for Husky and the Merman Prince5/7 c10 
1Sunnycanary
I love this story so far! Please write more! It's my favourite story from you. You could write more about Cooro, Nana and Senri. It is very good!
1SunnycanaryI love this story so far! Please write more! It's my favourite story from you. You could write more about Cooro, Nana and Senri. It is very good!
12/9/2012 c10 Puggie
Wow this story just keeps getting better and better please update soon!
Wow this story just keeps getting better and better please update soon!
8/7/2012 c10 9Half-Demon-Cali
Ah, nobles. Frustrating as ever. Where's my chainsaw?
*One minor correction, towards the end you wrote 'four voices' when the group was asking where Husky was. Should be 'three', no?
Mikiiii... GET EM, LEE.
9Half-Demon-CaliAh, nobles. Frustrating as ever. Where's my chainsaw?
*One minor correction, towards the end you wrote 'four voices' when the group was asking where Husky was. Should be 'three', no?
Mikiiii... GET EM, LEE.
8/7/2012 c9 Half-Demon-Cali
"Derik kind of hoped his father was talking about the slight accent Husky had, the rough voice that he probably got his nickname from. Because otherwise he would have to seriously worry about his father's taste in women."
I died laughing, came back, and then died again when I read that.
That is all.
(Lee, I love you, but PLEASE go catch up on what's been going on!)
"Derik kind of hoped his father was talking about the slight accent Husky had, the rough voice that he probably got his nickname from. Because otherwise he would have to seriously worry about his father's taste in women."
I died laughing, came back, and then died again when I read that.
That is all.
(Lee, I love you, but PLEASE go catch up on what's been going on!)
8/7/2012 c8 Half-Demon-Cali
See, if someone told me "Don't scream", my first instinct would be to scream.
Derik Bisexual? Or is he just SUPER-interested in crosses? Lol. Hope he chokes on whale blubber. Or Husky's staff.
I can't seem to remember if this was on my favorites or not... Oh well, I'll add it
See, if someone told me "Don't scream", my first instinct would be to scream.
Derik Bisexual? Or is he just SUPER-interested in crosses? Lol. Hope he chokes on whale blubber. Or Husky's staff.
I can't seem to remember if this was on my favorites or not... Oh well, I'll add it
8/7/2012 c7 Half-Demon-Cali
"Everyone wins"? Fat chance, Miki. Husky's a little more unpredictable than that!
I could literally feel Husky's boredom seeping through this chapter. That's how well-written it was. Realistically done, in terms of noble parties. I already find myself beginning to dislike Derik, but I think that's a good thing.
My favorite part? Any time Husky denies he's a cross. Make me giggle.
"Everyone wins"? Fat chance, Miki. Husky's a little more unpredictable than that!
I could literally feel Husky's boredom seeping through this chapter. That's how well-written it was. Realistically done, in terms of noble parties. I already find myself beginning to dislike Derik, but I think that's a good thing.
My favorite part? Any time Husky denies he's a cross. Make me giggle.
8/7/2012 c6 Half-Demon-Cali
It's been a while since I wrote a review for this... I'm a little ashamed. lol
Pooooooor, poor Husky. I know how he feels entirely. It's not a good feeling to have to wear something you don't want to... Let alone something "girly".
Good pace, good grammar, good humor - I still like.
It's been a while since I wrote a review for this... I'm a little ashamed. lol
Pooooooor, poor Husky. I know how he feels entirely. It's not a good feeling to have to wear something you don't want to... Let alone something "girly".
Good pace, good grammar, good humor - I still like.
6/8/2012 c10 CrimsonPrincess123
I NEED THE NEXT CHAPTER AND I NEED IT NOW!This story is too OOO Husky is MAD!I can't wait to see hoe it all turns out.
I NEED THE NEXT CHAPTER AND I NEED IT NOW!This story is too OOO Husky is MAD!I can't wait to see hoe it all turns out.
5/31/2012 c10 3Hawaiianbabidoll
I am loving this story. I need to know what happens to everyone's favorite girl hating merboy.
Looking forward to another beautifully written chapter.
3HawaiianbabidollI am loving this story. I need to know what happens to everyone's favorite girl hating merboy.
Looking forward to another beautifully written chapter.
3/6/2012 c10 6Bard of Chaos
This is awesome! PLEASE UPDATE! Please, I'm begging you! This is so wonderful...
6Bard of ChaosThis is awesome! PLEASE UPDATE! Please, I'm begging you! This is so wonderful...
9/2/2011 c5 9Half-Demon-Cali
Dude... I'm sorry I keep taking forever with these reviews D:
1) Just a small correction, in your very first paragraph, you mention "She deserved it, with everything he she put up with". ... I'm sure you can figure that out just by reading ^^;
2) Lolololol Lee has no idea just how different Husky is from other fish-men. That's not a correction, I just find it hilarious~
3) Dived = Dove. Close to the ending of the first section.
4) Blushing... ... ... Sometimes it's acceptable, most of the time... Not so much.
Husky's personality was basically spot-on, as always. Less blushing than usual, but still enough to be slightly OOC.
The fact that Husky can't exactly pin-point Lee's personality makes this fun. We've definitely seen inside the prince's head, but there's still a lot we don't know about him. Pro'lly gonna be fleshed out in later chapters, right?
Can't wait to see how Husky reacts to everything in the palace :D Or maybe I'm just excited to see Lee's reaction to Husky's reaction. Now, if you'll excuse moi, I want to get some of my own story's next chapter written before it becomes 1:30 in the morning. LOL. Will read tomorrow, if there's wifi down the shore...
9Half-Demon-CaliDude... I'm sorry I keep taking forever with these reviews D:
1) Just a small correction, in your very first paragraph, you mention "She deserved it, with everything he she put up with". ... I'm sure you can figure that out just by reading ^^;
2) Lolololol Lee has no idea just how different Husky is from other fish-men. That's not a correction, I just find it hilarious~
3) Dived = Dove. Close to the ending of the first section.
4) Blushing... ... ... Sometimes it's acceptable, most of the time... Not so much.
Husky's personality was basically spot-on, as always. Less blushing than usual, but still enough to be slightly OOC.
The fact that Husky can't exactly pin-point Lee's personality makes this fun. We've definitely seen inside the prince's head, but there's still a lot we don't know about him. Pro'lly gonna be fleshed out in later chapters, right?
Can't wait to see how Husky reacts to everything in the palace :D Or maybe I'm just excited to see Lee's reaction to Husky's reaction. Now, if you'll excuse moi, I want to get some of my own story's next chapter written before it becomes 1:30 in the morning. LOL. Will read tomorrow, if there's wifi down the shore...
8/12/2011 c10 Ocean Wavez 3
Oh please upload quickly!
And please please please PLEASE put more Husky x Nana in this.
It's a brilliant story, and you've got their personalities pretty well pegged, thanks for such a great story - keep it up!
Ocean Wavez 3 x
Oh please upload quickly!
And please please please PLEASE put more Husky x Nana in this.
It's a brilliant story, and you've got their personalities pretty well pegged, thanks for such a great story - keep it up!
Ocean Wavez 3 x
7/26/2011 c4 Half-Demon-Cali
Just... Holy DAMN! Now, THIS is great!
I REALLY liked the both interactions between Husky and Nana, and the fact that Husky was so into making that gift that he actually fell over when she came in *LAWL*.
Prince Lee is a persistently persuasive bastard... I like him :D And I mean that in the best way possible. LOL.
And if you're wondering why I don't have my usual list of things to correct on here... It's because I couldn't find anything to correct :)
Just... Holy DAMN! Now, THIS is great!
I REALLY liked the both interactions between Husky and Nana, and the fact that Husky was so into making that gift that he actually fell over when she came in *LAWL*.
Prince Lee is a persistently persuasive bastard... I like him :D And I mean that in the best way possible. LOL.
And if you're wondering why I don't have my usual list of things to correct on here... It's because I couldn't find anything to correct :)