for Good Day At The Office10/3/2012 c1 
2Marie Masen186
I figured out where you were going with this pretty quickly but I really liked it. Made me wanna go hide out in Rob's trailer... if only. lol
2Marie Masen186I figured out where you were going with this pretty quickly but I really liked it. Made me wanna go hide out in Rob's trailer... if only. lol
3/25/2012 c1 4That'sMzPeachesTYVM
VERy schmexy! I figured it had to be that tehy were together,
'cause i have never seen anyone write an Edward and Bella
that just meet and ** with no preamble! LOL
4That'sMzPeachesTYVMVERy schmexy! I figured it had to be that tehy were together,
'cause i have never seen anyone write an Edward and Bella
that just meet and ** with no preamble! LOL
3/2/2012 c1 21Dark-Supernatural-Angel
Good day indeed. ;D
With Edward's thoughts, the connection revealed at the end never crossed my mind...I actually thought this was thei first encounter so well done!
21Dark-Supernatural-AngelGood day indeed. ;D
With Edward's thoughts, the connection revealed at the end never crossed my mind...I actually thought this was thei first encounter so well done!
4/15/2011 c1 FashanazticNerd97
Wow that crazy. You made it seem like they didnt know each other and they were experincing each other for the first time. And then they were a couple the whole time. Lol your good.
Wow that crazy. You made it seem like they didnt know each other and they were experincing each other for the first time. And then they were a couple the whole time. Lol your good.
4/13/2011 c1 3OCDE
I was a little worried there for a second about bella. I'm thinking she never does things like that.
3OCDEI was a little worried there for a second about bella. I'm thinking she never does things like that.
3/26/2011 c1 KimiD
I think I was about three quarters of the way through, and I am not sure what it was that trigger it, but I thought to myself, nope, she's not a stranger, this is playing, but, I wasn't totally sure til the end... LOL that was sooo much fun.. I just love the way you write! Off to read another o/s of yours. KimiD
I think I was about three quarters of the way through, and I am not sure what it was that trigger it, but I thought to myself, nope, she's not a stranger, this is playing, but, I wasn't totally sure til the end... LOL that was sooo much fun.. I just love the way you write! Off to read another o/s of yours. KimiD