for Bella's letter remixed10/13/2012 c4 
8GeezerWench
"I knew we were forever from the first time you got mud in my hair and told me boys had cooties."
That was so sweet!
I think you did a good job here. I "heard" their voices.
Think you might do an Emmett version? You know he'd have to throw in some sort of joke. Like, 'I'll meet ya at the alter. I'll be the one in the tuxedo."
Good job, Hon!
8GeezerWench"I knew we were forever from the first time you got mud in my hair and told me boys had cooties."
That was so sweet!
I think you did a good job here. I "heard" their voices.
Think you might do an Emmett version? You know he'd have to throw in some sort of joke. Like, 'I'll meet ya at the alter. I'll be the one in the tuxedo."
Good job, Hon!
10/13/2012 c3 GeezerWench
I melted at Jasper's letter.
I {heart} him so hard!
" just the thought of being able to mark you in one more tangible way makes me crazy."
Oh! {{{quiver}}} Makes one wonder how many OTHER ways he's marked her? *growl*
Nicely done.
I melted at Jasper's letter.
I {heart} him so hard!
" just the thought of being able to mark you in one more tangible way makes me crazy."
Oh! {{{quiver}}} Makes one wonder how many OTHER ways he's marked her? *growl*
Nicely done.
10/13/2012 c2 GeezerWench
Carlisle? Oh my goodness.
"Today of all days I cannot question the existence of God in my life."
That's a really good line.
Good job.
Carlisle? Oh my goodness.
"Today of all days I cannot question the existence of God in my life."
That's a really good line.
Good job.
3/12/2011 c4 BELAVERA
They were all good. However (because I like canon mates), I liked the letter from Edward best. I noticed that because Jacob, like Emmett, thinks with his stomach (or worse), the lasagna was a true selling point. Speaking of Emmett, I hope you are working on his chapter!
They were all good. However (because I like canon mates), I liked the letter from Edward best. I noticed that because Jacob, like Emmett, thinks with his stomach (or worse), the lasagna was a true selling point. Speaking of Emmett, I hope you are working on his chapter!