for Dreams3/18 c8 Pikalover
I Just Read The Whole Story. According To Your Authors Note, You Think The Story Is Not So Good. BUT It's Actually Very Good. I Enjoyed Reading This Fanfic. You're Great.
I Just Read The Whole Story. According To Your Authors Note, You Think The Story Is Not So Good. BUT It's Actually Very Good. I Enjoyed Reading This Fanfic. You're Great.
3/18 c8 Infernapeblaze
It's not nice to call the reviewer a 'bitch' . Anyway this chapter was great. I liked the part Ash rejected Misty and kissed Duplica.
It's not nice to call the reviewer a 'bitch' . Anyway this chapter was great. I liked the part Ash rejected Misty and kissed Duplica.
3/18 c7 Infernapeblaze
Wow! Ash and Duplica kissed ! This chapter is the best.
Wow! Ash and Duplica kissed ! This chapter is the best.
3/18 c6 Infernapeblaze
It's great that Ash and Duplica finally confessed their love to each other.
It's great that Ash and Duplica finally confessed their love to each other.
3/18 c5 Infernapeblaze
GIOVANI! I though Ash's father would be someone who's travelling as a trainer. Giovani as ash's father...sounds unrealistic. BTW the Ash and Duplica moment was nice.
GIOVANI! I though Ash's father would be someone who's travelling as a trainer. Giovani as ash's father...sounds unrealistic. BTW the Ash and Duplica moment was nice.
3/18 c4 Infernapeblaze
I LOL'ed when Ash said '' NO FOOD ".
I LOL'ed when Ash said '' NO FOOD ".
3/18 c4 Guest
So that's what you mean in the first chapter. I agree with you that this site lacks Ash and Duplica fics. BTW good chapter,i'm glad that Ash beated that egostic Gary.
So that's what you mean in the first chapter. I agree with you that this site lacks Ash and Duplica fics. BTW good chapter,i'm glad that Ash beated that egostic Gary.
3/18 c3 Infernapeblaze
Whoa! So much happened in this chapter. Misty and Duplica likes Ash. Ash and Gary will battle next chapter.
Whoa! So much happened in this chapter. Misty and Duplica likes Ash. Ash and Gary will battle next chapter.
3/18 c2 Infernapeblaze
Looks like Ash,Duplica and Ditto will have some serious training with charizard.
Looks like Ash,Duplica and Ditto will have some serious training with charizard.
3/18 c1 Ihategary
Ash pokedex said him that he reach 16th place ? Did'nt see that coming
Ash pokedex said him that he reach 16th place ? Did'nt see that coming
7/27/2012 c8 Guest
i did not think it was bad but it was short and it was interesting,thank you
i did not think it was bad but it was short and it was interesting,thank you
3/25/2012 c4 
8weathersageK
oh so you don't hate me. Well okay then
Back to the story nice work having Ash and Gary as well as Duplica vs Misty
very nice touch keep going!
8weathersageKoh so you don't hate me. Well okay then
Back to the story nice work having Ash and Gary as well as Duplica vs Misty
very nice touch keep going!
3/25/2012 c3 weathersageK
nice work
and the contest for Ash begins! (I'm cheering for Duplica all the way!)
nice work
and the contest for Ash begins! (I'm cheering for Duplica all the way!)