4/20/2012 c28 46Anna Scathach
This was wonderfully creepy, beautifully written, and heartbreakingly awkward. And this is becoming painfully adverbose. ;)

Well done, lovely! Although, ew.

4/14/2012 c28 252Inkfire
Mwahaha, this was amazing! I LOVED the way you described the Belladolphus interaction… so rough. Oh my. But I'll be a bitch and say you could have played on Dobby more. Truthfully, I didn't get that huge a sense of dirty-little-Dobby there - he was observing a lot, and noticing a lot of things, too, but you didn't mention all of the naughty things it might have done to him to watch them ;) he almost looked -gasp- like a poor creature that happened to be there at the wrong time.

I'm bitch, I know…

4/14/2012 c10 Gamma Orionis
HAHAHAHAHA. Oh, god, I'm not sure I should have found this quite as funny as I did... but Lucius was priceless. Okay, so Narcissa can be "active" sometimes... she's still a prude :P

(But, love, if I didn't know when this was published, I could have sworn I saw Lucius/Peacock insinuations in that last bit ;) )

3/30/2012 c23 14bathtubblogger
Awww! :(( You know how I love Merope, poor girl! The description of her body and teeth/lips is just depressing.

I like the connection between her and Slytherin with the snake, how she's trying to act rich and stuff.

And it's her birthday present to HERSELF. That just makes it so much more sad, and then her brother is just so cruel.

Well done, short but a very vivid picture.

3/24/2012 c27 252Inkfire
OMFG, Lizzie, this was absolutely gorgeous. So darkly beautiful, so gloomy, and so intense. I just adored it =D favourite part: "Bellatrix could hear the rage in her bones, feel it in her ears, see it in her every breath, and taste it on her skin, slick with sweat, not rain". It was stunning, and I love the way you used the senses - and turned them around, which seemed to show both confusion and the fact that she was so utterly overwhelmed with how intense and keen her perceptions were that they just… washed over her like an overflow, and hearing didn't stop at her ears, feeling didn't stop at her skin, but her whole body vibrated. Holy cow, girl, how did you DO that?

It was incredible. Shiver-worthy ^^

3/12/2012 c26 39lella7
You'd best hope Christianity has it wrong or, you're right, you're going to hell ;) This was really dark and twisted and the Bible parallels made it even more so, which really brought across the twisted nature of their relationship. Why is there so much incest on our forum? I'm starting to just regard it as normal and this worries me.

3/11/2012 c26 40Expecting Rain
Goodness, we've become the incest forum, haven't we? D: This was very creepy! (In a good way, I think)