for Something I Should Delete But Probably Won't4/26/2011 c22 
3Crackpot Jones
Ah, guilt trip! Really sorry for the loss of sleep. :(
So, Ava got swept away by the tides n got tossed onto somewhere with less sand. I guess its safe to say she's in another area of the arena? At least she's still alive. Yay Ant got mentioned.
Hmm, the monkboons tore kaaya to bits. Yikes. Poor steve, with the gash in his stomach I dont think he'll be able to go far... Jenna and Crayne are cute. Something subtle amidst tension :p
Woot, day 2!
3Crackpot JonesAh, guilt trip! Really sorry for the loss of sleep. :(
So, Ava got swept away by the tides n got tossed onto somewhere with less sand. I guess its safe to say she's in another area of the arena? At least she's still alive. Yay Ant got mentioned.
Hmm, the monkboons tore kaaya to bits. Yikes. Poor steve, with the gash in his stomach I dont think he'll be able to go far... Jenna and Crayne are cute. Something subtle amidst tension :p
Woot, day 2!
4/23/2011 c21 1eeyorescastle
Again, I am so happy you chose my character! You made Ava just like she was suppost to be! :)
1eeyorescastleAgain, I am so happy you chose my character! You made Ava just like she was suppost to be! :)
4/23/2011 c21 Current Rainbow
Nice chapter! God, karma is a bitch. Aya and Triston were getting nowhere with their grudges against one another, but I didn't think they'd actually end up killing each other (I guess you could say Aya killed Triston, since he did trip over her dead body). And K-Team and Jameson don't look to be in a very good position either. Ah, monkies D:
I'm glad Weston and Serephina are still alive, as they're my favorites. I also want to know more about Steve, and what happened to Jenna and Crayne. Gosh, can't wait for the next chapter.
Also the tributes on your profile are amazing and adorable! What program did you use to make them? Weston looks just like I imagined him to x]
Nice chapter! God, karma is a bitch. Aya and Triston were getting nowhere with their grudges against one another, but I didn't think they'd actually end up killing each other (I guess you could say Aya killed Triston, since he did trip over her dead body). And K-Team and Jameson don't look to be in a very good position either. Ah, monkies D:
I'm glad Weston and Serephina are still alive, as they're my favorites. I also want to know more about Steve, and what happened to Jenna and Crayne. Gosh, can't wait for the next chapter.
Also the tributes on your profile are amazing and adorable! What program did you use to make them? Weston looks just like I imagined him to x]
4/23/2011 c19 Posiden
These were two good chapters, and I'm finding it easier to keep track of the characters. I was worried that you would be too attached to your characters to kill off to many to early on, and Rolands death was unfair (not saying you shouldn't have done it, I just feel sorry for him) and who shouted go anyway? Was it Maya?
I feel sorry for Kaaya, but she did ask for It by eating the fruit, and I think she's a goner.
Both of 3 are still alive, and without any injurys but without any assets either. I will have 20 points after this review so I will use them to get some matches for Weston (Zombies burn right?) which hopefully will be useful.
Looking forward to the Zombies :)
These were two good chapters, and I'm finding it easier to keep track of the characters. I was worried that you would be too attached to your characters to kill off to many to early on, and Rolands death was unfair (not saying you shouldn't have done it, I just feel sorry for him) and who shouted go anyway? Was it Maya?
I feel sorry for Kaaya, but she did ask for It by eating the fruit, and I think she's a goner.
Both of 3 are still alive, and without any injurys but without any assets either. I will have 20 points after this review so I will use them to get some matches for Weston (Zombies burn right?) which hopefully will be useful.
Looking forward to the Zombies :)
4/23/2011 c21 3Crackpot Jones
What? The careers are patrolling the beach? Noooooooo, Ava! :O:O
Another awesome chapter! And yeah I have to agree with Multifan101. Forget Suzanne Collins, your hunger games left me wanting more. MORE! XD
This chapter just proves revenge is a dangerous thing. Waiting to be back in the arena :P
Oh god, back to the Ava crisis. Can she swim? If you count this review, I'll have 30 points and that's not enough for a float :/
3Crackpot JonesWhat? The careers are patrolling the beach? Noooooooo, Ava! :O:O
Another awesome chapter! And yeah I have to agree with Multifan101. Forget Suzanne Collins, your hunger games left me wanting more. MORE! XD
This chapter just proves revenge is a dangerous thing. Waiting to be back in the arena :P
Oh god, back to the Ava crisis. Can she swim? If you count this review, I'll have 30 points and that's not enough for a float :/
4/23/2011 c21 6Katie Nadine
That was amazing! Haha, Jamesy isn't dead yet! Hoorah! This was awesome and I love it!
Karma is a bitch. (Known fact. Doesn't it suck?)
is a pack of monkeys. And every single one of them is looking directly at Kaaya. (If that wasn't so serious, I swear I'd burst out laughing)
No, cannibalism is illegal now. Darn. (Darn those things called rules! XD)
6Katie NadineThat was amazing! Haha, Jamesy isn't dead yet! Hoorah! This was awesome and I love it!
Karma is a bitch. (Known fact. Doesn't it suck?)
is a pack of monkeys. And every single one of them is looking directly at Kaaya. (If that wasn't so serious, I swear I'd burst out laughing)
No, cannibalism is illegal now. Darn. (Darn those things called rules! XD)
4/22/2011 c21 3The Not So Goddess
That was really good. When I saw Kimberly's pov I thought she was going to die, don't ask me why, I just did. Oh gosh what's going to happen with thoughs monkeys? Eepp! And the zombies come in the morning? They eat people don't they? Oh gosh this is going to be horrible! But very well written.
Can't wait for the next chapter!
3The Not So GoddessThat was really good. When I saw Kimberly's pov I thought she was going to die, don't ask me why, I just did. Oh gosh what's going to happen with thoughs monkeys? Eepp! And the zombies come in the morning? They eat people don't they? Oh gosh this is going to be horrible! But very well written.
Can't wait for the next chapter!
4/22/2011 c19 5Just An Ordinary Girl. Maybe
K not really sure how much points i have (Terrible at keeping numbers in my head, Sorry) so i'll get Small Medicine for Maya. Wait. Does i.e. mean you can only have one? Sorry, but i really don't know. If it only is just one then i'll take the tiny bottle of pain-killers.
5Just An Ordinary Girl. MaybeK not really sure how much points i have (Terrible at keeping numbers in my head, Sorry) so i'll get Small Medicine for Maya. Wait. Does i.e. mean you can only have one? Sorry, but i really don't know. If it only is just one then i'll take the tiny bottle of pain-killers.
4/22/2011 c21 Just An Ordinary Girl. Maybe
Tee Hee. 6 down, 17 left to go. Then the victor. Mmm, wonder who it's going to be. Anyway. Reading this is making me shiver. The Hunger Games didn't do that. Forget you not being Suzanne Collins because of your writing I can feel the thrill and you should have the zombies sing a song. Like Thriller. =)
Tee Hee. 6 down, 17 left to go. Then the victor. Mmm, wonder who it's going to be. Anyway. Reading this is making me shiver. The Hunger Games didn't do that. Forget you not being Suzanne Collins because of your writing I can feel the thrill and you should have the zombies sing a song. Like Thriller. =)
4/22/2011 c21 kanye west
aw i feel for toris and roland, they're both shy characters. i loved drampton's pov, so eager to kill, lol. i'm a bit indifferent about about triston and aya's death, except having aya still alive would've been interesting.
aw i feel for toris and roland, they're both shy characters. i loved drampton's pov, so eager to kill, lol. i'm a bit indifferent about about triston and aya's death, except having aya still alive would've been interesting.
4/21/2011 c20 Just An Ordinary Girl. Maybe
Oh. My. God. GREAT CHAPTER! And did Scene seeing Maya behind his eyelids mean he was still in love with her? 4 tributes down, 20 to go. And Maya killed Ant without even trying! I liked Ant but oh well he's dead. I feel so sorry for his creater.
Oh. My. God. GREAT CHAPTER! And did Scene seeing Maya behind his eyelids mean he was still in love with her? 4 tributes down, 20 to go. And Maya killed Ant without even trying! I liked Ant but oh well he's dead. I feel so sorry for his creater.