for Something I Should Delete But Probably Won't5/21/2011 c12 Posiden
Mainly reviewing to say, I'm still checking up on this every now and then, and even if you think no-one else is, I'm sure there are others. I'm glad to hear that you will be continuing, because it is the best SOYT I've ever read, and I've read a few, and I think that is reflected by the amount of reviews. I'm excitedly awaiting the next chapter :)
Mainly reviewing to say, I'm still checking up on this every now and then, and even if you think no-one else is, I'm sure there are others. I'm glad to hear that you will be continuing, because it is the best SOYT I've ever read, and I've read a few, and I think that is reflected by the amount of reviews. I'm excitedly awaiting the next chapter :)
5/1/2011 c23 
7Current Rainbow
Yay Serephina and Weston! Yay 200+ reviews! Can I get the two of them some food and water worth 40 points? I think I have enough to, so that'd be great.
7Current RainbowYay Serephina and Weston! Yay 200+ reviews! Can I get the two of them some food and water worth 40 points? I think I have enough to, so that'd be great.
4/29/2011 c19 Multifan101
I reviewed 2 times after this chapter so I have thirty points, right? Ok(If i do have thirty points) I want gauze for Maya. She'll need both the Gauze and Painkillers, espically since at least two inches of her skin are gone (Thanks to Scene).
I reviewed 2 times after this chapter so I have thirty points, right? Ok(If i do have thirty points) I want gauze for Maya. She'll need both the Gauze and Painkillers, espically since at least two inches of her skin are gone (Thanks to Scene).
4/29/2011 c23 3Waterbending Master Mackenzie
Really great chapter, I loved the part at the end with Ava and Ant, so sweet!
3Waterbending Master MackenzieReally great chapter, I loved the part at the end with Ava and Ant, so sweet!
4/29/2011 c23 3The Not So Goddess
Again an awesome chapter. (clap) The zombies sound positively repulsive! And what to know the scary part? I had a really scary dream about zombies last night! That's just weird. Update soon!
3The Not So GoddessAgain an awesome chapter. (clap) The zombies sound positively repulsive! And what to know the scary part? I had a really scary dream about zombies last night! That's just weird. Update soon!
4/29/2011 c23 Posiden
Nice chapter, It seems to be that the Zombies are not placed rondomly, but near people they had a connection with, I wonder who the second Zombie Maya met is... I feel a little sorry for Toris and Roland having to eat the lizard, but more sorry for 3 with no food, hopefully the matches will come in useful. This was one of my favourite chapers so far :)
Nice chapter, It seems to be that the Zombies are not placed rondomly, but near people they had a connection with, I wonder who the second Zombie Maya met is... I feel a little sorry for Toris and Roland having to eat the lizard, but more sorry for 3 with no food, hopefully the matches will come in useful. This was one of my favourite chapers so far :)
4/28/2011 c23 5Just An Ordinary Girl. Maybe
Don't die Maya! You're strong. Come on Ava! You can stop Ant! Agh! I love this chapter! Scene you meanie. Eating Maya's skin like that. Bad.
5Just An Ordinary Girl. MaybeDon't die Maya! You're strong. Come on Ava! You can stop Ant! Agh! I love this chapter! Scene you meanie. Eating Maya's skin like that. Bad.
4/28/2011 c23 3Crackpot Jones
Awww. Ava and Ant. Weird but cute :p yay warm inspiring capitol bread!
Hmm, are all the zombies like Ant(obeys orders) or does he just have memories of Ava?...wait if zombies have memories, then they can think... I dont know whether thats good. :p
No deaths in this chapter but maya seems to be in trouble. Hm, how can you kill zombies? I only know 1 way. Aim for the head. Hopefully that rule applies to capitol brand zombies.
With this i'll get 10 pts plus the 30 bonus points :D! Now..should i get a leash for ant? .
3Crackpot JonesAwww. Ava and Ant. Weird but cute :p yay warm inspiring capitol bread!
Hmm, are all the zombies like Ant(obeys orders) or does he just have memories of Ava?...wait if zombies have memories, then they can think... I dont know whether thats good. :p
No deaths in this chapter but maya seems to be in trouble. Hm, how can you kill zombies? I only know 1 way. Aim for the head. Hopefully that rule applies to capitol brand zombies.
With this i'll get 10 pts plus the 30 bonus points :D! Now..should i get a leash for ant? .
4/28/2011 c23 kanye west
I didn't realize that Steve wasn't dead until after I published my review. For some reason, I skipped over his name in the tribute list. Maybe he is forgettable. :c I also realized that Skippy wasn't dead, just **crippled**. Sorry, I just needed to clarify this, I felt pretty stupid afterwards! blargh ._.
I like Seraphina's character. She reminds me of Wiress, a bit. I also loved the bit about Scene eating Maya's flesh, ironic. Toris and Roland's characters are my favorite after my own, so I'll probably end sponsoring them if she dies. ;_;
Ava and Ant are cute, I guess. An owner-pet relationship, ehehehehaheheahae.
I didn't realize that Steve wasn't dead until after I published my review. For some reason, I skipped over his name in the tribute list. Maybe he is forgettable. :c I also realized that Skippy wasn't dead, just **crippled**. Sorry, I just needed to clarify this, I felt pretty stupid afterwards! blargh ._.
I like Seraphina's character. She reminds me of Wiress, a bit. I also loved the bit about Scene eating Maya's flesh, ironic. Toris and Roland's characters are my favorite after my own, so I'll probably end sponsoring them if she dies. ;_;
Ava and Ant are cute, I guess. An owner-pet relationship, ehehehehaheheahae.
4/28/2011 c23 6amixdeuxgirl
DUDEE. Freaky. Aahhh! Shudders. The Ant thing is actually kind of... Cute? Weird, but kind of cute...
I bet they can "die" by being lit on fire. ._.
O.o
~Amixdeu
6amixdeuxgirlDUDEE. Freaky. Aahhh! Shudders. The Ant thing is actually kind of... Cute? Weird, but kind of cute...
I bet they can "die" by being lit on fire. ._.
O.o
~Amixdeu
4/28/2011 c22 7Current Rainbow
Sorry I haven't reviewed, it's been a busy week for me. This chapter was good angle fairly intense especially with Steve and the Careers and the monkboons. Poor Kaaya-her death was disturbing, to say the least but really well written. Keep up the good work!
7Current RainbowSorry I haven't reviewed, it's been a busy week for me. This chapter was good angle fairly intense especially with Steve and the Careers and the monkboons. Poor Kaaya-her death was disturbing, to say the least but really well written. Keep up the good work!
4/27/2011 c18 3Crackpot Jones
Forgot to mention this in my other review.
I want to sponsor a small amount of food(a roll of bread) for Ava. She must be starving after not eating for a day.
Now i have 20 pts left
3Crackpot JonesForgot to mention this in my other review.
I want to sponsor a small amount of food(a roll of bread) for Ava. She must be starving after not eating for a day.
Now i have 20 pts left
4/26/2011 c22 5Just An Ordinary Girl. Maybe
7 down, 16 left to go. Amazing. I love every twist and turn. You really have a knack for this. 8 girls left and 9 boys left. Thrilling. Poor Kaaya. Gosh, i feel sorry for every tribute that dies. Softie, i guess.
5Just An Ordinary Girl. Maybe7 down, 16 left to go. Amazing. I love every twist and turn. You really have a knack for this. 8 girls left and 9 boys left. Thrilling. Poor Kaaya. Gosh, i feel sorry for every tribute that dies. Softie, i guess.
4/26/2011 c22 3The Not So Goddess
Oh gosh, you'd think that the deaths would seem less depressing and less gory. BUT IT DOESN'T! Kaaya's death really scared me out, thanks for the awesome nightmares I'm going to have! (; That must have been terrible to watch! I can't even stand reading it!
GREAT JOB!
UPDATE SOON!
3The Not So GoddessOh gosh, you'd think that the deaths would seem less depressing and less gory. BUT IT DOESN'T! Kaaya's death really scared me out, thanks for the awesome nightmares I'm going to have! (; That must have been terrible to watch! I can't even stand reading it!
GREAT JOB!
UPDATE SOON!