for What's a Love Story Without Mishaps, Right?10/3/2012 c1
2Marie Masen186
I bet Alice had quite the freak out all the way in Paris. She would definitely be in full blown pixie mode when she got home! lol
2Marie Masen186I bet Alice had quite the freak out all the way in Paris. She would definitely be in full blown pixie mode when she got home! lol
9/26/2012 c1 Guest
great story
great story
8/28/2011 c1 Scrimmy
This will be more than a nice review, it will be glowing. This is just the kind of story I look for. Fluffy and lemony hot and happily ever after. It was really good how they both with held family info. And it is really cool how his sister is going to take over running the successful design company. How perfect. I do wonder if this is what happened with your first meeting with your Mr. Perfect. If so, Awwww you go girl! That was a great story and if any of it was your real life, I envy you. I may be retired and a grandma but I had a wicked life in my 20's to, only mine was falling in love with the lead guitar player and singer in a local band. He was built like Edward in all ways and we lived happily ever after until ten years ago when he was hurt in an industrial accident and now he is semi-crippled and in constant pain and therefore he is chronically depressed. I won't go into my woe's here but I had 20 great years before hand. If only I was good at writing I could give Edward and Bella a lot of fun recounting those 20 years. Anyway, this is a really good story. Hugs, Bobbie
This will be more than a nice review, it will be glowing. This is just the kind of story I look for. Fluffy and lemony hot and happily ever after. It was really good how they both with held family info. And it is really cool how his sister is going to take over running the successful design company. How perfect. I do wonder if this is what happened with your first meeting with your Mr. Perfect. If so, Awwww you go girl! That was a great story and if any of it was your real life, I envy you. I may be retired and a grandma but I had a wicked life in my 20's to, only mine was falling in love with the lead guitar player and singer in a local band. He was built like Edward in all ways and we lived happily ever after until ten years ago when he was hurt in an industrial accident and now he is semi-crippled and in constant pain and therefore he is chronically depressed. I won't go into my woe's here but I had 20 great years before hand. If only I was good at writing I could give Edward and Bella a lot of fun recounting those 20 years. Anyway, this is a really good story. Hugs, Bobbie
5/27/2011 c1 Guest171
Hiii,
The one-shot is amazing hope you make it into a story like Alice's reaction , how they meet each other's families & thanks ;)
Hiii,
The one-shot is amazing hope you make it into a story like Alice's reaction , how they meet each other's families & thanks ;)
3/26/2011 c1 KimiD
What a twisted situation... that was awesome! 6 degrees of separation... their lives were so interconnected and they did not even know. Wih Alice being her best friend they were bound to meet sooner or later. This way they did it on their own... Great o/s!
What a twisted situation... that was awesome! 6 degrees of separation... their lives were so interconnected and they did not even know. Wih Alice being her best friend they were bound to meet sooner or later. This way they did it on their own... Great o/s!
3/26/2011 c1 JecaisSHORT
I LOVE IT:D can you add more to it? Or even a sequel:)?PLS! I want to know more about their relationship:D
Thanks, for a nice story:)
I LOVE IT:D can you add more to it? Or even a sequel:)?PLS! I want to know more about their relationship:D
Thanks, for a nice story:)
