Very exciting, I'd read the next chapter but I really do have to get to sleep. Boy, the Jinzoningen sure are a LOT stronger than their originals. I guess that Gohan actually was telling lie when he said the original #17 was stronger.