for Something I Should Delete But Probably Won't4/20/2011 c20 
4Radioactive Raven
Horay, Ezra you made it. And with an ally. A silent ally is better than no ally at all.
Good chapter!
4Radioactive RavenHoray, Ezra you made it. And with an ally. A silent ally is better than no ally at all.
Good chapter!
4/20/2011 c20 6Katie Nadine
NOOOOOO! NT THE GAMES! NO! *cries*
I really liked it! A little bit of cussing. Nice. :D
May I ask? What actually happened to Ant?
I went to bed around 5:59 this morning. The alarm went off at 6. (Sounds like something I'd Do)
Katty got eaten by a crocodile? Did she die? Also I caught a mistake:
Ava will head to the forest, too. She's much too wimpy to stay on the island or in the swamp, and she's from Twelve (Ava isn't from twelve)
6Katie NadineNOOOOOO! NT THE GAMES! NO! *cries*
I really liked it! A little bit of cussing. Nice. :D
May I ask? What actually happened to Ant?
I went to bed around 5:59 this morning. The alarm went off at 6. (Sounds like something I'd Do)
Katty got eaten by a crocodile? Did she die? Also I caught a mistake:
Ava will head to the forest, too. She's much too wimpy to stay on the island or in the swamp, and she's from Twelve (Ava isn't from twelve)
4/20/2011 c20 3Crackpot Jones
Aw man, sucks to be the 1st one dead ;(
Maya you..you.. you meanie! Lol XD
This chapter is win! Everything was like wow! Then omg! Then wow again lol. Im so going to get addicted to this :p
Aw, even Dahlia died. 11 has been wiped off the arena 4 good. I had a plan to sponsor her if i died :p
O thk god Ava made it! Poor Ava, now she's lost n alone. Its ok, ill be back as a zombie :p which raises an important question: am i just gonna be a rolling head zombie?
3Crackpot JonesAw man, sucks to be the 1st one dead ;(
Maya you..you.. you meanie! Lol XD
This chapter is win! Everything was like wow! Then omg! Then wow again lol. Im so going to get addicted to this :p
Aw, even Dahlia died. 11 has been wiped off the arena 4 good. I had a plan to sponsor her if i died :p
O thk god Ava made it! Poor Ava, now she's lost n alone. Its ok, ill be back as a zombie :p which raises an important question: am i just gonna be a rolling head zombie?
4/20/2011 c20 3Waterbending Master Mackenzie
Awww, Katara's dead...now I'm sad. But ah well. I like how much detail you've put in so far.
3Waterbending Master MackenzieAwww, Katara's dead...now I'm sad. But ah well. I like how much detail you've put in so far.
4/20/2011 c20 3The Not So Goddess
Omigosh! That was intense! I liked how you had them die in their own pov. It made it all the more scary. Seriously might have nightmares. (shudder) I can't believe ant died! Aw I loved him! My heart us aching right now! I feel so bad for ava! Could she possible go back into her original alliance group? Probably no, right? Well I'm glade Kimberly and James didn't die. I'm glade the tratior died, but I can imagine how horrifing it was for the rest of the group.
I have one question. Isn't Kimberly from twelve, you kept on saying another girl ava, I think?
I loved the picture of Kimberly! How did you do that?
Love it. UPDATE SOON!
3The Not So GoddessOmigosh! That was intense! I liked how you had them die in their own pov. It made it all the more scary. Seriously might have nightmares. (shudder) I can't believe ant died! Aw I loved him! My heart us aching right now! I feel so bad for ava! Could she possible go back into her original alliance group? Probably no, right? Well I'm glade Kimberly and James didn't die. I'm glade the tratior died, but I can imagine how horrifing it was for the rest of the group.
I have one question. Isn't Kimberly from twelve, you kept on saying another girl ava, I think?
I loved the picture of Kimberly! How did you do that?
Love it. UPDATE SOON!
4/20/2011 c20 Pleba
Great chapter! Many tributes dying off already. Wonder what happened to Katalina.
I wonder how many points it'd take for a wig. I'd like to send that to Aya. XD
Great chapter! Many tributes dying off already. Wonder what happened to Katalina.
I wonder how many points it'd take for a wig. I'd like to send that to Aya. XD
4/19/2011 c20 5OddCoupler222
Oh good, Seraphina is still alive. Though I liked Scene, as he was created by yours truly, his death was well written, and it made me sad.
Update soon!
5OddCoupler222Oh good, Seraphina is still alive. Though I liked Scene, as he was created by yours truly, his death was well written, and it made me sad.
Update soon!
4/19/2011 c20 Penguins.Are.Cool
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SCENE DIED? Good .
That's just sad, really. Of all people who died, I really want him alive the most... because I kinda like how immature he is with Maya. T w T
And his death was really unexpected. Like, TOTALLY unexpected.
But, well, the whole thing is so well-written. REALLY well-written. Especially Ant's part. Just, whoa.
Awesome chapter, once again! And, I assume that Katalina didn't die. Phew, I like her. XD
It's your fault, really. I'm liking pretty much everyone in this fanfic. XD
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SCENE DIED? Good .
That's just sad, really. Of all people who died, I really want him alive the most... because I kinda like how immature he is with Maya. T w T
And his death was really unexpected. Like, TOTALLY unexpected.
But, well, the whole thing is so well-written. REALLY well-written. Especially Ant's part. Just, whoa.
Awesome chapter, once again! And, I assume that Katalina didn't die. Phew, I like her. XD
It's your fault, really. I'm liking pretty much everyone in this fanfic. XD
4/19/2011 c20 Taryn Ravensong
*relieved sigh* Whoo, Katalina made it. You scared me there!
*relieved sigh* Whoo, Katalina made it. You scared me there!
4/19/2011 c20 6amixdeuxgirl
Oh my god... That's just so...
DUDE. Ant? It gave me total chills, and I almost screamed too (you see the ffect your story has on me? xD)
I cannot wait for more.
~Amixdeu
6amixdeuxgirlOh my god... That's just so...
DUDE. Ant? It gave me total chills, and I almost screamed too (you see the ffect your story has on me? xD)
I cannot wait for more.
~Amixdeu
4/19/2011 c20 7Current Rainbow
Wow, you had me on edge the entire chapter. I feel bad for all the killed tributes-I honestly didn't expect West to make it but of course I'm glad he did. If I was in the arena I would have totally pulled an "Ant" and stepped off at go too. Poor guy. And Dahlia too. And I feel oddly bad for Scene. Even though he was a jerk.
By the way, this is Hollisinc, just changed username. :)
7Current RainbowWow, you had me on edge the entire chapter. I feel bad for all the killed tributes-I honestly didn't expect West to make it but of course I'm glad he did. If I was in the arena I would have totally pulled an "Ant" and stepped off at go too. Poor guy. And Dahlia too. And I feel oddly bad for Scene. Even though he was a jerk.
By the way, this is Hollisinc, just changed username. :)
4/19/2011 c20 kanye west
oh gosh *_* i'm just glad liesl survived. she's turning into a sass-master, lol. i feel bad for dahlia, she was a cute character! i'm excited for the rest~
oh gosh *_* i'm just glad liesl survived. she's turning into a sass-master, lol. i feel bad for dahlia, she was a cute character! i'm excited for the rest~