for Mara, Weyrling Brown Rider8/16/2012 c36 wendums
Once again another good chapter and you brought in Golly, F'less and Tai. I was so enthralled cos these are some of mu fav AM peeps
Once again another good chapter and you brought in Golly, F'less and Tai. I was so enthralled cos these are some of mu fav AM peeps
8/14/2012 c36 
125slytherinsal
Hopefully now Melvar will start to recognise that this is somewhere he belongs and can be valued for his talents. And yes, G'raden's right. She's special. Sometimes stepping out of the limelight is the act of the hero.
125slytherinsalHopefully now Melvar will start to recognise that this is somewhere he belongs and can be valued for his talents. And yes, G'raden's right. She's special. Sometimes stepping out of the limelight is the act of the hero.
8/13/2012 c36 Jedi Knight 13
Thank you for the update. Another great chapter. I liked the fact that every dragon got to demonstrate some form of telekinesis, even the older dragons. G' regg's tender side in taking care of his nephew is a delight.
Thank you for the update. Another great chapter. I liked the fact that every dragon got to demonstrate some form of telekinesis, even the older dragons. G' regg's tender side in taking care of his nephew is a delight.
8/13/2012 c36 AlsoKnownAsMatt
This is a really great plot twist and you've done a wonderful job of helping the reader to feel the emotion of the various situations you introduce in this chapter. The scene with the little boy who so successfully demonstrated TK is truly masterful. Thanks for your obvious effort on this chapter, as always, even when I disagree with bits of what you've done, I look forward to the next chapter.
This is a really great plot twist and you've done a wonderful job of helping the reader to feel the emotion of the various situations you introduce in this chapter. The scene with the little boy who so successfully demonstrated TK is truly masterful. Thanks for your obvious effort on this chapter, as always, even when I disagree with bits of what you've done, I look forward to the next chapter.
7/18/2012 c35 Guest
yay new chapter! :D
yay new chapter! :D
7/18/2012 c35 wendums
Brilliant. This could be the end, you do not say but your other'Mara' fics do say 'The End' I think. brilliant. This is as good as any AM(rip) fics .
Brilliant. This could be the end, you do not say but your other'Mara' fics do say 'The End' I think. brilliant. This is as good as any AM(rip) fics .
7/17/2012 c35 NJ
Hooray! so glad you updated. Fun that Kimi insisted.
Hooray! so glad you updated. Fun that Kimi insisted.
7/16/2012 c35 Cissy
Another wonderful chapter, thank you! This is such a warm story.
Another wonderful chapter, thank you! This is such a warm story.
7/16/2012 c35 Jedi Knight 13
Another great chapter. I really enjoyed the chapter. It showed a real family atmosphere not only within the Weyr, but also within the new family Mara has acquired.
Another great chapter. I really enjoyed the chapter. It showed a real family atmosphere not only within the Weyr, but also within the new family Mara has acquired.