for Bubbles and Ink8/4/2011 c1
5trisha-elric-2
The firemans lift is arms and legs like strached out infront of the person carrying and the rest of the body on the shoulders. It's complicated to explain but it just really confused me so thats incase u wanna use firemans lift in any other fanfic. But this is Amazing. Read it four times. Thought it was about time i reviewed... It is really funny and u are really. Good. I mean, you write exactly the kind of things they would say :D
5trisha-elric-2The firemans lift is arms and legs like strached out infront of the person carrying and the rest of the body on the shoulders. It's complicated to explain but it just really confused me so thats incase u wanna use firemans lift in any other fanfic. But this is Amazing. Read it four times. Thought it was about time i reviewed... It is really funny and u are really. Good. I mean, you write exactly the kind of things they would say :D
3/24/2011 c1
33Faith Valconbridge
I am simply in love this this and have no idea why you have such a small responce from it. It was very sweet, very in character (which is hard to come by) and very sexy!
My fav bit-
"I need to mop the floor now." He huffed.
"I'm sorry?" Usagi said.
"That's alright, I don't mind." The brunette reassured him.
"No" the gray haired man cut in "I mean I had water in my ears, I didn't catch what you said."
Misaki sighed "Never mind."
That kept me giggling for while! The imagery you portrayed was amazing, it was really funny. I also loved the smutty scenes, very sexy! I am so surprised this is your first junjou fanfic, makes me smile theres another goos author out there who can actually write in canon! (no offence intended to anyone else) **sweatdrop**
Anyway, I hope to see more junjou from you in the future!
33Faith ValconbridgeI am simply in love this this and have no idea why you have such a small responce from it. It was very sweet, very in character (which is hard to come by) and very sexy!
My fav bit-
"I need to mop the floor now." He huffed.
"I'm sorry?" Usagi said.
"That's alright, I don't mind." The brunette reassured him.
"No" the gray haired man cut in "I mean I had water in my ears, I didn't catch what you said."
Misaki sighed "Never mind."
That kept me giggling for while! The imagery you portrayed was amazing, it was really funny. I also loved the smutty scenes, very sexy! I am so surprised this is your first junjou fanfic, makes me smile theres another goos author out there who can actually write in canon! (no offence intended to anyone else) **sweatdrop**
Anyway, I hope to see more junjou from you in the future!
3/22/2011 c1
12FreshPrinceLover
Hahaha! SMEXY!
Love it! Though I wanted them to have sexy time in the bath ;P
Great story!
12FreshPrinceLoverHahaha! SMEXY!
Love it! Though I wanted them to have sexy time in the bath ;P
Great story!
3/21/2011 c1 Thousand Paper Cranes
Nawwww that was so adorable! Love the bathroom scene! Really really amazing story! loved it :D
Nawwww that was so adorable! Love the bathroom scene! Really really amazing story! loved it :D
