for Goodbye8/14/2012 c1 beth
im slightly offended sometimes i dont know whos talking some of the time and i sometimes lose track of whos talking in conversations
im slightly offended sometimes i dont know whos talking some of the time and i sometimes lose track of whos talking in conversations
2/27/2011 c1 Justin
Take:
"You're dumb..." "it obviously takes place..." "If you're smart..."
and it equals:
bad fanfiction.
Insulting readers sure won't get you alot of positive reads, or friends.
Take:
"You're dumb..." "it obviously takes place..." "If you're smart..."
and it equals:
bad fanfiction.
Insulting readers sure won't get you alot of positive reads, or friends.
2/26/2011 c1 
4Pokemon Warrior Mew
...Wow. It's a good one-shot, although you switched POvs without letting the reader know...Maybe you should write a story about what would happen if Breezepelt ran away and joined The Tribe of Rushing Water.
-Mew
4Pokemon Warrior Mew...Wow. It's a good one-shot, although you switched POvs without letting the reader know...Maybe you should write a story about what would happen if Breezepelt ran away and joined The Tribe of Rushing Water.
-Mew