for Every Flavour4/2 c30 
10Quantumphysica
I've actually met someone who honestly believed she was dead while I was incarcerated... Funny to see that again here. xD
I actually feel sorry for them now... poor them...
10QuantumphysicaI've actually met someone who honestly believed she was dead while I was incarcerated... Funny to see that again here. xD
I actually feel sorry for them now... poor them...
2/11 c30 99Satan Abraham
Oh.
That's a... That's a... I don't know the right word. Shocking is the best I can think of.
99Satan AbrahamOh.
That's a... That's a... I don't know the right word. Shocking is the best I can think of.
2/5 c30 252Inkfire
Wow, Liz. Wow. That was really… well, that was some freaking closure. I can't even begin to put words on what I thought of this, it was just so… chilling and haunting and realistic and troubling and wow. Holy shit. You really conveyed the madness, the desperation… Bellatrix's part especially was terrific — I LOVE that she used to use her own blood to paint the Dark Mark on the walls, and her franticness when it stops. (Though she's not old so much as starved, I guess.) It was just… wow. Yeah, it was a very wow business. Impressive, girl ;P
252InkfireWow, Liz. Wow. That was really… well, that was some freaking closure. I can't even begin to put words on what I thought of this, it was just so… chilling and haunting and realistic and troubling and wow. Holy shit. You really conveyed the madness, the desperation… Bellatrix's part especially was terrific — I LOVE that she used to use her own blood to paint the Dark Mark on the walls, and her franticness when it stops. (Though she's not old so much as starved, I guess.) It was just… wow. Yeah, it was a very wow business. Impressive, girl ;P
2/5 c2 3RumbleRoar811
Question- how old are James and Lily in 'Casual'? Just wondering. I'm liking this alot. :)
3RumbleRoar811Question- how old are James and Lily in 'Casual'? Just wondering. I'm liking this alot. :)
2/5 c30 30BellaPur
Well hello there interesting and well written snippet of gold.
This is fabulous Lizzaloo. It really shows the cruelty of Azkaban that this is how they leave their inmates. gah! I feel so sorry for them. And the way you describe both is beautiful.
30BellaPurWell hello there interesting and well written snippet of gold.
This is fabulous Lizzaloo. It really shows the cruelty of Azkaban that this is how they leave their inmates. gah! I feel so sorry for them. And the way you describe both is beautiful.
10/26/2012 c26 Ylan
What... Oh my god mindfuck. So Voldy's the purest of the pure in this case then. Haha. Regarding all the incest that just had to take place in HP, this chapter isn't really all that far off... I guess.
What... Oh my god mindfuck. So Voldy's the purest of the pure in this case then. Haha. Regarding all the incest that just had to take place in HP, this chapter isn't really all that far off... I guess.
10/2/2012 c29 40Expecting Rain
Ooh, I like the descriptive language here - "bruise-purple moors" - I love that (between The Secret Garden and Wuthering Heights, I always think moors are so romantic and spooky and magic and haunted).
And I like what a creepy little girl Bellatrix is here, of course!
40Expecting RainOoh, I like the descriptive language here - "bruise-purple moors" - I love that (between The Secret Garden and Wuthering Heights, I always think moors are so romantic and spooky and magic and haunted).
And I like what a creepy little girl Bellatrix is here, of course!
9/24/2012 c28 Expecting Rain
D: D: D: voyeur!Dobby whyyyyyyyyyy
haha I really like this though - I think this would be exactly the type of sex that Bellatrix enjoys! And I like the power struggle relationship you show between Bellatrix and Rodolphus - much more interesting than the typical pushover-puppy-dog-Rodolphus I usually see in Bellatrix fics.
one note - I think you meant to say "him," not "her" here - "finally he released her neck and pushed her hand under her robes."
D: D: D: voyeur!Dobby whyyyyyyyyyy
haha I really like this though - I think this would be exactly the type of sex that Bellatrix enjoys! And I like the power struggle relationship you show between Bellatrix and Rodolphus - much more interesting than the typical pushover-puppy-dog-Rodolphus I usually see in Bellatrix fics.
one note - I think you meant to say "him," not "her" here - "finally he released her neck and pushed her hand under her robes."
9/23/2012 c27 Expecting Rain
Heyyy I'm starting to catch up on allllll the stories I have to read!
I love the description at the beginning! And throughout. It's so evocative and...descriptive. Yeah. And it's so spooky and dark - a great little Bellamort Azkaban scene!
Heyyy I'm starting to catch up on allllll the stories I have to read!
I love the description at the beginning! And throughout. It's so evocative and...descriptive. Yeah. And it's so spooky and dark - a great little Bellamort Azkaban scene!
6/13/2012 c29 Gitana del Sol
because i am too lazy to sign in
i LOVED this! i thought it was so perfectly bella, the tone and the style and the structure and the content - just everything. i like your descriptions: flowers compared to the potent smell of too much perfume and lingering sentimentality that does nothing but hold you back.
because i am too lazy to sign in
i LOVED this! i thought it was so perfectly bella, the tone and the style and the structure and the content - just everything. i like your descriptions: flowers compared to the potent smell of too much perfume and lingering sentimentality that does nothing but hold you back.
6/13/2012 c29 252Inkfire
This was AMAZING OMG Lizzie you wrote something and I love it so D the writing was just stunning, as usual - so beautiful, I loved the image of the bruise-purple moors - and the way you described the smells, and the contrast between what Bella liked and Meda's refuse, were really stunning. Just awesome. I was a bit surprised that Bella didn't go after the flowers with magic at once though, since she's eleven - I thought she would control her powers a little already, but it is still fitting that they would flare all the more when she gets really angry and frustrated. It was just incredible and I loved it and -gushesgushesgushes- you should write more often because you're an absolute star. -loves-
252InkfireThis was AMAZING OMG Lizzie you wrote something and I love it so D the writing was just stunning, as usual - so beautiful, I loved the image of the bruise-purple moors - and the way you described the smells, and the contrast between what Bella liked and Meda's refuse, were really stunning. Just awesome. I was a bit surprised that Bella didn't go after the flowers with magic at once though, since she's eleven - I thought she would control her powers a little already, but it is still fitting that they would flare all the more when she gets really angry and frustrated. It was just incredible and I loved it and -gushesgushesgushes- you should write more often because you're an absolute star. -loves-
6/12/2012 c5 5Steady Silence
This was really neat.
It's really nicely written, and I love how it's from Tom's perspective. I love how you describe Ginny's hair, at the end. ("He likes to imagine that as he coils her soul into his, her hair will fade to grey.") It's sounds really neat!
Anyway, great job! And keep writing!
- SS
5Steady SilenceThis was really neat.
It's really nicely written, and I love how it's from Tom's perspective. I love how you describe Ginny's hair, at the end. ("He likes to imagine that as he coils her soul into his, her hair will fade to grey.") It's sounds really neat!
Anyway, great job! And keep writing!
- SS
6/12/2012 c29 46Anna Scathach
Flowers! And Bella! And cruel bella, to boot! Why didn't you tell me? ;)
Great work, as usual. I love the imagery, the descriptions.
46Anna ScathachFlowers! And Bella! And cruel bella, to boot! Why didn't you tell me? ;)
Great work, as usual. I love the imagery, the descriptions.
5/23/2012 c28 13redandbluetastepurple
These are brilliant! I really enjoy how short they are, like a taster, the only problem is I kinda want you to have whole stories for each one :P
Anyways, I especially enjoyed the one about Filch as a kid, and you write Bellatrix excellently.
I can't wait to read more of this, and I'm going to read some more of your stuff now :D
13redandbluetastepurpleThese are brilliant! I really enjoy how short they are, like a taster, the only problem is I kinda want you to have whole stories for each one :P
Anyways, I especially enjoyed the one about Filch as a kid, and you write Bellatrix excellently.
I can't wait to read more of this, and I'm going to read some more of your stuff now :D