for The Time Before12/9/2012 c20 
14Veridissima
Really good.
Love this fic, even if I don't ship them
Love how you got everything to fit perfectly with the show and your other fic
14VeridissimaReally good.
Love this fic, even if I don't ship them
Love how you got everything to fit perfectly with the show and your other fic
8/13/2012 c18 14Veridissima
So sad
Love how introduced the grasshopper there
Love that is Toby that sends Donna to check on her
And can't believe she thinks she's pregnant, can't wait for more
14VeridissimaSo sad
Love how introduced the grasshopper there
Love that is Toby that sends Donna to check on her
And can't believe she thinks she's pregnant, can't wait for more
7/11/2012 c17 14Veridissima
Loving this story
Can't believe that Mandy is back
Love that CJ feels insecure about Donna
Was Josh's dad died already?
And can't wait for Vermont, I really wanna know what happened that night, that could have changed all the meaning of their future relationship
And can't wait to know how they pass of the fact that they have been falling in love with eachother to how they were in the other story, loving eachother, but not in love with eachother
Also love that Toby suspects that Danny has a crush on CJ
And love everytime that Andie is there, just with the line (in chapter 6, the one with the funraiser), when she picks his hand, makes me heart so happy
Totally forget to say something in my review to chapter 4 (when they sleep together for the first time), that line where she asks if he's drunk and then the way he answers, it reminds me a lot of how Monica asks that to Chandler in Friends (I don't know if you watch the show and if you had that idea from there), I just have to say that I love the line
Love the scenes in New Hampshire, so sweet and amazing
So please update this soon
14VeridissimaLoving this story
Can't believe that Mandy is back
Love that CJ feels insecure about Donna
Was Josh's dad died already?
And can't wait for Vermont, I really wanna know what happened that night, that could have changed all the meaning of their future relationship
And can't wait to know how they pass of the fact that they have been falling in love with eachother to how they were in the other story, loving eachother, but not in love with eachother
Also love that Toby suspects that Danny has a crush on CJ
And love everytime that Andie is there, just with the line (in chapter 6, the one with the funraiser), when she picks his hand, makes me heart so happy
Totally forget to say something in my review to chapter 4 (when they sleep together for the first time), that line where she asks if he's drunk and then the way he answers, it reminds me a lot of how Monica asks that to Chandler in Friends (I don't know if you watch the show and if you had that idea from there), I just have to say that I love the line
Love the scenes in New Hampshire, so sweet and amazing
So please update this soon
7/11/2012 c4 Veridissima
I was thinking about commenting when I finished the all 17 chapters, you have already written
But I had to comment now
I'm loving how you're making them
Love that now I know what happened in Charleston, I had become curious in the other story, during the visit to the D.C. moments
Love that you are introducing Danny, because even with CJ and Josh together, you always talked about their feelings to other people (Danny, Donna, Amy, Simon, etc)
I like that in this story is happening a little more interaction between CJ and Toby (their friendship is so amazing), and love that you mention that Toby is with Andie (they are so perfect, I shipped them so hard, they are in my top, right next to CJ and Danny)
Now I'm gonna to keep reading
I was thinking about commenting when I finished the all 17 chapters, you have already written
But I had to comment now
I'm loving how you're making them
Love that now I know what happened in Charleston, I had become curious in the other story, during the visit to the D.C. moments
Love that you are introducing Danny, because even with CJ and Josh together, you always talked about their feelings to other people (Danny, Donna, Amy, Simon, etc)
I like that in this story is happening a little more interaction between CJ and Toby (their friendship is so amazing), and love that you mention that Toby is with Andie (they are so perfect, I shipped them so hard, they are in my top, right next to CJ and Danny)
Now I'm gonna to keep reading
2/8/2012 c14 Ann
Great fic. Hardly any CJ/Josh fics out there anymore.
Looking forward to more. Please update soon.
Great fic. Hardly any CJ/Josh fics out there anymore.
Looking forward to more. Please update soon.