for Something I Should Delete But Probably Won't8/27/2012 c1 Alactricity'sAss
Lol at the random cunt below me.
I'd like to see you write as AMAZING as Alactricity does.
If you can't do that, then go back to the brothel, you cocksucking bitch. Then go suck
a hobo's penis and swallow his cum.
Seriously.
Lol at the random cunt below me.
I'd like to see you write as AMAZING as Alactricity does.
If you can't do that, then go back to the brothel, you cocksucking bitch. Then go suck
a hobo's penis and swallow his cum.
Seriously.
6/27/2012 c1 RANDOMRANTING
You just continue bitching, like always, don't you bitch!
You just continue bitching, like always, don't you bitch!
3/14/2012 c25 
9MRS.waitforit.STARK
I have to say... your story was awesome right up until "chapter" 25. It was gory, it had zombies, it was original and the characters were AMAZINGLY written...
And yet you gave that up.
Apology not accepted.
9MRS.waitforit.STARKI have to say... your story was awesome right up until "chapter" 25. It was gory, it had zombies, it was original and the characters were AMAZINGLY written...
And yet you gave that up.
Apology not accepted.
11/23/2011 c1 RANDOMRANTING
I hate you, bitch!
I hate you, bitch!
11/17/2011 c25 5Just An Ordinary Girl. Maybe
I understand. I'm writing a SYOT story, and it's hard to come up with inspriation to write. To be honest, I'm writing for another fandom, on a different account. I loved your story while it lasted, but i understand you can't continue it. Best of luck for writing. Goodbye, for now. (I'll probably read your new stories if i reconize the fandom)
5Just An Ordinary Girl. MaybeI understand. I'm writing a SYOT story, and it's hard to come up with inspriation to write. To be honest, I'm writing for another fandom, on a different account. I loved your story while it lasted, but i understand you can't continue it. Best of luck for writing. Goodbye, for now. (I'll probably read your new stories if i reconize the fandom)
11/10/2011 c25 6Katie Nadine
That's really a shame... I really enjoyed the story! It was really good! Could you tell us the plotline so that we aren't lost handing?
6Katie NadineThat's really a shame... I really enjoyed the story! It was really good! Could you tell us the plotline so that we aren't lost handing?
6/2/2011 c24 5Just An Ordinary Girl. Maybe
Poor poor Ezra. I hate Drampton for doing that. Ezra didn't derserve it. Maya should kill him, or at least someone who has the guts to. Poor James. He's going crazy cuz i honestly don't believe Kimberly would do that.
5Just An Ordinary Girl. MaybePoor poor Ezra. I hate Drampton for doing that. Ezra didn't derserve it. Maya should kill him, or at least someone who has the guts to. Poor James. He's going crazy cuz i honestly don't believe Kimberly would do that.
5/26/2011 c24 kanye west
ooooooh you updated! it's 'lol what is this' or liesl's creator, just in case you didn't know.
was it the water that made jameson go crazy? or did the monkboons really pop out doing the congo? ._.
i was going to send liesl gauze, but i guess someone beat me to it! heheeheeh it was a bit selfish of her to bolt, but i guess you only think of yourself in the games. great chapter! n_n
ooooooh you updated! it's 'lol what is this' or liesl's creator, just in case you didn't know.
was it the water that made jameson go crazy? or did the monkboons really pop out doing the congo? ._.
i was going to send liesl gauze, but i guess someone beat me to it! heheeheeh it was a bit selfish of her to bolt, but i guess you only think of yourself in the games. great chapter! n_n
5/26/2011 c24 7Current Rainbow
That's okay. I totally understand with the updating-I haven't updated my SYOT in over a month (to anyone who may be in it and reads this, I am so so so sorry!) because of exams coming up and school in general. Plus there's times when I have just no motivation or good ideas. Anyways, back to the actual review :)
My face changed a couple of times during Jameson's POV. When Katalina's writhing around on the ground just stabbed I was like D: but then "It's conga time!" I was like xD
But I was sort of confused-did Kimberly actually stab Katalina? I'm just not sure what actually is going on.
Glad Weston and Seraphina are still okay! And yay, they got the sponsor gift I sent them!
Poor Ezra :( He seemed like a good guy too-and his death was pretty graphic. Drampton is one insane guy if you ask me. It'd be kind of awesome if Zombie Ezra came back and kicked his ass.
Also, to The Not So Goddess, I'm a Tobuscus fan too :) Peace off! Boop!
7Current RainbowThat's okay. I totally understand with the updating-I haven't updated my SYOT in over a month (to anyone who may be in it and reads this, I am so so so sorry!) because of exams coming up and school in general. Plus there's times when I have just no motivation or good ideas. Anyways, back to the actual review :)
My face changed a couple of times during Jameson's POV. When Katalina's writhing around on the ground just stabbed I was like D: but then "It's conga time!" I was like xD
But I was sort of confused-did Kimberly actually stab Katalina? I'm just not sure what actually is going on.
Glad Weston and Seraphina are still okay! And yay, they got the sponsor gift I sent them!
Poor Ezra :( He seemed like a good guy too-and his death was pretty graphic. Drampton is one insane guy if you ask me. It'd be kind of awesome if Zombie Ezra came back and kicked his ass.
Also, to The Not So Goddess, I'm a Tobuscus fan too :) Peace off! Boop!
5/26/2011 c24 6Katie Nadine
...SO MANY QUESTIONS!
How many points do I have? I want to give Liesl (?) A guaze. 20 Points.
Also-is KAtalina going to die? Seems like it. Did the water make her crazy? I think they are all hullucinating.
6Katie Nadine...SO MANY QUESTIONS!
How many points do I have? I want to give Liesl (?) A guaze. 20 Points.
Also-is KAtalina going to die? Seems like it. Did the water make her crazy? I think they are all hullucinating.
5/26/2011 c24 5OddCoupler222
Yay an update! It was wonderful. I'm so glad Serpahina is still alive and keeping a level head.
I'd like to sponsor D 3, I think I have about 60 points right now, and I'd like to send a medium amount of food and water for 40 points, as well as a small amount of medical supplies for 20. Am I allowed to do that, two things in one review? If not, just stick to the food.
5OddCoupler222Yay an update! It was wonderful. I'm so glad Serpahina is still alive and keeping a level head.
I'd like to sponsor D 3, I think I have about 60 points right now, and I'd like to send a medium amount of food and water for 40 points, as well as a small amount of medical supplies for 20. Am I allowed to do that, two things in one review? If not, just stick to the food.
5/26/2011 c24 3The Not So Goddess
I HATE THAT GUY FROM TWO! SOMEONE NEEDS TO KILL HIM! That was so not necessary! It makes me extremely mad!
WHAT HAPPENED TO JAMESON? Is he hallucinating from the sun? Or was it the water? But wouldn't the others be hallucinating too? I wonder what's going to happen to them.
Again a WONDERFUL chapter! It was worth the wait. I'm sorry the chapter gave you 'hell', but it was still good.
I will be awaiting the next chapter.
If you sneezed while reading this review, bless you.
-The Not So Goddess
3The Not So GoddessI HATE THAT GUY FROM TWO! SOMEONE NEEDS TO KILL HIM! That was so not necessary! It makes me extremely mad!
WHAT HAPPENED TO JAMESON? Is he hallucinating from the sun? Or was it the water? But wouldn't the others be hallucinating too? I wonder what's going to happen to them.
Again a WONDERFUL chapter! It was worth the wait. I'm sorry the chapter gave you 'hell', but it was still good.
I will be awaiting the next chapter.
If you sneezed while reading this review, bless you.
-The Not So Goddess
5/26/2011 c24 10Skia9
Don't worry about the wait! You did a nice job with this chapter and I can't wait for more... especially to see what's happening with Maren!
10Skia9Don't worry about the wait! You did a nice job with this chapter and I can't wait for more... especially to see what's happening with Maren!
5/26/2011 c24 3Crackpot Jones
whoa! I like how it moves from the crazy part with Hula monkboons and spaghettis to the sadistic death of Ezra. shivers.
Woot! you're alive and kicking! XD
3Crackpot Joneswhoa! I like how it moves from the crazy part with Hula monkboons and spaghettis to the sadistic death of Ezra. shivers.
Woot! you're alive and kicking! XD
5/25/2011 c24 Posiden
YAY! Another chapter is here :) I was worried about Weston at first but he seems fine now. I'm not sure if Katalina has actually been stabbed, or if its more illusion though. Poor ezra aswell, I'm thinking this will make her a vicous zombie...
YAY! Another chapter is here :) I was worried about Weston at first but he seems fine now. I'm not sure if Katalina has actually been stabbed, or if its more illusion though. Poor ezra aswell, I'm thinking this will make her a vicous zombie...