2/6 c2 MasterofYou
i am too lazy to login... so i really think you should continue this because this great!

10/8/2012 c2 Guest
i really like your story i hope you can think of more to put into this one

12/30/2011 c2 1Rainbow Engel
I'd be screaming if that ever happened to me!

8/12/2011 c2 4Fox-Sin
update soon plzs

4/19/2011 c2 Guest
You sooooo have to continue plz

3/25/2011 c2 Cheshire
Oh gosh I love it! You do the characters really well. Can't wait for more!

~Chesh

3/16/2011 c2 30Evowizard25
"Hello, I'm Evowizard25, I remember it because of my intelligence." I said. "I have a lot of thoughts of this story so far, but I'll start at the begginning. So, it appears Lance stood up Kitty, so she broke up with him." I shrugged. "Kind of understandable, but why? Why did he stand her? Did he have something better to do?"

"Hey, let's not start going on a rant now." Quiz said, pulling up a chair now beside me.

"What are you doing here?" I asked.

"Well, two reasons." Quiz said. "One, I am Alex's character, so I'd be best to help with this review. Second, Alex still hasn't given me any screen time. I mean really, how hard would it be to put me up and give me some dialogue. Not hard. She's even ignored Chibi in this. What's so hard about giving us screen time. We're your characters."

"Who's ranting now?" I snickered. Quiz glared at me. "Well, past the first thing, we see that Kitty is happy." I paused, my eyes darting around. "Wierd. Then she goes and flirts with Kurt right after that." I paused. "So, no trauma, over the breakup has reached her?"

"Oh, don't question it and..." Quiz said.

"Get on with it." A clip of Graham Chapman from Monty Python.

"ALright." I said. "SO, Kurt appears to want to break up with Amanda. Wait! Amanda. The same Amanda that loved Kurt, even though he was, who he is. What's the matter with you?"

"The answer is simple." Quiz said, appearing in a proffesor suit, and glasses. "It's the fundamental: Friends are better with romance than strangers. It's scientifically proven."

I shrugged. "Well, you can't argue with SCIENCE." I stuck up a finger dramatically at the last word, as a bolt of lightning passed behind me. "Then, she phases through his door and takes his shirt, so she can wear it." I paused. "Pretty wierd. If they weren't friends, I'd think she would be an obsessed stalker. Which she is somewhat acting like now."

"I think it's hot." Quiz said. I just stared at him. "What?"

"Anyways, after that stalker moment, we get an insider look at this. ("Ya'll startin to scare meh." Rogue said.) I nodded. "Yes she is Rogue. Yes she is." I paused. "So,Kurt arrives and she tackle him to the ground."

"Ahhh, memories." Quiz said, licking his lips.

"Oh, leave that at with Chibi, why don't you." I said. "I don't want that here. Continueing, so they have a small talk and then, cue music." I pointed to Quiz.

Quiz pulls out a guitar.

When you walked up behind me and covered my eyes

And whispered in my ear, guess who

I rattled off names like I really didn’t know

But all along I knew it was you

And, the longer we talked, the more we laughed

And wondered why we didn’t last

It had been a long time, but later last night

Baby, we caught up real fast

And maybe it’s a little too early

To know if this is gonna work

All I know is you’re sure looking

Good in my shirt

That’s right

You look good in my shirt

Well now I’m not saying that we solved overnight

Every way that we went wrong

Oh, but what I’m seeing I’d sure love seeing

Every morning from now on

And maybe it’s a little too early

To know if this is gonna work

All I know is you’re sure looking

Good in my shirt

C’mon now

Aww that’s right

Oh you look so fine

And maybe it’s a little too early

To know if this is gonna work

All I know is you’re sure looking

Good in my shirt

And maybe it’s a little too early

To know if this is gonna work

All I know is you’re sure looking

Good in my shirt

You look good in my shirt

You look good in my shirt

Quiz finishes. "You know, Chibi looks good in my shirt." He said. "And out of it too." He licks his lips.

"I said, not to bring that up." I said. "The next day they go out shopping. ("Like hi Jeah." Kitty said.)

"LIke that is so annoying." Quiz said.

"LIke, it so is." I said. "And then she continues with this dress thing it's annoying, including the part where she keeps saying 'like' all the time. Just something happene to her." The car explodes and her eyes get pierced. My mouth dropped. "I didn't mean that. No, not sweet inoccent, somewhat stalker, Kitty." I clenched my fists and shook them in the air. "Curse you muslims."

A couple of muslims came in. "Why is it that when something blows up, we're the ones blamed?" ONe of them said. I didn't answer.

"That's stereotyping." The other said. "Besides, you Americans love explosions more than anyone. Just look at your movies."

I nodded my head. "Thank you for that." I clenched my fists and shook them in the air. "Curse you Yankees."

"Yeah, curse them." Stuart came in. "Throw them out of the South. Yee-haa." He started firing into the air, with his pistol.

"Settle down." I said. "So, Kurt bravely comes and rescues Kitty." Huge applause. "Hopefully she will make it out okay."

"Not likely, with something like this happening, and the title." Quiz said. "Well, that's it. I'll be getting back to Chibi, now." He walked away.

"Well, see you next time." I said. "I'm Evowizard25, I remember it because of my intelligence." I got up and walked away.